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Round n Round We Go (Ch.10)
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And after introducing the crazy man to a little startled Shirley, the brunette actually felt a little sympathy to the young artist. Miguel, the man was called, just talked and talked in his indistinct manner around her, asking very personal questions.
The color of the night sky was getting dimmer, Bette made her final address, sending appreciation to those who bought pieces and those who were interested, and that was when people only felt like leaving. Some lingered longer than the others, reluctant of going before they had the chance to admire arts in the whole building. Bette, a bit impatient with them, wandered in the building escorting people out. And most people said goodnight fairly courteously, while only a few, such as Miguel, were somehow oblivious to the ungodly hour. And when Miguel’s buddy came taking him out, the brunette expressed her gratefulness a bit too arduous that made Tina giggle. Then they both walked their friends and the Hemingers to the arranged drives.
They reclined against Bette’s motorcycle outside the gallery and stared at the starry night as James and the rest of the employees wrapped up the final tasks.
Tina remembered on the night like this, they confessed their love to each other. She looked down to Bette’s hand resting beside hers, and reached a bit over to hold it. “It’s so nice.”
“And late, too.” Smiling a bit, the taller girl glanced back at her gallery, the lights starting to put out.
“Yeah. We haven’t stayed up so late since last month at the Planet. I felt like I never see you lately. Today you awe me.” She said very genuinely. Bette showed her how comfortable and confident she was on stage and how expertly professional handling the situations. Today, Bette was this mature, responsible woman that she couldn’t help but fell more in love with.
“I’m glad it’s over.” Every time she had a show, she grew up so much. “I’m sorry about the sentiment earlier. That was just plain silly Champagne talk.”
“You weren’t drinking that much anyway.” Tina chuckled. “Besides, you promised you won’t change the arrogant, spoiled part of you for the world. I love you and I love every bit of you.”
“Even when I’m a spoiled, inconsiderate, immature, rich little piece of macaroni?” Bette laughed while Tina’s mouth hung agape. “Yeah, I’ve heard all. You drew quite the attention locked in that bathroom.”
Shaking her head and smirking silently, the blonde shrugged. “Even when you’re those.”
“I love you too.” After staring at her a minute, the brunette replied quietly. And she leant in closer, captured Tina’s lips with hers.
The kiss tasted like a bit alcohol and cherry chap stick. It was warm, slow, relaxing.
Tina opened her eyes to see into the chocolate colored ones. Under the dim moon light, she saw a small fire in those liquid orbs burning patiently. The moment felt so right. “Close your eyes.” She asked and held Bette’s one hand.
Bette obeyed. Her long black lashes flustered as she tried to suppress her longing.
A cold little object was dropped carefully in her hand. Naturally she opened her eyes to look and her mind comprehended the possibility. The silvery flash of the object reflected into her widened eyes, into the pools of fiery brownness.
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Yeah, it’s chapter ten and we haven’t seen some actions. But you know where this is heading to! Expecting the next post already?
Do review. I’d love to hear your suggestions and thoughts.
Thanks (~:
Lol!!! Nice ending….cliff hanger…. ;)
Hahaha, I know very well that I’m a tease. And I love doing it!
Won’t let you down after a cliff hanging, I promise.
Oh,lovely story,but i have a flash back,i have seen the similar story in chinese, same storyline without other charactors like shane and alice.and in that story,tina became pregnant and better found out sam’s scheme before she knew tina was pregant… i really like your work,more drama and details,is the story will go like this.so i was wondering will you kindly enough to tell me which story or film you based on?
oh,by the way,i really want to see some action in next chapter.
Yes, this is a twist based on an origin-unknown Chinese heterosexual romantic fiction I have seen before in Baidu Tieba before. You see my rewriting really originated from a dare that my friend evil mindedly pick out for me. And to be honest, I think its original structure was a bit loose and didn’t make perfect sense to me. So, I will probably do a bigger twist, especially on the pregnant part, later in this story and I have already set my mind on a particular outcome. Btw, you Chinese? I’m Chinese and I went to high school in Australia, heading to the US for college this fall. ;) nice meeting you.
Yeah,that’s where i saw it too,in Baidutieba,THE L WORD fandom.Yeah, I am chinese. i’ve already read all the chinese TB fan fictions ,and i just can’t get enough, so here i am.Guess what , i saw an American version of White Snake Legendary on the original The L Word fanfiction site, can you believe that!!That’s one of my biggest fantasy that Xuxian is actually a woman ,rather than acted by one.
so i am really looking forward to where this story goes,the original story is too rush and lack of some behind stories.So suprise me,i am officially your fan now.nice work!
Wow that’s something! I think they’ve moved all the fictions on the old site here so I’ll definitely look up for that one. Xuxian being a woman, hmmm, sounds quite tasteful!
And thank you so much for supporting me on this. I’ll post asap and please review more. I’d love to hear your thoughts since you’ve read the original version.
I wonder if I can write Chinese here. 谢谢～ 么么哒
Do they appear like normal Chinese characters or inidentifyable rectangles?
Ha! It worked! 新站果然高端！
我还是比较喜欢老站布局。exclusive.
I think that fiction named as Snake love ,Bette as Xuxian,Tina as Baishuzhen and Alice as Xiaoqing.I always thought that Xiaoqin was the true love for Bai, cos Xiaoqin is very protective of Bai and devoted everything for Bai, just thinking,haha.
Snake Love, huh, lovely and literal. XiaoQing is one hell of a girl, isn’t she. But in this case… Alice and Tina…? I don’t find that very appealing lol.
And FYI, I’m not gonna let their first time be in the poor hotel like that in the original story. It’s just not fair. ;p
I intend it to be more well planed, more romantic.
more details on their first time，please！finger crossed！
Thank you and PPS.
Thanks for supporting. I’ll try to post soon.
great post, please Tina, tell Bette about your dad
Well, she has no intention to hurt Bette that’s for sure. But it’s a dilemma. I’m afraid it’s going to turn out not so great for the scheme. Still, I will fix it, no worries.
Ok here we go let’s heat it up some more this story is getting hot
Right on! I’m working on it ;p
That was great