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“Yes, garcon, everything is fine. Just woman trouble you know,” Helena explained as the two of them sat back down.
“Unless you want mushy cornflakes you might want to get up soon,” came a voice just behind closed eyelids. Shane opened her eyes and yawned. She looked up to see her new room mate looking down on her as she opened the door. She soon disappeared behind it and Shane got out of bed. She followed the path out the door and into a brightly lit white room where all sorts of people had already started gathering with bowls and spoons for the morning meal. Shane sat down at one of the place settings with an empty bowl and spoon and watched the rest of the tennants.
Many looked thin and very ill as they poured over the cereal now being poured into their bowl. As one nurse approached Shane she looked up and asked, “Can I get some coffee?” The nurse laughed as she finished pouring her cereal and walked off. “Ok,” Shane said and looked across from her startled to see the same girl who had told her to get up.
“They don’t allow coffee. Apparently caffine is addictive,” she told her and winked. She took a big bite of soggy cereal and watched Shane intently.
“Only the good kind,” Shane replied and reached for a pitcher of milk. The girl laughed and Shane gave her an odd look. Is it possible she was checked into a mental ward instead?
“So what you in for? ” the girl inquired while taking another large bite of cereal. Her hair was short and mousy blonde and her eyes a plain green with average features. She had a kind look to her though and Shane, having finished pouring her milk, placed the pitcher aside.
“Pills,” she answered finding her spoon. The girl shook her head.
“Ah yeah, most people in here for that these days. Don’t want to scar themselves up with needles or anything,” the girl answered apparently very knowledgeable in the going ons.
“Yeah ok, so what are you in for,” Shane asked thinking it was a fair enough question. The girl smiled as she drained her bowl.
“A little of this, a lot of that, and not enough of everything else,” she answered. She placed her bowl down and stuck out her hand. “By the way, I’m Will, you’re room mate,” she said.
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fabulous story, you’re a really good author!You seem to know the characters very well! I must say I was suprised Carmen doesn’t want to be with Shane anymore ,please don’t let it be that way , they are perfect for one another ,pretty please:)
This is a really impressive story and one that i will definitely be checking for updates. I love how detailed it is and how much thought that has obviously been put into making the story what it is. I thought it was hilarious when Blaine, a Shane look-alike was introduced as Carmen’s new girlfiend.I mean even the name is similar, classic! Anyhow, I hope that Carmen changes her mind, cause she’s Shane’s girl not Blaine’s.
i like the style of writing…cool! keep posting..!!
This is BRILLIANT! Totally fresh, original and witty . I loved that Carmen’s new g/f looks like Shane , it totally cracked me up .I hope you update soon because it’s a really great fic and let Carmen and Shane make up , they are soul mates . Carmen can date Blaine but still desire to be with Shane. AWESOME JOB!!5 STARS. update soon,please…..
*juicy* dare I request more???? This was good…:-)
Im enjoying this. I really like Will and how she helped Shane at the end. Hope you keep going with this.
This is a great story:) I hope that this isn’t the end for Shane&Carmen, please , let Carmen give her another chance. She’s dating a Shane lookalike , she obviously wants her!
This was great! You have obviously spent a lot of time developing this story, and is definitely worth it!!
I told u i was going to comment and here i am LOL. It’s a really good story and i really like it. I cant wait for ur next post so hurry up with that editing!! POST SOON!! :)