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    Round n Round We Go (Ch.15)

    Story written on May 20, 2014 by robyntibetter.
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    “She sounds beautiful.” Angelo praised sincerely from his heart. In his mind, mama B just looked like that Oscar winner lady, Halle Barry. Bette was way more beautiful than she, I wanted to correct him. “Yes, she is very beautiful, actually. Now we have ten more minutes till we get to school, do your speech again for

    “She sounds beautiful.” Angelo praised sincerely from his heart. In his mind, mama B just looked like that Oscar winner lady, Halle Barry.

    Bette was way more beautiful than she, I wanted to correct him. “Yes, she is very beautiful, actually. Now we have ten more minutes till we get to school, do your speech again for me, would you?”

    He went through his presentation again. I corrected some pronunciation and told him that he was ready to take the stage. We stopped at the school gate, said goodbye. He gave me a kiss on the mouth and made me promise to arrive earlier and help him with his tie.

    I drove off after seeing him walk into the school building, went to my office, and made a couple of calls to Shaolin’s temporary manager. He was not at all a very delightful man, complained tons and demanded tons. I gave him some guarantees that his people would get their fair share and postponed our meeting for further discussion because things were not straightened out. This whole acquisition thing was too prompt and unorganized. I was thinking that maybe… maybe Bette could handle him. It’d be a piece of cake for her to deal with all this.

    But as I sat in my chair and swirled a bit behind my desk, my mind was in a turbulence. I couldn’t concentrate, I wished I had her kind of concentration, but I hadn’t. And going through my calendar again, I saw that today was just a regular open day and there was really not much for me to hang around sulking. So I gathered my phone and keys, left the office door open so that my assistant could send in fax paper or documents, and went to see my dear old lady Sue Heminger.

    She moved out of the old apartment several years ago, the city wanted to redevelop the area and offered the residence a fair compensation. Steven and I helped her move into a new apartment in Venice. She took the liberty to rescue some wild cats and fed them in her new apartment. The kids in the neighborhood started to call her “cat lady” and come visit her every now and then, she was happy with it. But she was getting old, and feeble, that broke my heart. So I was thinking about convincing her to stay with one of us.

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    1. Author:
      My dear readers!
      I just did a major change in my story telling. I changed from third person perspective to first person POV!
      How do you like it? I want to know if you prefer this writing technique to the old one. It’s okay if you’d like me to return to third person view point. I’ll just rewrite this chapter and the next one.
      And I know there are questions unanswered, things unresolved. But things will gradually work out.
      Thank you for reading and please, COMMENT on this one because I need your direction.
      Peace

      • woo！now I see the big picture here! You’ve handled well with the child part, so can we see the duo have some passionate action next chapter? I am hanging and waiting, thanks for the adequate updating!

        • Passionate action, huh, well, maybe not the next chapter immediately but soon, I guarantee.
          There’s just so many emotions and complicated issues between the two.
          I hope you’ll enjoy this more. I’m actually improvising here.

        • Oh, I think I’ve read her stories. But lately I don’t have much time reading fanfic. I don’t know why, just have been busy here and there.
          I won’t disappear for two whole months, nevertheless! :)

    2. You did a great Job writing in first person! For me, i like third person versions more, but you don’t have to re write for me. I love the story and will read it in the version you give it us.

      Wow, Bette was so cold, but i hope Angelo will warm her heart.

      They are still married? Hmm…

      Can’t wait for their diner meeting on Monday.

      • Thank you very much for the encouragement!
        Bette is a bit heartless as she comes back. But kids, they have the power to capture one’s heart in no time. She will come around and set things right between her and her son.
        Yes, still married. They have so much history together and it’s kind of difficult for them to give that up.
        I hope you’ll continue to enjoy!

    7. RT,

      The Past was kind of Bad, the Present is Slightly Good but the Future of Bette, Tina and Angelo seems going to be Better :)

      Thanks for posting.

      Scribe

      • The past has some good memories in it, the present is complicated, the future, I promise, will be sweeter.
        Thanks for reading and commenting!

    8. That was great and the kid are so smart and cute, like him. Wow they still married, what a surprise, hope they will talk more and get to know each other again. Please post more, thanks

      • Yes, the kid is great! I wish I could have one of those in the future haha.
        They are still married, and a lot of unresolved issues in their relationship.
        Things will get better!
        Thanks for commenting.

    9. Threw me for loop completely. I would love to really the aftermath from when Bette heard Tina and her father conversation I mean after all these chapters thats what we been waiting for and the story just turn….but Shit I like this too I dont know I want it to be the way you written at first but its your choice and you are a brilliant, exquisite writer, I trust you lol!

      On the other hand wow Bette was a lil mean but can you blame her for the way she treated Tina, I still can’t believe how many chances Tina had to tell her and didn’t, and Marcus died awe how sad, I would love to see them have another baby but im thinking ahead, and can’t believe Tina still in touch with her dad but family is family.

      I guess im going to just see where this goes and enjoy every moment of it.

      • I know, it’s kind of a surprise isn’t it?! I was going for that kind of effect, actually. Besides, I can’t really go on with the confrontation anymore. That was just plain painful.
        Bette is really mean here. She has her reasons to be, and you’re right, Tina not telling her the truth on so many occasions is one of them.
        Marcus, oh I am sorry about him, too. But… to serve the plot…
        They still can have another baby. Just it’s really too long in the future for them to talk about having another kid. They got to get back together first!
        But it will all happen eventually!
        Thanks for commenting. And I wish you’ll enjoy it more!

      • Thank you! You are very kind.
        Ok, I’ll continue in the first person for more chapters and maybe I’ll return to third person perspective in later chapters!

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