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“I suppose then, I shall see you at the Fall collection festival as per it’s usual time and date,” Franklin said but did not wait for the answer. He stopped only momentarily to hear Bette call after him.
“You shall.”
It was the middle of the day. Shane thought about all the other things she usually found herself doing in the middle of the day. For now, however, she was laying on a bed that wasn’t hers, reading a magazine that Will had lent her, and pondering how it could of only been a few days since she was admitted to this boring white shoebox.
The nurse tapped on the door but obviously wasn’t waiting for a reply. She handed a cup to Will and then tossed one over to Shane’s bed. Shane looked at it funny and crumpled her magazine. “Wha” she started. Will picked up the cup and started for the door.
“They like to check, to make sure you’re not smuggling anything in,” she explained. Shane rolled her eyes and picked up the cup while following Will out the door.
“Shouldn’t our word be enough,” Shane asked as they walked down the corridor.
“Very charming but I don’t think they think so romantically as you, cowboy,” Will responded. Shane laughed.
“Cowboy?” she asked staring at the cup.
“Yeah, cowboy. Walking in all swaggery like you don’t give a damn but you’d give anything to be with the bar maid down the street. Thing is she don’t want you cause all you got is an old horse and” her resembling a narrative from an old western ” the looooooooooooooooone praire,” she continued. She turned and faced Shane. “It suits you.” Will dissapeared into the swinging door with a little skirted lady on the front.
“Cowboy,” Shane muttered stepping through the swinging door as well.
Jenny walked hasitly outside the planet. She had waved goodbye to Kit after she had told her about Bette’s invite to come to the Fall Collection party. As she walked out, however, she nearly ran smack into Carmen hand in hand with a very familiar looking girl. “Oh hey Jenny,” Carmen laughed.
“Hi Carmen,” Jenny returned now staring at the woman beside Carmen. She was tall, thin, had short brown hair and a very brooding look.
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fabulous story, you’re a really good author!You seem to know the characters very well! I must say I was suprised Carmen doesn’t want to be with Shane anymore ,please don’t let it be that way , they are perfect for one another ,pretty please:)
This is a really impressive story and one that i will definitely be checking for updates. I love how detailed it is and how much thought that has obviously been put into making the story what it is. I thought it was hilarious when Blaine, a Shane look-alike was introduced as Carmen’s new girlfiend.I mean even the name is similar, classic! Anyhow, I hope that Carmen changes her mind, cause she’s Shane’s girl not Blaine’s.
i like the style of writing…cool! keep posting..!!
This is BRILLIANT! Totally fresh, original and witty . I loved that Carmen’s new g/f looks like Shane , it totally cracked me up .I hope you update soon because it’s a really great fic and let Carmen and Shane make up , they are soul mates . Carmen can date Blaine but still desire to be with Shane. AWESOME JOB!!5 STARS. update soon,please…..
*juicy* dare I request more???? This was good…:-)
Im enjoying this. I really like Will and how she helped Shane at the end. Hope you keep going with this.
This is a great story:) I hope that this isn’t the end for Shane&Carmen, please , let Carmen give her another chance. She’s dating a Shane lookalike , she obviously wants her!
This was great! You have obviously spent a lot of time developing this story, and is definitely worth it!!
I told u i was going to comment and here i am LOL. It’s a really good story and i really like it. I cant wait for ur next post so hurry up with that editing!! POST SOON!! :)