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Rheumatisim
“All I’m saying is,” Kit started.
“Be careful, I know.” Bette laughed into her tea cup.
“What should we wear, Bette?” Jenny asked. “I’ve got to tell Shane.” Jenny looked inquistively at Bette searching for answers.
“Oh just something nice. Tell her to invite her friend, Mr. Carvington is bringing his sister anyway and Tina’s bringing Oscar and Angelica.” Bette went on. “And I think Carmen’s coming too, with uh..”
“Blaine.” chimed the rest of the group who burst out into giggles.
“Yes. Blaine.” Bette smirked.
“You sure you don’t want to come?” Shane asked. Will shook her head diving into her cornflakes. Shane sighed and put the letter back into it’s envelope. She picked up her spoon and chimed in. “Shame I’m a lot of fun to party with.”
Will laughed. “I can imagine. That’s why you’re here isn’t it? Sooooo much fun,” she snorted. Shane couldn’t help but laugh.
“So what are you going to do?” Shane inquired.
Will saw what she was fishing for. “Don’t worry, Shane. I got a home, a family and I’m pretty well connected enough to get a job when I want one.”
The past couple of weeks with Will had been like going to camp. Shane hadn’t thought once about pills and thought less of Carmen. She felt nearly freed and thought mostly of her letter to Jenny.
“Dear Jenny. Ha ha, dear. Anyway. Things have improved since the first time I wrote you. I met a very strange but nice girl named Will. She’s been in rehab before and is showing me the ropes, so to speak. She seems down to earth really but some what out of place. She talks about her brother a lot and they sound like their tight. It’s good to know she’ll have someone to help her out when she gets out this time. Anyway she keeps me from gouging out my eyes for amusement. If it wasn’t for her they’s probably bore me into rehabilitation.
This past week has been ***** on the body. Will call’s it the shakes and she’s not far off. My whole body starts shaking from withdrawl. I get real energetic at times to and just start pacing the room. Will says it’s like watching a tennis match except there are no cute chicks in skirts. Don’t ask me, I can’t really tell if she is or isn’t. She seems to love everybody, kind of like you. Anyway, I’ll be out next week and back on the prowl I suppose. Thanks, Jenny. For everything. Love, Shane.”
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(61 votes, average: 3.28 out of 5)
fabulous story, you’re a really good author!You seem to know the characters very well! I must say I was suprised Carmen doesn’t want to be with Shane anymore ,please don’t let it be that way , they are perfect for one another ,pretty please:)
This is a really impressive story and one that i will definitely be checking for updates. I love how detailed it is and how much thought that has obviously been put into making the story what it is. I thought it was hilarious when Blaine, a Shane look-alike was introduced as Carmen’s new girlfiend.I mean even the name is similar, classic! Anyhow, I hope that Carmen changes her mind, cause she’s Shane’s girl not Blaine’s.
i like the style of writing…cool! keep posting..!!
This is BRILLIANT! Totally fresh, original and witty . I loved that Carmen’s new g/f looks like Shane , it totally cracked me up .I hope you update soon because it’s a really great fic and let Carmen and Shane make up , they are soul mates . Carmen can date Blaine but still desire to be with Shane. AWESOME JOB!!5 STARS. update soon,please…..
*juicy* dare I request more???? This was good…:-)
Im enjoying this. I really like Will and how she helped Shane at the end. Hope you keep going with this.
This is a great story:) I hope that this isn’t the end for Shane&Carmen, please , let Carmen give her another chance. She’s dating a Shane lookalike , she obviously wants her!
This was great! You have obviously spent a lot of time developing this story, and is definitely worth it!!
I told u i was going to comment and here i am LOL. It’s a really good story and i really like it. I cant wait for ur next post so hurry up with that editing!! POST SOON!! :)