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Round n Round We Go (Ch.12)
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The turn of event was certainly beyond everybody’s comprehension. James, Barrett the bear, Jake the driver, Fernando the errand man, and Roberta the dog walker all had their chins on the floor.
Bette stared at her grandmother dumbfounded. Marriage. She never really considered that as an option for her. But what the heck, she thought: lesbians get married all the time. It was the point for her to go head to head with her grandmother, or she probably would never have the chance. And she knew that she loved Tina very deeply and people don’t usually get to feel this connection with somebody else. This could be her last and forever. “Yes, ma’am. If I marry anybody, that girl would be Tina.” She turned around to look the blonde in her watery hazel eyes. “Baby, will you marry me?”
“Bette…” Tina was startled by the question and was deeply touched by the trust Bette had taken in her. But she could not say yes to that, could she? There was darkness, ugliness that she kept hiding from her girlfriend. And that made her a terrible person, a lying, despicable person that could not deserve Bette’s love. “Don’t you think… it’s too early for us…”
Maryanne took interest in the blonde girl’s reaction. She imagined a gold-digger would jump and shriek in joy. But not this Tina Kennard. This girl was described to her as smart, hardworking, independent, different, who challenged her granddaughter first day in school and lived with merciless tease and pranks for weeks. Now she was a little impressed. “Very well, Elizabeth, I will not oppose this relationship. I hope you take responsibility in your own actions. Fernando, take the girl home and inform Mr. Kennard about the proposal my granddaughter just delivered. You, young lady, go home now.”
“But grandma, I have work to do.” Bette protested. She felt like the need to spend some time with Tina alone and sort out what just happened and what was the answer.
“I am afraid you have spent too much time here. James can handle it, can he not?”
“Please don’t question my employees, grandma.”
Maryanne glanced at the brunette, thinking how much she had grown up, first speaking up for her girlfriend, now defending her people. “Then let him do it.” She walked straight pass her body guard and left no space for further argument.
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I figure there’d be one more chapter before hell breaks loose. And sorry, to those of you who wanted the minimum of damage, I let the drama build up.
As usual, I look forward to your reviews, and appreciate your patience.
Peace.
Oh right, I promise to fix things up for them! The way has to be paved nicely.
woo！so much for this chapter, your story is very rational and organized， but please let them be happy for one more chapter, untill the hell break loose, let us savour in the young love a little bit longer.Waiting for your version of dramatic turning.
I did another chapter of tranquility. That’s the calm before the storm you got, haha!
i am reading this fan fiction named out of closet(time travel story),and literally they travelled through a closet,funny.
Hmmm… time traveling. I think that’s bold and interesting. Do you mind telling me who the author is? Coz I seemed to have failed searching by key word. Still don’t know how the search engine works on this site… so typical techno-phobic little me!
Author ID is Bette And Tina Forever,not end yet.
i haven’t heard the songs you listed above, you see, i am more a british pop fan.but i will hear them later,so i can feel the tune that you are trying to set.
Another try to comment.
I love the slow built up, but please promise a happy ending.
This will be a mess.
They love each other and starten on the wrong foot, Tina should have told it right away after she fel in love with Bette. But then there wouldnt be drama.
Still despise Sam, what a creep.
Ah, don’t worry, my friend. There’ll be a nice ending for these two. I love them too much after all!
And Sam, ugh, sometimes I just want to create a car accident and cross him out of the picture. But then I think, there’s gotta be some good left in him.
And I really appreciate your comment. I see there’s a new math question form to fill out before people can post a comment. That’s cute…lol
RT,
Sam is Selfish Bastard. I hope that Tina will be able to protect Bette from Sam’s exploitation.
Grandma was really a fair lady coz she still gave Tina the chance to be with Bette despite Tina’s association with Sam Kennard.
For Tina.. I know that she will regret her decision but I trust you that you will make our Bette more understanding once she finds out the truth.
Bette was really romantic here. She is truly one lovely lady.
Great update. You are consistently consistent in giving us a wonderful update for this story.
Keep it coming.
Thanks.
Scribe
Yes, I agree. Sam is a total jerk. But you’ll find out how he will turn out.
And Tina has really created a hard situation for herself. Yet I don’t think she had much of an option here. It’s risking her relationship or burying the secret forever. But she’s too naive to understand that nothing can stay forever.
Bette has a romantic soul. But once her heart is broken, maybe she won’t be so understanding after all. Only time can heal such sensitivity. I intend to let time do the job, too.
Tina has created a real situation for herself. Let the drama begin!! Thank you for this story – I have enjoyed reading!
Thank you for the comment! I’ll continue to try my best. Hope you’ll enjoy the next chapter.
Really dont like Sam. What a jerk. They are a sweet couple, hope they weather the storm with only minor damage. Thanks
He is a total jackass. And you’ll find out how the storm hit the couple. I believe things can get ugly at one point. But let time do its job and heal their broken hearts.
Thanks for reviewing!
Please don’t let them get married without Tina saying anything it was just be disastrous she can’t be this clueless let her tell her and then move away cause she don’t need to be with her dad
I don’t think it’s that easy at this point for Tina to tell anything. She’s made her mind, even though it’s a wrong decision. And she’ll realize that she’d been wrong this whole time.
And Sam, he is a jackass. But he’ll probably stick around some more. Maybe, eventually, he could see the damage that he had made and really go for a change. Who knows.
Thanks for the review. Please continue reading!
Yea I was waiting for drama but this was better and so lovely, ahh poor Tina what are you to do? But now it dont matter because the hell is about to start, im clearing my mind until so I can read with pure focus lol omg so ready but I gotta feeling hearts are about to be broken with the foreshadowing you readin between the story..I do believe marriage is to early for these teenagers but lets be honest here Tina and Bette have a love like no other that if they got married at the age 5 we will still be seeing true love between those two. And for some reason I like the grandmother, I didnt find her harsh at all, and Sam is just a sad case for a father but Tina is playing her part also
Oh you’re so right! It’s just such a difficult position Tina finds herself in. And it’s all gonna fall out when the truth gets revealed.
One more chapter of loveliness and I’ll start the ugly going.
I love grandma Porter! She’s the keeper of the family. And she will continue to play an important part in keeping the family together through darkness and through hell.
Sam, old little Sam, having all his mind on money and profit. He has no idea how his actions will infect his daughter. Let’s see if he’ll have an epiphany and go for a change.
Thanks for reviewing!
Don’t like Sam, grandma scare me but like her, happy for them and hope everything will be ok