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Bette was just turning to re-engage the agent when Alice spoke again. “Oh I’d say you’re done especially if we’re going to catch the charter flight I’ve got set up for you guys.” Alice says casually.
Bette was totally caught off guard by Alice’s claim. She was ready to launch herself into the ticket agent when Alice’s last words stopped her cold. Turning back to Alice, “Charter? You got us a charter?” A look of surprise and than elation crossing her face as the understanding sunk in.
“Alice really you got us a charter?” Tina seconds. Seeing the calm, smug look Alice was sporting. “Oh my God Alice I love you.” Tina says while jumping at Alice quickly engulfing her in a large hug.
Bette quickly joined Tina in the hug of Alice. “Alice … I love you too.”
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Angelica shivering and cold watched the last of the sun’s rays disappear. Now she felt alone and cut off from the world. Gone was everything she knew and loved. She felt alone and was beginning to believe that no one knew where she was. The fear of being alone was only surpassed by the fear of never seeing her Moms again. With thoughts of her Mothers running through her mind, Angelica closed her eyes tight. Summoning up visions, pictures of each of her Moms in her minds eye, Angelica played these pictures. They comforted her, the sights and sounds of her memories giving her courage. Angelica was so lost in her thoughts that she didn’t hear the faint sound coming from the horizon.
WOP WOP WOP
WOP WOP WOP
WOP WOP WOP
WOP WOP WOP
WOP WOP WOP
WOP WOP WOP
WOP WOP WOP
With each twirl of the blades the percussion of air was sent out along with the noise. This was the sound in the horizon that at first was just a buzz in Angelica’s ears. At first it was nothing loud enough to distract her from her thoughts and prayers for her Mothers to come, to come and get her now. But this buzz was persistent and soon its crescendo increased demanding Angelica’s attention. With the slightest of movement she tried to turn behind her to see what the noise could be.
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(37 votes, average: 3.81 out of 5)
AWW man, talk about a tease just at the good stuff
I am dying for the rest of it. But when you say “finish it up in the next chapter” my heart stops. Please don’t end the story there. There has to be a payoff for this (lovely and gripping) roller coaster ride that you have taken us on. I want that payoff in some warm descriptions of family time and talk. Thanks.
I would not want to be Alice right now. Good thing Shane is there! Jwet I was surprised when you said you were going to end this in the next chapter. I hope that is going to be one very long chapter or possibly you have a sequel planned? This is a great story!
Alice may need a parachute to escape Bette’s wrath! I’m hoping we’ve all misunderstood and there is not just one chapter left. What a great story this has been… hope you are continuing.
Alice may be pushed out of the plane when they get airborne. This is going to be a long ride to Angie. PPS
if this is what it takes to get baby A home then go for it, hope bette will see this in the long run. Great story again!
Great update!! Looking forward to more.
I’d like to “kill” you for leaving us in such a tantilizing spot! Is it wrong of me to hope that you are stuck in an aiport again soon so we can get another post? Looking forward to seeing you in NYC on the 2nd!
I know that Bette and Tina will both be PISSED off about the reporter, but they need to focus on the most important thing *Getting to Angelica* I am personally not a fan of flying in small planes (commuters). I have had to fly in on while in Europe and between Indiana and Chicago (Not good during the winter months). Thanks for posting and PPS :o).
Angelica is still hanging on for dear life. I believe that if Bette could do it she would put Alice up on that tower at this moment instead of Angelica. Of course Alice is just trying to help and I hope that Bette and Tina will realize that later on. Be safe while on the road.
Alice is dead meat now. Loving this story. PPS
Jwet, how delightful to read another chapter. I protest if you’re seriously considering ending soon. I trust you’ll develop the natural rhythm of the story as you always do. Take care of yourself.
alice, alice, she’s in big trouble…who’s getting to angie? coast guard?
This story is so enjoyable, even when there’s a crisis raging. I love when Alice calls Angel her “earthchild”. Looking forward to the next chapter and I too am hoping it’s not the last.
LOL, Alice is about to undergo the wrath of Hurricane Porter!
What a way to come home from vacation! Get typing woman!! LOL…thanks for the update. I’m hooked!
This is so good!
alice to the rescue or alice to be throttled…funny…u r travelling again…swap u jobs anytime…
Hey Jwet, As ever you astound me. Just love the race against the clock as Alice and Shane tried to find Bette and Tina. then the move tot he private charter. This was a much needed injection of humor into an intense drama. Bette change from love to frustation was brilliantly drawn out. Balancing this against Angelica’s plight was wonderful. Now I really can’t wait until you complete the next chapter. You have such a talent with dialogue and storytelling. Thank you for sharing it with me. Your Loyal Fan.
LOL! Excellent! Alice is dead meat. Bette and the travel agent was so funny
Hee. I like the name of Bette’s travel agent! I don’t think Bette will kill Alice (you’ve always been kind ot Alice – hope it continues). However, if I were Bette, I’d kill her travel agent to let someone cancel her flight! Hurry, hurry, please post soon, my fingers are tired gripping the edge of my chair. Thanks for sharing your story.
Don’t get mad, just say “no comment”. But of course, I just commented.
oh my god. cant wait to read the rest of this. someones gonna get hurt. thanks.