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“Is that why you’re in here?” Shane shot out. Will shook her head.
“Well, it is for this time anyway,” she responded. Shane looked at her puzzled and grinned.
“Just how many times have you been in here, anyway?” Shane asked. Will started laughing.
“Sheesh Shane I’m a lush not a mathamatician. I can’t count that high!” she said as she chortled. “And each time I tell myself it’s going to be my last. Sometimes, though, it’s just too hard to by yourself and you find yourself right back in this place. Joy and rapture heh?”
Shane thought a moment. “Don’t you have any friends?” realising how it must have sounded “I mean, who keeps checking you in here?” she corrected watching the expression of Will’s face turn to a most solemn frown.
“My kid brother, poor guy. He deserves better,” she said and got up from her chair to leave the room.
“Hey look, I’m sorry. I shouldn’t of asked that,” Shane started realising her only chance at a conversation and escape from boredom was heading out the room.
“Yeah it’s ok, just a touchy subject.” She laughed. “I suppose we all have them.” Will sat down on the edge of Shane’s bed. “Bored obviously.” Shane lay back down and stared at the ceiling.
“How do you do it?” Shane asked.
“Well, luckily the hall is tiled or I would of lost it my first time here. But you get used to it,” Will continued and layed down to stare at the ceiling as well. They were silent for a while.
“Did you love her?” Will asked. Shane counted the cracks in the ceiling.
“Yes,” she answered. 13, 14, 15.
“Why didn’t you go after her then?” Will asked.
“Why do you let your brother keep checking you in here if you love him so much,” Shane countered.
“Fair enough,” Will retorted.
Silence again.
“There are 42,” Will announced.
“I was wondering,” Shane responded.
“How is Shane?” Aliced asked. Jenny looked up from the letter in her hand. Shane was allowed to write once a week and this had been her 2nd letter.
“Yeah she’s doing pretty good. She met a strange but nice, she underlined that one twice, the strange I mean, girl that has been keeping her “from gouging out my eyes for amusement”. She says that they are going to bore her into rehabilitation,” Jenny laughed. The other’s smiled.
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fabulous story, you’re a really good author!You seem to know the characters very well! I must say I was suprised Carmen doesn’t want to be with Shane anymore ,please don’t let it be that way , they are perfect for one another ,pretty please:)
This is a really impressive story and one that i will definitely be checking for updates. I love how detailed it is and how much thought that has obviously been put into making the story what it is. I thought it was hilarious when Blaine, a Shane look-alike was introduced as Carmen’s new girlfiend.I mean even the name is similar, classic! Anyhow, I hope that Carmen changes her mind, cause she’s Shane’s girl not Blaine’s.
i like the style of writing…cool! keep posting..!!
This is BRILLIANT! Totally fresh, original and witty . I loved that Carmen’s new g/f looks like Shane , it totally cracked me up .I hope you update soon because it’s a really great fic and let Carmen and Shane make up , they are soul mates . Carmen can date Blaine but still desire to be with Shane. AWESOME JOB!!5 STARS. update soon,please…..
*juicy* dare I request more???? This was good…:-)
Im enjoying this. I really like Will and how she helped Shane at the end. Hope you keep going with this.
This is a great story:) I hope that this isn’t the end for Shane&Carmen, please , let Carmen give her another chance. She’s dating a Shane lookalike , she obviously wants her!
This was great! You have obviously spent a lot of time developing this story, and is definitely worth it!!
I told u i was going to comment and here i am LOL. It’s a really good story and i really like it. I cant wait for ur next post so hurry up with that editing!! POST SOON!! :)