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Rheumatisim
“My dear lady, that is what I do best. But what you do best is why I so desperately need your service,” he answered.
“He sounds like a charmer,” Kit said sitting down beside her sister on the lounge tucked away in the corner of the Planet. She grinned as she looked at the rest of the girls whom Bette was explaining her lunch to. “I wonder if he’s single.” she laughed.
“I think he’d have at least 5 or 6 hanging off him by now, Kit,” Alice started. “He’s rich, he’s not married, and he’s one of the heirs to a a billion dollar import/export company that has topped the Fortune 500 every year since it opened. He’s laiden with popular influences and strong alliances with some very intresting people over in D.C.” she finished.
“One of the heirs? You mean he has a brother?” Jenny asked peaking up from behind her coffee mug.
“A sister actually,” Alice answered.
“Even better,” Jenny laughed as Bette shook her head.
“Where do you get all this stuff, Alice? Last I checked you weren’t prescribing to Wall Street philosophy and keeping in check with all the big bankers,” Bette asked her. The group looked at ther inquisitively.
“Hele..” Alice started and phased off. Helena Peabody was still a touchy subject around Bette and Tina and it probably wasn’t a good idea drudging her up. Alice took a swig of coffee and looked anywhere but the faces of Bette and Tina. The group was silent for a moment.
“So tell us about the job,” Carmen started watching as Shane walked into the Planet and over to their group.
“What job,” asked Shane as she sat down next to her girlfriend.
“Where were you?” Carmen asked staring at Shane intently.
“Just checking on something. But never mind, what job?” Shane asked.
“Bette’s got a job with Harold Carvington to do a restoration project,” Kit explained. Shane shook her head.
“That’s cool, Bette. I’m happy for you. What are you restoring?” she asked.
“Well, It’s a lot of pieces actually so it should take some time. But apparently they’re very old Egyptian artifacts recovered from Rome that were taken there during the occupation when Cleopatra ruled. It’s quite exciting,” Bette explained. The group seemed very involved in it all.
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(61 votes, average: 3.28 out of 5)
fabulous story, you’re a really good author!You seem to know the characters very well! I must say I was suprised Carmen doesn’t want to be with Shane anymore ,please don’t let it be that way , they are perfect for one another ,pretty please:)
This is a really impressive story and one that i will definitely be checking for updates. I love how detailed it is and how much thought that has obviously been put into making the story what it is. I thought it was hilarious when Blaine, a Shane look-alike was introduced as Carmen’s new girlfiend.I mean even the name is similar, classic! Anyhow, I hope that Carmen changes her mind, cause she’s Shane’s girl not Blaine’s.
i like the style of writing…cool! keep posting..!!
This is BRILLIANT! Totally fresh, original and witty . I loved that Carmen’s new g/f looks like Shane , it totally cracked me up .I hope you update soon because it’s a really great fic and let Carmen and Shane make up , they are soul mates . Carmen can date Blaine but still desire to be with Shane. AWESOME JOB!!5 STARS. update soon,please…..
*juicy* dare I request more???? This was good…:-)
Im enjoying this. I really like Will and how she helped Shane at the end. Hope you keep going with this.
This is a great story:) I hope that this isn’t the end for Shane&Carmen, please , let Carmen give her another chance. She’s dating a Shane lookalike , she obviously wants her!
This was great! You have obviously spent a lot of time developing this story, and is definitely worth it!!
I told u i was going to comment and here i am LOL. It’s a really good story and i really like it. I cant wait for ur next post so hurry up with that editing!! POST SOON!! :)