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    Round n Round We Go (Ch.19)

    “Have you called Tina?” Elisa asked her brother.

    James nodded. “Yes, she’s on her way over.”

    As he spoke, a blonde woman rushed into the hospital and searched around the place. Her head of golden hair a bit messy, and mascara was ruined. “Oh my god, Steven.” She saw the three of her closest friends and ran over to them. “Where is she now?”

    “Emergency cube.” James answered and brought the blonde woman into a squeeze.

    An intern came to them with a clip board. “Which one of you is Susanne Heminger’s immediate family?”

    “I am.” Steven struggled to stand up from the floor. Tina and James supported him.

    The indifferent intern stuffed the board to his hand. “Doctor Clarkson is going to perform an open-heart surgery on the patient. He needs a consent form to do it.”

    “An open-heart surgery?” All of their faces went pale at the sound of that.

    “Yes, that is correct.”

    “And he… he’s going to save her?”

    “Sir I cannot guarantee you that. But it is the best option under this circumstance.”

    Steven immediately signed the paper work. “Please, please make her better.”

    “We’ll do our best.” The intern collected his signature and quickly walked away.

    With the intern disappeared behind the slide door of the OR, the group fell into a heartbreaking, terrifying silence.

     

    “Ten blade.” Dr. Clarkson started the procedure as soon as the anesthetist gave him the clear nod.

    The poor old woman had a dozen of tubes on her and was put on a bypass. The doctor slowly sliced her chest open and her weakened heart was exposed. The bleeding of her aneurysm was still not under control.

    “Suction.” The doctor ordered. “Look at her heart. It’s weakening by the second. Move people!”

    The assistant doctors and nurses sped up their movement.

     

    Tina put her hand in Steven’s. He gave her a squeeze. They must get through this together.

    James let his sister lean on his shoulder and weep a little bit. His calmness was crumbling down.

    A deadly atmosphere shrouded them. And the strangling pressure continued to hover on top of them for the next three hours.

     

    A machine monitoring the patient’s vitals shrieked an eerie beep.

    “She’s having ventricular fibrillation! Charge to 100.”

    The nurse squeezed some lube on the paddles and rubbed them together.

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    1. Author:
      My dear readers! Here I present you the beginning of part three.
      See? I’m fixing things. And in the following chapters I’ll fix more.
      I’ve heard some responses that you like third person perspective better.
      Do you like me returning to this kind of narrative?
      Peace.

    2. Thank you for posting…. Please fix them. Happy that grandma still kicks in spiritually for Bette & Tina.. Please give us another chapter soon….

    3. Awww! I just love this chapter. So happy that they have reunited again but of course I am still expecting more drama comsidering that Kate is still in the picture and I am concerned with Bette’s health. I hope it is nothing serious :)

      Thanks for the update.

      • Kate will be right outta the picture I guarantee you that!
        And Bette’s health, it doesn’t look so pretty now, but it shall be fixed soon as well.
        You’ve been very supportive, I really appreciate it.
        Please continue to read and comment.

      • Yes, I am actually feeling pretty bad about letting Sue die.
        Hopefully everything will be fine and they won’t disappoint the old woman.

    4. LOL So Tina gets yet another girlfriend. Nothing makes me lose interest in a story faster than them fucking other people, while supposedly “loving” each other. That’s just ridic. This story could go so good after the last epic chapter. Meh

    5. The dream part is very Chinese, suppose that you are quite a quirky one. So i am still following your story, i can see you put a lot in this story,looking for the next chapter, hope they would kiss and make up,and live happy after.

      • Well actually the dream was inspired by Grey’s Anatomy, when Meredith was struggling with her life, she met her mother, who was dying, and her mother gave her a push to go back.

    6. R.I.P. Sue thanks for taking care b of our beloved Tina, and yes im happy Bette and Tina finally came to their senses and took the first step of acknowledging their still deep love for each other…I dont have much to say on this chapter ready for update.

    7. Second time reading this chapter..love it! Hopefully, they will begin again. Will we soon learn about Bette’s health. I don’t like her symptoms. PPS!

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