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Round n Round We Go (Ch.11)
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Tina could hardly believe her own eyes. Under the dim lamplight, the composition of the room gradually became clear. It was not a simple stock room, but an exclusive, secretive, lavishly designed condo. The heavy curtains were of the romantic lavender purple color, the king-size bed had fluffy pillows and soft blanket that give people the urge to just crash in on it, candles decorated the nightstands, and a bathroom with opaque silica glass walls embedded in. She worked hard to come up with words. First the amazingly done watercolor, then this fabulous compartment, things were just perfect this night.
When it came to the moment, neither of them was rushing. Tina had questions for Bette. She had no idea when she painted the watercolor, and how she never knew about the room.
“Last Thursday, I stayed here after the port—” Bette paused and changed the word seeing Tina’s smirk, “carriers moved the pieces in. It was late, so I didn’t go home, and in the middle of the night, I thought I’d do something productive.”
“And you painted me?”
“I was missing you.” So sweetly, she answered. She then turned to light the candles and turn off the lamp. Those were scented candles that she liked and she normally didn’t like any kinds of candles because those relighting ones for prank on her tenth birthday party had driven her crazy. She put out one and made sure those were just simple, none-tricky candles. Tina would find that obsessive and irrational, so she decided to not illustrate but relit it.
“How come you never told me about this room?” The blonde walked closer and pressed her fingers to the bed, relieved that it was just Simmons mattress, not a water bed. “That’d be too extravagant.” She thought to herself and grinned. With somewhat teasing tone, she asked. “What is this place? Is it somewhere you bring all your girlfriends and make earth-shattering love?”
“No,” Bette laughed a bit, shaking her head, “I just remodeled this room last month, never brought anyone here. And no, I don’t ‘make love’ to them.” She said the last sentence matter-of-factly.
It didn’t surprise Tina. Of course, Bette was a famous, or to say notorious, player, she’d find “making love” too mushy and corny for her taste. It gave her tingles to know she was the first woman ever step into this secret haven the brunette had built. “Then, would you make love to me?” She couldn’t help but flirted, though she was quite sure about the reply.
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Yes, I fantasized about a perfect room with candle lights and love songs. My love scene writing experience is still limited. I hope you enjoyed it and I welcome suggestions.
Thanks for reading!
woo!got me all hot, great writing.looking for the next.
Thanks! Hope it was better depicted than the original one. I tried my best. Truth be told, I barely review the Chinese version these days and forget some plot.
So I’m working off script right now. Don’t be too surprised if it comes out not exactly what you expect ;p
Yeah,that’s exactly what I am waiting for. Follow your imagination,I want to be surprised.while waiting for your post,I am reading this novel named The Groves,a ghost story.
Isnt that a BenMac story? God I looooove BenMac. That author’s work always gives me chills. I’m actually catching up with her “the eternal rocks beneath…”
I thought ” “the eternal rocks beneath…”haven’t end yet,is that so?
No, it hasn’t yet. But BenMac said that it’ll be finished in a number of chapters.
Ahh that was great..literally!!!!!!lol…well worth the wait let me just say. Oh and this line..” Bette in her underwear and high heels, that was a picture, one hell of a sexy picture, itself.” My first reaction was Whoa!!you are wrong to put this kind of imagination in our heads, a person can loose focus for days thinking about Bette with heels and lingerie. I hate that Tina still havent told Bette the truth I know its must be hard on her but when she does I know there’s going to be some drama, hopefully bette get upset and leaves tina and then tina have to work hard to win her heart and trust back…ok im rambling lol im just excited…update soon
Yeah, thanks! The truth will be revealed in about another two chapters or so. And hell is definitely going to break loose. But of course, I will find a way to fix it for them. After all, I still believe in true love between Tibette!
Hot,thank you.PPS
Thanks for reviewing. You’ve been very supportive!
Tina’s dad is a real jerk to have wanted to do that. Loved the connection the two girls share. Thanks
Well he’s a mean little guy alright. He’ll learn his lesson. Let’s just hope a despicable person like him could eventually change.
Thanks for reviewing!
It was worth the wait. You put so much into your characters n you develop easily what you want us to feel w/ your stories. Their feelings for each other were captivated flawlessly. Our imagination runs wild! Thx for your EROTIC posts. I’m sure all hell s gonna break loose if/when Tina tells Bette about Sam s revenge. Bring it on! Don’t stay away too long……
You’re very kind. I will continue to work on my plotting. Well, who knows, maybe Tina would not be given the chance to tell Bette. Maybe things will take a even worse turn so there must be a greater effort to mend their love.
Thanks for commenting. I’ll try to post soon.
Nothing wrong with your love scènes, it was beautiful written.
Sam is a asshole and i am sure as hell is gonna break lose when Tina tells Bette.
Thanks for the update.
Don’t Let us wait for long.
Thanks for supporting!
Actually, I feel like letting things kept hidden to the most critical point. That way, it will take more effort in repairing their relationship.
Who knows, I let my imagination guide me. ;)
So hot and sexy! Thank you!
Thank you for the comment. I try my best.
RT,
That was freakin’ HOT! Just hope Tina will open up now to B.
Nice chapter indeed. Will be waiting impatiently for your next post :)
Well then I better work on it harder now!
I think given the condition, it will be harder and harder for Tina to reveal the truth now. I wonder what will happen if Bette finds out by accident. That’ll demand greater attempts for me and Tina to save the relationship. (I’d like the challenge actually ;))
Thanks for commenting!
I do not often let a comment to this story, but I read since the beginning, and I really liked it.
it is very well worth the wait, not only erotic but very nice. It was the typical “first night” is what every virgin girl dreams (lesbian virgin girls) :P Bette was very romantic.
first love all earth-shattering experience, I hope the two girls love will survives, Tina’s father desire for revenge, and the fact that Tina keep secret this from Bette. and that in the beginning, Tina approached Bette because of the plan.
you told come to the drama but I hope it will not be too bad. everyone write drama lately :) my little heart desires a milder version of the drama: D
I’m looking forward to the next chapter.
Well thank you very much for commenting and telling me your feelings. I am truly flattered, blown away by the generosity of my readers.
I don’t know about EVERY lesbian virgin but I definitely created this first night in the way I wished for mine. ;p
Drama is good, my friend! Haha, I think it gives me space to develop more in the characters. And believe me, when they are finally able to fix things, it’s going to be sweet!
So beautiful and hot