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Round n Round We Go (Ch.19)
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“Charge.” Clarkson took over the paddles and heard the hum that indicated that the defibrillator was ready. “Clear.”
People temporarily scattered around the old woman. The doctor put the small paddles on her heart and gave it a shock.
“We’re losing her! Charge to 200.” The line on the monitor had not changed. “Clear!”
Beep—
“Clear!”
Bette found herself trapped in a dream, a strange and dark dream. She wanted to wake up, she wanted to check the time and see if Michelangelo called. But she was trapped.
It was like someone grabbed her on the wrist. She felt the pull and she looked back.
“Sue? What are you doing here?”
The old woman looked preoccupied, and weak, and old. “You asked me to take care of them.”
“I…” She never said it out loud.
“I did my best, Bette.” Sue spoke slowly. Her voice sounded hollow, but ever so mild.
This was a hallucination. Bette frowned to herself. “I believe you.”
“It’s your turn now.”
“Sue…”
“Don’t hurt them. Don’t hurt her. Protect your family. Promise me.” Sue’s fingers went limp.
Bette was confused, and she saw the light behind the old woman’s back. The light so bright that she had to squint, and she couldn’t reach out to Sue. It threatened to swallow them both. “I… I promise.” She said, not really understanding what was happening. But she felt the desperation here.
The old woman looked almost peaceful. She gave her a smile, and turned around to walk into the whiteness.
“Sue! Sue! Where are you going?” The light was dimming. And as if there was a door, the old woman disappeared behind the door and it went completely dark again. Bette was like a disoriented child. She was lost in her dream.
The doctor dropped the electronic paddles. “Owen, add pressure to the bleeding point. Push another unit of epi. I’m going in.” He dipped his hand into the hollow of the open chest and held the heart in his hand and began the heart massage.
“Doctor Clarkson. The valves are too fragile.”
Beep—
“Doctor Clarkson!” Owen stopped the man. “We lost her.”
“Doctor Clarkson, you should call it.” The other doctor who scrubbed in on the surgery took her cap and mask off.
Clarkson had his shoulders slumped. He glanced at the digital clock. “Time of death, twenty-three eighteen.”
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My dear readers! Here I present you the beginning of part three.
See? I’m fixing things. And in the following chapters I’ll fix more.
I’ve heard some responses that you like third person perspective better.
Do you like me returning to this kind of narrative?
Peace.
Enjoyed it. Glad to see they are making progress. Thanks
Thank you. Hope you’ll continue to enjoy.
Awesome chapter!! Let the healing begin
Yeah! Now you see that it’s gonna be all okay. Thanks for commenting.
Thank you for posting…. Please fix them. Happy that grandma still kicks in spiritually for Bette & Tina.. Please give us another chapter soon….
Haha, grandma rocks!
Sorry about the long wait.
Hope you’ll like the next chapter.
Awww! I just love this chapter. So happy that they have reunited again but of course I am still expecting more drama comsidering that Kate is still in the picture and I am concerned with Bette’s health. I hope it is nothing serious :)
Thanks for the update.
Kate will be right outta the picture I guarantee you that!
And Bette’s health, it doesn’t look so pretty now, but it shall be fixed soon as well.
You’ve been very supportive, I really appreciate it.
Please continue to read and comment.
That’s great and sad is sue is gone and hope her dead will bring back Bette and Tina. Please post more, thanks
Yes, I am actually feeling pretty bad about letting Sue die.
Hopefully everything will be fine and they won’t disappoint the old woman.
LOL So Tina gets yet another girlfriend. Nothing makes me lose interest in a story faster than them fucking other people, while supposedly “loving” each other. That’s just ridic. This story could go so good after the last epic chapter. Meh
It’s good to read another chapter and a good one ….
Please post soon :-D
I’m glad.
Thank you for commenting. I hope you’ll enjoy more.
The dream part is very Chinese, suppose that you are quite a quirky one. So i am still following your story, i can see you put a lot in this story,looking for the next chapter, hope they would kiss and make up,and live happy after.
Well actually the dream was inspired by Grey’s Anatomy, when Meredith was struggling with her life, she met her mother, who was dying, and her mother gave her a push to go back.
R.I.P. Sue thanks for taking care b of our beloved Tina, and yes im happy Bette and Tina finally came to their senses and took the first step of acknowledging their still deep love for each other…I dont have much to say on this chapter ready for update.
Yes, rest in peace indeed. She’s been such a help along the way.
Thanks for the comment. Hope you’ll enjoy the next.
Second time reading this chapter..love it! Hopefully, they will begin again. Will we soon learn about Bette’s health. I don’t like her symptoms. PPS!
I’m glad!
And yes, I am going to deal with Bette’s health issues, as soon as the situation clear up a bit more.