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Riders Ch.9
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Her worrying and nervousness made her even more cute, how could someone who was so regal and controlled and passionate when on or around one of her beloved horses be so unsure and almost child like in all other situations? And why after all of the people I had met in my life did she of all people seem to be having some sort of deeper effect on me, why was I always conscious of where she was and how she was feeling, I had a sneaking suspicion I knew but was loath to admit it even to myself.
“No oh Bette we will figure it out we still have half an hour before we have to be at dinner. I wasn’t staring at you, I was just lost in my own thoughts for a while there.”
There I am sure I saw it, she was disappointed, she wanted me to be staring at her, or maybe that was just wishful thinking in my part.
We finished getting ready in silence after that and made our way down to the lobby in silence. As we were heading towards the restaurant I was nearly given a heart attack as Bette grabbed a hold of me and pulled me behind a pillar and out of general view.
“Look Tina I know this will probably lead us to nothing but trouble and that Grant will throw a shit fit but how about you and I play hooky? We could spend the evening in Paris, have some fun.”
Like she needed to ask me twice,
“Sure but we need to make sure that Grant doesn’t go near our rooms, any bright ideas?”
“Well he seemed a bit taken with your sister earlier so how about we just send a note saying we have gone to meet her?”
If I didn’t know any better I would have said that miss Porter had put more thought into this than she was letting on.
“Ok let’s just leave a give a message to reception and they can take it through once everyone is seated for dinner.”
With that we swiftly moved across the lobby leaving our message and rushing out the front door where the concierge hailed a cab for us, had I been paying more attention to my surroundings and not focusing solely on the fact that Bette had grabbed hold of my hand as when she pulled me out of sight earlier and seemed to have no plans to let go, I might have noticed the familiar tall frame and blond hair of the man who climbed out of the car that pulled up in front of the hotel as we pulled off.
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hey! glad to see this chapter. Congrats on the new job!
I laughed like a loon. This was so great.
Excellent chapter Ellie! I’ve heard the term “shit hit the fan” but I think “shit hit the bidet” fits this one! Sounds like Cooper got what’s been due to him for some time. Great post! I’ll be patiently waiting again!
glad to see your post…I miss this story. thank.s
maybe cooper is fed up and leaving…any chance to get rid of him forever?
Some one needs to take Cooper and shove him out the door or send him back in the plane. If he gets to bad just open the plane’s door and shove him out of it. Bette is opening up to Tina and allowing her heart to guide her. Tina is also opening up. I can’t wait to see how things are going to work out for them. I hope that you will enjoy your new job. Thanks for the post.
I don’t know how, but somehow I missed the last several chapters of this story. I am so glad to have now caught up, because this is hilarious…and so very sweet at the same time. Thank you!!!
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS! okokok! I am writing TBOF as we speak LOL okokok I just took a short break to read this! But Im on it now1 Promise! As fast as I can! Thanks for this chapter!!!!!!!
Hahaha thats funny adn hope this will kick cooper out of the picture and let Bette and Tina be together. OK post soon please, thanks!
Great post, please don’t let us wait that long again, but congrats on the new job :o)). I really liked the way you “treated” Cooper, he is an ass LOL, but what is he doing there and what are B&T going to do??? Looking forward to the next one…
I believe “oh shit” is an understatement here. I’ve been waiting for a chapter from this story. I’m ashamed to admit it but I couldn’t remember what happened in the previous chapter so I had to read the recap. =/ Cooper needs to go bye-bye and Tina needs to rememeber not to scare off Bette. I would’ve loved to see a bidet moment like that on the actual show. lol
1st! *moons any and all referees*
I was so pleased to check in and see your next chapter. Sorry work has kept you so busy… 24 whole days was a long time to keep us in suspense as to how our favorite “Riders” are doing! I’m not sure I really get the whole baby thing, but it has brought an interesting dynamic within Tina’s family. Also, it has given more emotional connection to B/T. I’m looking forward to see how all the girls will handle the surprise reemergence of Cooper. Doesn’t sound like a very nice guy! Welcome back and thanks for writing!
I laugh and laugh as I read this when I read Dana I hear Baxter Black’s voice and it just cracks me up even more. This is so outstanding. Thanks for writing it.
Also please to see post and glad about new job. Is there a possiblity of a post for Designer Suits?