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Riders Ch. 8
“Tina here is your key and this lovely lady informs me she is your sister. I shall see you at dinner it’s late but they have agreed to let us use the restaurant at ten so I will see you in an hour.”
I waited until Grant was out of sight.
“Kim what in the name of all I hold dear are you doing here?”
She regarded me with eyes the same colour as my own, she was all dressed up in a black evening gown. Anyone who saw us would have seen the loathing and hatred shared in that stare. I could not stand to even be near her, when our dad died and we split his estate I swore I would never see her again. She was a heartless manipulator who I doubted was even of this earth.
“Good to see you too Tina. I just stopped by to drop something off, it is in your room I am getting married and need you to look after it fro a while. I will call if and when I can collect it.”
“Fine now go back to whatever swamp infested land you crawled out of.”
With that she was gone I made my way up to my room to see what she had deemed insignificant enough to trust into my care.
As I got to the door I saw Al, Dana, Justin, Warren and Bette coming up the corridor. I stopped and waited as they called out to me.
“Hey TK we just saw your splitting image sweep out the front of here in a sexy black number.”
“That was my sister she just came to drop something off she wants me to look after I haven’t seen her in six years since daddy died and I hope I can go another six before she comes to pick up whatever it is she left.”
As I spoke I opened the door and gestured them all in to follow me into the suite as we all moved in I was again stopped in my tracks, which was not good as the forward momentum of five other people behind me caused a pile of bodies trying to untangle at the foot of the bed.
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(41 votes, average: 3.29 out of 5)
Until now this story has been great and hilarious, but Ellie R this is very weird!!!!! Post soon….
Wow, Kim left her child to Tina? She must trust Tina a lot. But why did she take the baby to Tina when there’s someone who could take care of the baby? She doesn’t want her fiance to know she has a baby? Or it’s not her baby, she just try to mess things up? Weird woman, hoho.
I totally enjoyed the chapter..I don’t think you can write anything that is slow. I think then next few days will be a hoot.
A baby? A definite surprise! Not where I imagined this might be leading. I guess it could be a humorous detour for B/T. Enjoy Amsterdam, adn thanks for writing!
So Tina has a bitch of a sister, don’t we all. I just knew it was a baby but the way they all were talking about it I thought that I was wrong. Fun and games and general hilarity shall ensue. This is going to be a riot. Especially with Alice and Dana involved. Post soon please , I can hardly wait to see what happens next with the little guy and all these idiots around him.
I can’t believe they are going to use a Bidet on that baby. I hope they get pooopy all over then. but dont hurt the baby. At 11 months he can be put into the tub and wash. wwwhat kind of a mother would go off and leave a baby.that is evil. We are in for a wild ride for the next 5 days, Bette face and a baby boy/ thanks
I was thinking it was a baby too. This could be like 4 woman(three men) and a baby with much hilarity to follow. How will miss cranky pants handle her nephew lol.
Ahh love this and can’t stop laughing. this is gonna be fun and can’t wait to see how they handle the baby. Ok post soon please, thanks!
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This chapter was by no means slow. I just knew when Kim said she left something in Tina’s room that it would be a baby. What the hell is that woman’s problem? After I got over that initial rage I sarted cracking up yet again especially over Alice acting like she was upset and the curry comment. Now, I’ve never used a bidet but I have a feeling hilarity will ensue with Alice and Dana trying to use one with a little baby. xD
i also thought of a baby right away until you began discribing their reaction and i thought of a lizard or something…LOL, it should be hilarious trip
LOL Great chapp! Thanks! So you’re in Holland eh? you like it in my country LOL
Now exactly what did Tina’s sister mean when she said 6 years of favors rolled into one. I understand the baby but not the 6 years of favors. (you my brain is just not wired correctly) This is going to be a wild ride for the next 5 days with a 11 month old baby boy. I can’t wait to see how they are going to hide Bette’s face and a baby boy.