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Looking discouraged as they both reeled in their looks from the monitor to each other, Tina sighed. “Well, she’s still perfect,” she said.
Shane’s eyes opened to a bright light hanging over head. She instantly recoiled and placed her hand over her eyes. “Where am I?” she asked to no one in particular. Jenny’s face appeared with a damp washer.
“You’re at home. Here, put this on it,” Jenny started.
“On what? Ow,” Shane responded realising there was now a cut over one of her eyes. She sat up on the lounge and placed her legs to brace herself up. “Thanks,” she said.
“Thank Mark, he’s the one that carried you in here,” Jenny said looking skeptically at Shane’s eye. Shane looked up at the kitchen where Mark was staring. Realising he had been found out he busied himself as soon as possible.
“Thanks,” Shane said anyway and placed the washer back into the bowl for more water. Shane noticed a bag against the lounge that oddly resembled one of her gym bags. “Am I going somewhere,” she asked placing the now clean washer back over her eye.
Jenny looked over at the bag and back at her. “Yes, for a while at least. Shane, I know this clinic where I think you could get help,” Jenny started. Shane stood up a be it to quickly and she had to brace herself from falling.
“I’m not going to a hospital,” Shane protested.
“It’s not a hospital, it’s a clinic for people with,” Jenny started. she stood and looked at Shane. “With problems.” Shane laughed.
“It’s rehab,” Shane said. Jenny shook her head still not dropping her gaze. She knew this was what was best for Shane.
“I’m not going,” Shane announced. Jenny shot a look to Mark as if some signal passed between them and he left the room locking the door behind him. “What you’re locking me in? Come on Jenny,” Shane continued.
“Shane, listen to me,” Jenny began. Shane rolled her eyes and put the washer back over her eye. “Listen to me, Shane. You helped me, when I was fucked up you made sure I went and got help and now I’m doing the same for you,” Jenny told her sternly. Shane had heard Jenny yell before but not really ever at her. She had a hurt ook on her face.
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fabulous story, you’re a really good author!You seem to know the characters very well! I must say I was suprised Carmen doesn’t want to be with Shane anymore ,please don’t let it be that way , they are perfect for one another ,pretty please:)
This is a really impressive story and one that i will definitely be checking for updates. I love how detailed it is and how much thought that has obviously been put into making the story what it is. I thought it was hilarious when Blaine, a Shane look-alike was introduced as Carmen’s new girlfiend.I mean even the name is similar, classic! Anyhow, I hope that Carmen changes her mind, cause she’s Shane’s girl not Blaine’s.
i like the style of writing…cool! keep posting..!!
This is BRILLIANT! Totally fresh, original and witty . I loved that Carmen’s new g/f looks like Shane , it totally cracked me up .I hope you update soon because it’s a really great fic and let Carmen and Shane make up , they are soul mates . Carmen can date Blaine but still desire to be with Shane. AWESOME JOB!!5 STARS. update soon,please…..
*juicy* dare I request more???? This was good…:-)
Im enjoying this. I really like Will and how she helped Shane at the end. Hope you keep going with this.
This is a great story:) I hope that this isn’t the end for Shane&Carmen, please , let Carmen give her another chance. She’s dating a Shane lookalike , she obviously wants her!
This was great! You have obviously spent a lot of time developing this story, and is definitely worth it!!
I told u i was going to comment and here i am LOL. It’s a really good story and i really like it. I cant wait for ur next post so hurry up with that editing!! POST SOON!! :)