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    Round n Round We Go (Ch.15)

    Story written on May 20, 2014 by robyntibetter.
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      “No!” I shot up from the comfort of my own twin bed. Some time during the night I drifted off into a slumber. And the same nightmare that had been haunting me over the past seven years came back again. My night gown was wetted from all the sweating and crying. Figuring that sleep was

     

    “No!” I shot up from the comfort of my own twin bed. Some time during the night I drifted off into a slumber. And the same nightmare that had been haunting me over the past seven years came back again. My night gown was wetted from all the sweating and crying. Figuring that sleep was probably off the table right now, I got up and walked barefoot into the shower, cleaned up, put on make up, dressed in my professional suit, and looked out the window.

    It was probably around four in the morning, for the blueish light outside. I waited and waited, going through a lot of fragments of memories, until the birds out of my windowsill started to wake up and sing their happy morning choir. Finally, the light little stumping in the hallway informed me that my boy was up.

    “Mommy, mommy!” He rushed into my room and jumped onto my bed, very well re-energized like a robot with full charge. On his arm, there hung the suit he picked out for today’s presentation. “Help me with the tie, mommy! I’m gonna look fabulous for my speech.”

    I widened my eyes at his word choice, had no idea where that came from. Well, there could be a lot of resources, probably those gay dads that picked their children up after school, or Billy who worked in the gallery, or the cupcake baker at the Planet… but as far as I had seen, Angelo showed no tendency or interest in romantic relationship with boys. So I decided to correct his wording in case some older kid might tease him at school. “Honey, you’re going to look handsome for your speech. Fabulous… is a bit too exaggerated for boys.”

    He looked at me with the most innocent brown eyes and nodded. Though I was pretty sure he didn’t know the word “exaggerated” either, but from his admiring expression, I knew I had convinced him. Oh that cute way when he looked at me and tried to remember everything I taught him. I bent down to give him a kiss on the forehead and helped him into his suit. “Angelo, I don’t think you have to wear the tie in the morning. Would you want to save it for a surprise entering in the afternoon?” I reasoned, thinking that ties were actually dangerous for little kids to wear, what if he got stuck. When I first sent him to pre-school, I lived in terror everyday for months that something might happen to him.

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    1. Author:
      My dear readers!
      I just did a major change in my story telling. I changed from third person perspective to first person POV!
      How do you like it? I want to know if you prefer this writing technique to the old one. It’s okay if you’d like me to return to third person view point. I’ll just rewrite this chapter and the next one.
      And I know there are questions unanswered, things unresolved. But things will gradually work out.
      Thank you for reading and please, COMMENT on this one because I need your direction.
      Peace

      • woo！now I see the big picture here! You’ve handled well with the child part, so can we see the duo have some passionate action next chapter? I am hanging and waiting, thanks for the adequate updating!

        • Passionate action, huh, well, maybe not the next chapter immediately but soon, I guarantee.
          There’s just so many emotions and complicated issues between the two.
          I hope you’ll enjoy this more. I’m actually improvising here.

        • Oh, I think I’ve read her stories. But lately I don’t have much time reading fanfic. I don’t know why, just have been busy here and there.
          I won’t disappear for two whole months, nevertheless! :)

    2. You did a great Job writing in first person! For me, i like third person versions more, but you don’t have to re write for me. I love the story and will read it in the version you give it us.

      Wow, Bette was so cold, but i hope Angelo will warm her heart.

      They are still married? Hmm…

      Can’t wait for their diner meeting on Monday.

      • Thank you very much for the encouragement!
        Bette is a bit heartless as she comes back. But kids, they have the power to capture one’s heart in no time. She will come around and set things right between her and her son.
        Yes, still married. They have so much history together and it’s kind of difficult for them to give that up.
        I hope you’ll continue to enjoy!

    7. RT,

      The Past was kind of Bad, the Present is Slightly Good but the Future of Bette, Tina and Angelo seems going to be Better :)

      Thanks for posting.

      Scribe

      • The past has some good memories in it, the present is complicated, the future, I promise, will be sweeter.
        Thanks for reading and commenting!

    8. That was great and the kid are so smart and cute, like him. Wow they still married, what a surprise, hope they will talk more and get to know each other again. Please post more, thanks

      • Yes, the kid is great! I wish I could have one of those in the future haha.
        They are still married, and a lot of unresolved issues in their relationship.
        Things will get better!
        Thanks for commenting.

    9. Threw me for loop completely. I would love to really the aftermath from when Bette heard Tina and her father conversation I mean after all these chapters thats what we been waiting for and the story just turn….but Shit I like this too I dont know I want it to be the way you written at first but its your choice and you are a brilliant, exquisite writer, I trust you lol!

      On the other hand wow Bette was a lil mean but can you blame her for the way she treated Tina, I still can’t believe how many chances Tina had to tell her and didn’t, and Marcus died awe how sad, I would love to see them have another baby but im thinking ahead, and can’t believe Tina still in touch with her dad but family is family.

      I guess im going to just see where this goes and enjoy every moment of it.

      • I know, it’s kind of a surprise isn’t it?! I was going for that kind of effect, actually. Besides, I can’t really go on with the confrontation anymore. That was just plain painful.
        Bette is really mean here. She has her reasons to be, and you’re right, Tina not telling her the truth on so many occasions is one of them.
        Marcus, oh I am sorry about him, too. But… to serve the plot…
        They still can have another baby. Just it’s really too long in the future for them to talk about having another kid. They got to get back together first!
        But it will all happen eventually!
        Thanks for commenting. And I wish you’ll enjoy it more!

      • Thank you! You are very kind.
        Ok, I’ll continue in the first person for more chapters and maybe I’ll return to third person perspective in later chapters!

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