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Round n Round We Go (Ch.19)
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The white smoke slowly but surely clouded her feelings. Her body, from her hair to her arms, her eye lids and her toes, became heavy all together. It might be fine if she just closed her eyes for one minute. Just one minute…
One minute…
It was her last thought before losing her consciousness to a terrible night of sleep.
Two hours ago, in Los Angeles.
A group of anxious people arrived at the St. Christopher Hospital after an ambulance. The paramedics jumped out of the ambulance first, and pushed the mobile bed out of it. Soon the bunch of people arrived at the bed’s side.
“Female, eighty-two years old, with chronicle minor sinus arrhythmia, she’s gone into a cardiac arrest.” One of the nurses informed the doctor who was waiting at the entrance.
“Left pupil dilated. Get her to the cube and start resuscitation.” The doctor ordered and put his stethoscope to the patient’s chest. “Let’s get her a CT. It’s very likely that she has an explosive aneurysm.”
A young man in his twenties were particular emotional. He wouldn’t let go his hand on the bed. “Please, please grandma… wake up, talk to me… Please doctors, tell me she’s gonna be fine!” His eyes were red and teary, and his hands were shaky. He nearly tripped as he ran beside the paramedics into the emergency room.
“Sir, sir we need you to let go.” The doctor tried to peel the man’s hand from the bed’s railing.
The young woman beside him was trying her best to keep him calm. “Honey, let go. The doctors are gonna save her. Please, just let go…”
The other man, older, was more calm than the both of them. “Steven, you have to let the doctors treat her.” He blocked the young man from the hospital bed. “Listen, listen to me! You cannot panic now. They’re gonna do whatever it takes to save your grandmother.”
“She… I don’t understand… she’s been healthy. My grandmother’s been healthy.” Steven backed to the corner of the emergency room and against the wall, he sank to the floor. He buried his head in his arms, and trembled. “What do I do, James?”
The older man looked at his sister and sighed heavily. “Elisa, can you go to the nurse station and get a form? Steven, you need to fill out a form so the hospital can admit your grandmother. That’s what you do now.” That was all he could do now.
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My dear readers! Here I present you the beginning of part three.
See? I’m fixing things. And in the following chapters I’ll fix more.
I’ve heard some responses that you like third person perspective better.
Do you like me returning to this kind of narrative?
Peace.
Enjoyed it. Glad to see they are making progress. Thanks
Thank you. Hope you’ll continue to enjoy.
Awesome chapter!! Let the healing begin
Yeah! Now you see that it’s gonna be all okay. Thanks for commenting.
Thank you for posting…. Please fix them. Happy that grandma still kicks in spiritually for Bette & Tina.. Please give us another chapter soon….
Haha, grandma rocks!
Sorry about the long wait.
Hope you’ll like the next chapter.
Awww! I just love this chapter. So happy that they have reunited again but of course I am still expecting more drama comsidering that Kate is still in the picture and I am concerned with Bette’s health. I hope it is nothing serious :)
Thanks for the update.
Kate will be right outta the picture I guarantee you that!
And Bette’s health, it doesn’t look so pretty now, but it shall be fixed soon as well.
You’ve been very supportive, I really appreciate it.
Please continue to read and comment.
That’s great and sad is sue is gone and hope her dead will bring back Bette and Tina. Please post more, thanks
Yes, I am actually feeling pretty bad about letting Sue die.
Hopefully everything will be fine and they won’t disappoint the old woman.
LOL So Tina gets yet another girlfriend. Nothing makes me lose interest in a story faster than them fucking other people, while supposedly “loving” each other. That’s just ridic. This story could go so good after the last epic chapter. Meh
It’s good to read another chapter and a good one ….
Please post soon :-D
I’m glad.
Thank you for commenting. I hope you’ll enjoy more.
The dream part is very Chinese, suppose that you are quite a quirky one. So i am still following your story, i can see you put a lot in this story,looking for the next chapter, hope they would kiss and make up,and live happy after.
Well actually the dream was inspired by Grey’s Anatomy, when Meredith was struggling with her life, she met her mother, who was dying, and her mother gave her a push to go back.
R.I.P. Sue thanks for taking care b of our beloved Tina, and yes im happy Bette and Tina finally came to their senses and took the first step of acknowledging their still deep love for each other…I dont have much to say on this chapter ready for update.
Yes, rest in peace indeed. She’s been such a help along the way.
Thanks for the comment. Hope you’ll enjoy the next.
Second time reading this chapter..love it! Hopefully, they will begin again. Will we soon learn about Bette’s health. I don’t like her symptoms. PPS!
I’m glad!
And yes, I am going to deal with Bette’s health issues, as soon as the situation clear up a bit more.