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Round n Round We Go (Ch.15)
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“I know, I made him brush his teeth.” He threw his hand up and interrupted before I asked.
“Okay, thanks. I’ll pick him up tomorrow.” I said to him and reopened the boy’s bedroom. I had to kiss him goodnight. My troubled thought was weighing on me and I had to see his innocent little face before going to bed.
Angelo had his night light turned off. He told me that he was a big boy now, and a big brave boy didn’t need a small light in the night. He was right, with the gene of Marcus and that of a Russian descendant, the little guy could have passed as an 8 year old.
I watched him in the moon light for a while, and bent down to kiss his forehead.
“Mommy?” He asked sweetly and caught a strand of my hair. His big brown eyes fluttered and slowly opened up, and then he gave me the sweetest smile.
i caressed his puffy curly hair and kissed him again, whispering. “Sorry to wake you, baby.”
“What’s wrong, mom?” He was such a sensitive boy. I must have looked very pale that he got worried. “Someone mean to you?”
“No, baby, nobody’s mean to me.” I hesitated as I looked into the pools of moonlight. He was waiting, with his big brown eyes concerned and warm. And I decided to tell him the truth. “Mama B is coming to town.”
Angelo widened his eyes more and contemplated the situation. The curiosity was evident in those eyes. He tugged at his blanket. “I hope mama B likes me.”
“Oh baby, you’re such a sweet boy. Of course she’ll like you. There, there, go to sleep now.” Tears threatened to fall out. I had to keep my emotions in check in front of my son. So I tucked his arms back in the cover and reassured him.
Later that night, I retired to my bedroom, looked into the endless darkness, tossed and turned, struggling to get some sleep. And in the turbulence of nightmares, I dreamed about the all the last times of Bette Porter, the last time she made love to me, the last time she kissed me on the lips, the last time she wrapped her arms on my waist from behind, the last time she looked at me with those big brown doe eyes, the last time she talked to me…
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My dear readers!
I just did a major change in my story telling. I changed from third person perspective to first person POV!
How do you like it? I want to know if you prefer this writing technique to the old one. It’s okay if you’d like me to return to third person view point. I’ll just rewrite this chapter and the next one.
And I know there are questions unanswered, things unresolved. But things will gradually work out.
Thank you for reading and please, COMMENT on this one because I need your direction.
Peace
woo！now I see the big picture here! You’ve handled well with the child part, so can we see the duo have some passionate action next chapter? I am hanging and waiting, thanks for the adequate updating!
Passionate action, huh, well, maybe not the next chapter immediately but soon, I guarantee.
There’s just so many emotions and complicated issues between the two.
I hope you’ll enjoy this more. I’m actually improvising here.
And I am reading “down to earth ” by browneyedgirl28,and she hasn’t updated it for nearly two months ,soooo frustrating!
Oh, I think I’ve read her stories. But lately I don’t have much time reading fanfic. I don’t know why, just have been busy here and there.
I won’t disappear for two whole months, nevertheless! :)
You did a great Job writing in first person! For me, i like third person versions more, but you don’t have to re write for me. I love the story and will read it in the version you give it us.
Wow, Bette was so cold, but i hope Angelo will warm her heart.
They are still married? Hmm…
Can’t wait for their diner meeting on Monday.
Thank you very much for the encouragement!
Bette is a bit heartless as she comes back. But kids, they have the power to capture one’s heart in no time. She will come around and set things right between her and her son.
Yes, still married. They have so much history together and it’s kind of difficult for them to give that up.
I hope you’ll continue to enjoy!
Well Bette is a bitch, but I understand that, but pleas you have to sort that. Please please.
Haha she is kind of bitchy in this chapter.
I will absolutely make her come around to her senses.
Thanks for reading and commenting!
Nice….a little disappointed by the turn of events, but I’m sure there are happier days ahead!
Yes, that I can guarantee! Thank you for reading and commenting!
O.M.G!!!! i just love this story. please don’t let me wait to long for an update.
Won’t be long! I’m working on it!
Thanks for the support!
smart kid pps
yes, he is a smart one.
Thanks for commenting! Please continue to read and enjoy!
RT,
The Past was kind of Bad, the Present is Slightly Good but the Future of Bette, Tina and Angelo seems going to be Better :)
Thanks for posting.
Scribe
The past has some good memories in it, the present is complicated, the future, I promise, will be sweeter.
Thanks for reading and commenting!
That was great and the kid are so smart and cute, like him. Wow they still married, what a surprise, hope they will talk more and get to know each other again. Please post more, thanks
Yes, the kid is great! I wish I could have one of those in the future haha.
They are still married, and a lot of unresolved issues in their relationship.
Things will get better!
Thanks for commenting.
Threw me for loop completely. I would love to really the aftermath from when Bette heard Tina and her father conversation I mean after all these chapters thats what we been waiting for and the story just turn….but Shit I like this too I dont know I want it to be the way you written at first but its your choice and you are a brilliant, exquisite writer, I trust you lol!
On the other hand wow Bette was a lil mean but can you blame her for the way she treated Tina, I still can’t believe how many chances Tina had to tell her and didn’t, and Marcus died awe how sad, I would love to see them have another baby but im thinking ahead, and can’t believe Tina still in touch with her dad but family is family.
I guess im going to just see where this goes and enjoy every moment of it.
I know, it’s kind of a surprise isn’t it?! I was going for that kind of effect, actually. Besides, I can’t really go on with the confrontation anymore. That was just plain painful.
Bette is really mean here. She has her reasons to be, and you’re right, Tina not telling her the truth on so many occasions is one of them.
Marcus, oh I am sorry about him, too. But… to serve the plot…
They still can have another baby. Just it’s really too long in the future for them to talk about having another kid. They got to get back together first!
But it will all happen eventually!
Thanks for commenting. And I wish you’ll enjoy it more!
I understand Bette.Thank you for the update,PPS
Yes, she has the reasons to be mad. But she’ll come to her senses.
Thank you for reading and commenting! I’m working on it.
I love the story and will read whatever version you choose to write.
Thank you! You are very kind.
Ok, I’ll continue in the first person for more chapters and maybe I’ll return to third person perspective in later chapters!