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Regret chpt. 1
Riley: It’s 2! Our plane leaves in an hour!!!
I groan and turn around on the bed and she tumbles down with me.
Riley: We’re gonna be late!!
She gets off me, I get up and we head outside to wait for the cab.
On our way to the airport Russell (Simmons) calls
RS: hey DJ Suga you ready to go back to LA?
C: yes sir!
RS Aight then tell ma girl Riley she better hook ya up with some good gigs
C yup!
RS Take care we’ll mis you
C’ alright thanks
I hang up and Riley is staring at me. Her eyes are half hidden under her short blond hair and she’s looking up at me with her blue eyes, and I know what she’s gonna ask
Riley: So did you think about my question
Carmen: Riley…I’m just…I just don’t want a relationship at the moment
She sighs and we get to the airport
SHANE
Shane: Alice!!
Alice: hey Yoda!
Shane hey listen, can you get Shay from school today? His soccer practice ends at 5, and I’ve got to be at WAX until 11 for their anniversary.
Alice: of course! I love that lil man!
CARMEN
We’re in the airport I’m looking around and can’t see any sign or either Dana or Alice. Until I see Dana bored out of her mind, slowly drinking a Slurpie.
I walk up to her with Riley following silently behind, she hasn’t said anything since the cab ride.
Dana: Oh My God Carmen!! You Look Great
Carmen: Thanks! So do you, Jeez are you training harder?
Alice: Wow Carmen! You Lookin Hot!!
Alice shows up with a dark haired boy eating French fries.
Alice: Who’s This?
Carmen: This is Riley she’s my manager
Riley waves and gives a half smile, still hurn from earlier
ALICE
We get to the car We’re all talking about Carmen and New York, as Shay walks along eating his fries, and I can see Carmen looking at him and I wonder what she’s thinking
Alice: Shh – I was going to say shay, but I’m sure that would hurt Carmen -…hey buddy do you mind going in the back seat with Riley and Carmen
Shay: no, can I play my psp?
Alice: sure
CARMEN
I’m sitting next to the dark haired boy and he looks just like her, but its impossible for him to be her son
He looks up at me and then frowns
Shay: Hey Alice can I ask you something?
Alice: Shoot
Shay: why does Shane cry at night?
TBC
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Hey Guys how do you like it so far? is it interesting?
It’s my first Fan Fic
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(29 votes, average: 3.79 out of 5)
I like it. I love these tentions and emotions. Riley can come with drama between Shane ans Carmen more.Thank for the update.
So Shane sort of wrote herself a script before calling Carmen… how adorable is that? Carmen should know better than to mix business and pleasure. Luckily we have Shay to say whatever crosses his mind with such perfect timing ;)
doing a great job..really liking this
i love it so far. i see alot of mystery ahead lol. but def. continue!
Yeah sharmen fic. I like your idea. Please keep going.
I am very interested =). Post soon?
just go on,all right? i like it very much