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“Look I don’t know what kind of game you are playing here but I just booked these flights a little over two hours ago with my travel agent. I paid top dollar for the pleasure of being assured two coach seats for myself and Ms. Kennard here. We packed and came promptly to the airport. In that time neither one of us stopped to call and cancel. WE HAVE NOT CANCELLED OUR TRAVEL ARRANGEMENTS. Now that we have cleared that issue up I will give you exactly two minutes to figure this fucking thing out or your manager will be explaining to your next of kin what happens when you get high and mighty with a customer.”
The ticket agent didn’t realize that Bette was just getting wound up. “Ms. Porter I can’t explain how you cancelled your tickets but clearly you have. Since this was an action taken by you there is nothing more to be figured out on my part. We have seats available tomorrow on the 12:55 flight. Do you want them or not?”
The audacity of this woman left Bette speechless for just a moment. It was in that moment that Tina stepped forward.
“Listen Bitch!! I don’t care who did or didn’t do what. All I know is that we need to get to our little girl and right now YOU are standing in our way. Now YOU need to get the two of us seats on the next flight out and you need to do it right NOW!”
Shane could hear Bette and Tina before she saw them. Actually everyone in the ticketing area could hear the two of them. Alice still one step ahead of Shane moved forward undaunted. Shane for her part slowed down just a tad not wanting to be in the line of fire when Bette grasped what all has taken place.
Alice ran straight to Bette and Tina positioning her self between them. Promptly grabbing an elbow from each of them she began to lead them away from the ticket counter. “Bette … Tina thank God I’ve caught you.” Turning her head to the ticket agent, “Thanks I’ll take it from here.”
Bette allowed Alice to lead for two steps then she stopped dead in her tracks. “Alice what the FUCK are you doing we weren’t done with her yet.”
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AWW man, talk about a tease just at the good stuff
I am dying for the rest of it. But when you say “finish it up in the next chapter” my heart stops. Please don’t end the story there. There has to be a payoff for this (lovely and gripping) roller coaster ride that you have taken us on. I want that payoff in some warm descriptions of family time and talk. Thanks.
I would not want to be Alice right now. Good thing Shane is there! Jwet I was surprised when you said you were going to end this in the next chapter. I hope that is going to be one very long chapter or possibly you have a sequel planned? This is a great story!
Alice may need a parachute to escape Bette’s wrath! I’m hoping we’ve all misunderstood and there is not just one chapter left. What a great story this has been… hope you are continuing.
Alice may be pushed out of the plane when they get airborne. This is going to be a long ride to Angie. PPS
if this is what it takes to get baby A home then go for it, hope bette will see this in the long run. Great story again!
Great update!! Looking forward to more.
I’d like to “kill” you for leaving us in such a tantilizing spot! Is it wrong of me to hope that you are stuck in an aiport again soon so we can get another post? Looking forward to seeing you in NYC on the 2nd!
I know that Bette and Tina will both be PISSED off about the reporter, but they need to focus on the most important thing *Getting to Angelica* I am personally not a fan of flying in small planes (commuters). I have had to fly in on while in Europe and between Indiana and Chicago (Not good during the winter months). Thanks for posting and PPS :o).
Angelica is still hanging on for dear life. I believe that if Bette could do it she would put Alice up on that tower at this moment instead of Angelica. Of course Alice is just trying to help and I hope that Bette and Tina will realize that later on. Be safe while on the road.
Alice is dead meat now. Loving this story. PPS
Jwet, how delightful to read another chapter. I protest if you’re seriously considering ending soon. I trust you’ll develop the natural rhythm of the story as you always do. Take care of yourself.
alice, alice, she’s in big trouble…who’s getting to angie? coast guard?
This story is so enjoyable, even when there’s a crisis raging. I love when Alice calls Angel her “earthchild”. Looking forward to the next chapter and I too am hoping it’s not the last.
LOL, Alice is about to undergo the wrath of Hurricane Porter!
What a way to come home from vacation! Get typing woman!! LOL…thanks for the update. I’m hooked!
This is so good!
alice to the rescue or alice to be throttled…funny…u r travelling again…swap u jobs anytime…
Hey Jwet, As ever you astound me. Just love the race against the clock as Alice and Shane tried to find Bette and Tina. then the move tot he private charter. This was a much needed injection of humor into an intense drama. Bette change from love to frustation was brilliantly drawn out. Balancing this against Angelica’s plight was wonderful. Now I really can’t wait until you complete the next chapter. You have such a talent with dialogue and storytelling. Thank you for sharing it with me. Your Loyal Fan.
LOL! Excellent! Alice is dead meat. Bette and the travel agent was so funny
Hee. I like the name of Bette’s travel agent! I don’t think Bette will kill Alice (you’ve always been kind ot Alice – hope it continues). However, if I were Bette, I’d kill her travel agent to let someone cancel her flight! Hurry, hurry, please post soon, my fingers are tired gripping the edge of my chair. Thanks for sharing your story.
Don’t get mad, just say “no comment”. But of course, I just commented.
oh my god. cant wait to read the rest of this. someones gonna get hurt. thanks.