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Jenny sat infront of the statue of Isis. Well at least a picture of the statue of Isis. She had her notebook out scribling away untill she heard an anouncement that the museum would be closing soon. Had she really been sitting their that long? Bette telling them about the Egyptain pieces coming to the CAC for restoration made her start thinking about the history, the lure, the mystique. She had come to the musem pondering a bit of the lure while she referred to it in her notebook. “Exodous” she kept writing. Was this drawing her deeper into her own background. Her flight from New York. Her leaping into a lifestyle so head on. How she constantly ran back to a safer distance before she jumped into the deep end yet again. “Hot, cold, hot. My body spins from this constantly changing element” she wrote. So much of herself was linked, she felt, in the mystique of egypt. Her Jewish faith, her feeling of being a puzzle a mystery to solve. “The sphinx, a riddle, unlike and like my mind”
Jenny packed up her notebook and shoved it into her bag casting one last look at the painting before making her way out of the museum. She fumbled into her pocket for the keys to her beat up vehicle when she glanced across the street. She recognised, at once, Shane’s blue pick up and proceeded across the road. The truck was located infront of a club filled with smoke of a dangerous nature, she was sure, and several people looking exceptionaly elated and tired. Through the smoke and the dim red light she could just make Shane out over in the corner among a group of people. Two women were on either side of her and 5 or 6 men were refilling her glass. Jenny could see one of the guys slip something into the drink he handed off to Shane.
Jenny closed in on Shane as she was about to put it to her lips and took the glass very carefully off of her. “Hey Jenny, what are you doing here,” Shane asked. She had alchohol on her breath and she looked as elatedly tired as everyone else in the bar had been.
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fabulous story, you’re a really good author!You seem to know the characters very well! I must say I was suprised Carmen doesn’t want to be with Shane anymore ,please don’t let it be that way , they are perfect for one another ,pretty please:)
This is a really impressive story and one that i will definitely be checking for updates. I love how detailed it is and how much thought that has obviously been put into making the story what it is. I thought it was hilarious when Blaine, a Shane look-alike was introduced as Carmen’s new girlfiend.I mean even the name is similar, classic! Anyhow, I hope that Carmen changes her mind, cause she’s Shane’s girl not Blaine’s.
i like the style of writing…cool! keep posting..!!
This is BRILLIANT! Totally fresh, original and witty . I loved that Carmen’s new g/f looks like Shane , it totally cracked me up .I hope you update soon because it’s a really great fic and let Carmen and Shane make up , they are soul mates . Carmen can date Blaine but still desire to be with Shane. AWESOME JOB!!5 STARS. update soon,please…..
*juicy* dare I request more???? This was good…:-)
Im enjoying this. I really like Will and how she helped Shane at the end. Hope you keep going with this.
This is a great story:) I hope that this isn’t the end for Shane&Carmen, please , let Carmen give her another chance. She’s dating a Shane lookalike , she obviously wants her!
This was great! You have obviously spent a lot of time developing this story, and is definitely worth it!!
I told u i was going to comment and here i am LOL. It’s a really good story and i really like it. I cant wait for ur next post so hurry up with that editing!! POST SOON!! :)