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Round n Round We Go (Ch.10)
For weeks, they spent Saturdays in Bette’s office, working some and bantering some, always ended up making out and went to the Planet for entertainment with their friends.
Sometimes, when Tina finished sorting documents, she’d do her homework, and the brunette girl would sketch on the canvas or play a tune. And as a couple, they finally accepted that invitation for a cup of coffee from the old adorable Mrs. Heminger. The peaceful balance of their life was as refreshing as a mild breeze on the spring water, as natural as a stroke of sunlight after a rainy summer night, as safe as a pile of soft fallen leaves covering the autumn mud, and as warm as a bonfire dancing on a bundle of wood keeping the winter storm far, far away. It was like they had been in each other’s company for a lifetime, but still would blush or smile shyly to one another when their eyes locked.
If simply being together felt so right, the girls wondered, how amazing would their sex be? Neither of them brought up the topic or did anything that exceeded the usual, yet they were anticipating. They just needed a sign.
Bette would have considered it silly and unnecessary, but she was surprisingly patient, cautious. And she came to understand that this was because she, for the first time, cared enough about their relationship to take no risks, rather plan it out, and wait for the right moment to get to the next step.
Tina was fully aware of the tension. Despite their routinely dates and expected romance, she still got the tingles as they became intimate, sharing a cup of coffee and a kiss, or swaying slowly together on the dance floor.
Sam on the other hand, was getting more and more delighted.
One day after school, he had his daughter sit down with him and have a conversation. “Tina, you have been going out with Porter for over two months right?”
“Yes, daddy. Please, Bette’s been really good with me and the job, the pay, it’s more than I ever imagined.” For countless times, Tina tried to talk some sense into her father. And Sam had not brought up anything related to framing Bette again during the past weeks. She was beginning to think that maybe he understood.
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Yeah, it’s chapter ten and we haven’t seen some actions. But you know where this is heading to! Expecting the next post already?
Do review. I’d love to hear your suggestions and thoughts.
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Lol!!! Nice ending….cliff hanger…. ;)
Hahaha, I know very well that I’m a tease. And I love doing it!
Won’t let you down after a cliff hanging, I promise.
Oh,lovely story,but i have a flash back,i have seen the similar story in chinese, same storyline without other charactors like shane and alice.and in that story,tina became pregnant and better found out sam’s scheme before she knew tina was pregant… i really like your work,more drama and details,is the story will go like this.so i was wondering will you kindly enough to tell me which story or film you based on?
oh,by the way,i really want to see some action in next chapter.
Yes, this is a twist based on an origin-unknown Chinese heterosexual romantic fiction I have seen before in Baidu Tieba before. You see my rewriting really originated from a dare that my friend evil mindedly pick out for me. And to be honest, I think its original structure was a bit loose and didn’t make perfect sense to me. So, I will probably do a bigger twist, especially on the pregnant part, later in this story and I have already set my mind on a particular outcome. Btw, you Chinese? I’m Chinese and I went to high school in Australia, heading to the US for college this fall. ;) nice meeting you.
Yeah,that’s where i saw it too,in Baidutieba,THE L WORD fandom.Yeah, I am chinese. i’ve already read all the chinese TB fan fictions ,and i just can’t get enough, so here i am.Guess what , i saw an American version of White Snake Legendary on the original The L Word fanfiction site, can you believe that!!That’s one of my biggest fantasy that Xuxian is actually a woman ,rather than acted by one.
so i am really looking forward to where this story goes,the original story is too rush and lack of some behind stories.So suprise me,i am officially your fan now.nice work!
Wow that’s something! I think they’ve moved all the fictions on the old site here so I’ll definitely look up for that one. Xuxian being a woman, hmmm, sounds quite tasteful!
And thank you so much for supporting me on this. I’ll post asap and please review more. I’d love to hear your thoughts since you’ve read the original version.
I wonder if I can write Chinese here. 谢谢~ 么么哒
Do they appear like normal Chinese characters or inidentifyable rectangles?
Ha! It worked! 新站果然高端!
我还是比较喜欢老站布局。exclusive.
I think that fiction named as Snake love ,Bette as Xuxian,Tina as Baishuzhen and Alice as Xiaoqing.I always thought that Xiaoqin was the true love for Bai, cos Xiaoqin is very protective of Bai and devoted everything for Bai, just thinking,haha.
Snake Love, huh, lovely and literal. XiaoQing is one hell of a girl, isn’t she. But in this case… Alice and Tina…? I don’t find that very appealing lol.
And FYI, I’m not gonna let their first time be in the poor hotel like that in the original story. It’s just not fair. ;p
I intend it to be more well planed, more romantic.
more details on their first time,please!finger crossed!
Thank you and PPS.
Thanks for supporting. I’ll try to post soon.
great post, please Tina, tell Bette about your dad
Well, she has no intention to hurt Bette that’s for sure. But it’s a dilemma. I’m afraid it’s going to turn out not so great for the scheme. Still, I will fix it, no worries.
Ok here we go let’s heat it up some more this story is getting hot
Right on! I’m working on it ;p
That was great