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Reflection
“I had an amazing time tonight.”
“Me too Tina, me too.”
“So….”
“So…I’ll see you on Saturday?”
“Saturday.”
And then she did that thing she does that makes time halt and the whole world fall away. She stepped to my body, not quite touching, but close enough to feel her heat. She lifted my chin with a single finger before running her thumb over my lips. I wanted to lick it and suck it into my mouth. Finally, never breaking my gaze, she leaned forward and place her lips on mine. The last time was so sudden and fast I barely had time to register it. But this time I drank in ever single second. Her lips were so soft and moist, not like any man’s I had ever kissed. I could feel them part and the edge of her tongue sweeping across, asking for permission that I willingly granted. Her tongue felt strong in mouth, leading me, guiding me, but gentle at the same time, never too much. It skimmed along, exploring ever crevice, leaving no spot untouched. It coaxed my tongue into her mouth and I had moaned at that first exquisite taste. I licked her teeth, her gums; my hand slid to her waist without my knowledge, I was too caught up in her moist heat.
When she pulled away, I unconsciously followed, no wanting the moment to end. She cradled my face in both her hands waiting for my eyes to open. She giggled softly at what I assume was the slightly dazed look on my face. Her whispered words floated softly to my ears.
“Goodnight T.”
I was unable to speak or even move. A shudder ran through my body as she pulled away completely, her fingertips sliding along my cheeks. I stood rooted to the spot watching her stride purposely to her car. It wasn’t until she pulled away from the curb, that I was able to finally go inside. I didn’t sleep at all that night, playing the kiss over and over again in my head.
The following weeks were better than anything I could have ever imagined. We spent every spare moment together. We’d go for dinner or go dancing or to the movies. It didn’t matter as long as we were together. I had never felt more comfortable in my life. I told her things I’d never told anyone before and I knew they’d be safe with her. And she told be things too, often over the phone when I couldn’t look into her eyes. For all her confidence and bravado, she’d shown me a softer, more vulnerable side I was learning to love even more. Probably because I quickly discovered it wasn’t something she had shared with many people before.
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(45 votes, average: 3.69 out of 5)
Simplicity is best when it comes to showing the one you love just how much they mean to you. This was a beautiful beginning and I do hope you post again very soon.
This was an entoxicating buildup to what I hope is a very loving first time for them both. Tina’s fist time w/ a woman, Bette’s first time giving herself to her partner, her lover, her T.
That was perfect. Loved it.
There is a bonus for those that wait. That was beautiful.. thanks
That was great. Thanks and please more.
wow…they are ready then …bring it on..lol..great chapter post real soon please
That was truly amazing I think, that is one of the best chapters I have read
Very moving, your writing is excellent and I’m so glad I took the time to read this! Now I have to go back and read your other work. Thank you!
OMG! That was possibly the most romantic thing I’ve encountered in quite some time! I loved that insight into Tina’s thoughts on Bette and the emotions leading up to their first time…WOW! I loved it! Thank you for sharing!
Great job! Thanks for writing.
I’m a new reader of yours but already a die-hard fan. Absolutely gorgeous prose. Thanks for sharing.
Damn that was so fucking beautiful story and so amazing about these 2, love them. What a lovely story, love it. Can’t wait to see the next one, post soon please. Thanks!
What a gift this is. I so love your story.
Great job! I love I just love the way you are able to capture the characters. I have not seen a storyline like this one in awhile. Please continue…I want to see what happens. Two thumbs up for you!
holy hot dayum. wow . i mean shit. that was just excellent. now i can go to bed and think on that piece of heaven. thanks.
Very sweet, as well as hot. Thanks for sharing this.
beautiful… please post soon.
hot digity dayum, your words are simply breathtaking….
wow..you’re great! felt so real. :) post soon!
now that was beautiful… loved every word… and i can’t wait for the next chapter
OMG..this is beautiful. thank you. please post soon
this is truly a beautiful story. please come back soon. thanks.
OMFG BEAUTIFUL.
Post soon!!! I’m loving this.
WHOA! Wonderful story I LOve it Please continue post soon Thanks!
Simply beautiful…
That was truly one of the much touching Bette & Tina’s first time I ever read in this site and I’m feeling pretty moved – especially reading your wonderful last lines. That’s so right indeed : true love is more luminous than hundred candles and sweetest than rose petals ! When there’s such a tenderness surrounding a first time, poetry is everywhere…
And candlelights shine in eyes and hearts.
Thank you for this marvellous piece of pure beauty. I simply adored it !
… and cannot wait for the next update, of course…