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    Round n Round We Go (Ch.20)

    Story written on June 27, 2014 by robyntibetter.
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    Slowly, very slowly, the little shiny stones were put in place. Only some of them fell far under the deck. Bette reached in and felt for the pieces, and her fingers met a cubic shaped object. The texture was velvety, a familiar but distant touch. She retrieved the small box, and before the realization hit

    Slowly, very slowly, the little shiny stones were put in place. Only some of them fell far under the deck. Bette reached in and felt for the pieces, and her fingers met a cubic shaped object. The texture was velvety, a familiar but distant touch. She retrieved the small box, and before the realization hit her, she opened it.

    A mildly shining rock lay quietly on the silky cloth. It was the ring that her great grandmother passed down to her. It was the ring she used at her proposal.

    The brunette sat on the floor, recalled the time she put the box in the furthest corner of the drawer. She traced the silk liner with a finger. A small smile tugged at her lips. The ring used to fit Tina’s ivory finger so well. The second the blonde gave it back to her, she heard her heart shattered into a million pieces.

    The inner line shrieked and snapped her out of her thoughts. “Elizabeth,” Melvin inquired what was taking her so long, “you ought to be in the lobby an hour before the event. Now you are fifteen minutes behind.”

    Bette quickly stood up from the floor, and for some reason unbeknownst to herself, she threw the little box into her purse. Forget about the accessories, she shook her head and left the rest of the jewelry scattered on the carpet.

    The driver had been waiting for her. He looked on, a bit concerned, that the young woman came down stairs with her hair still damp, wrong high heels for the dress, and a single hand purse. “Are you alright, Miss? You don’t look so fine.”

    “Ah I’ll be okay, just running late.” She climbed inside. The driver informed her that her father’s car had already taken off.

    Bette crawled up in the back seat, running her fingers through her hair. The street ran backwards on the sides of the windows, and the great Brooklyn Bridge came more and clearer in the view. The young woman wanted to go through the speech she was going to deliver on the dinner party. But as she arrived at the first paragraph, she already felt sick because it had been on her mind for over a week. Every word, every punctuation, was imprinted in her brain. She was almost there, by the end of the night, there would be no reporters, no board members, no richie-rich celebrities or suck up business partners. Everything was so prepared that there was absolutely nothing else to take up her mind.

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    1. Author:
      To my readers who appreciate my work and are patient to wait for my posts, thank you very much.
      You see now, it’s all going to turn well. And I know there are still issues unresolved, like Bette’s illness, I will get to that very quickly.
      I know, I’ve been dawdling for a while. But it’s the World Cup! And I have not missed a single game, and that’s a new record. The fever is running pretty high in my country. Hope you can all enjoy the games.

    2. I have so enjoyed this story! This chapter was filled with many issues. I love that everything finally dawned on Bette. Please let them heal and grow old together. Thank you for your gift of writing!

      • The issues are resolving gradually but surely. I assure you that they will have a nice ending.
        Thank you so much for the supportive comment. I truly appreciate it.

    3. My God! it was breathtaking.
      Worth waiting all these days by this chapter, was iincrivel!
      My Congratulations, I love this story.
      Note: Actually here in Brazil we are living and breathes football, and you
      can imagine how the party in this country.
      The Brazil literally stops when our national team plays.
      I hope that your selection proceed to the next phase.
      (Excuse my English, it is not my official language.
      I’m from Brazil)

      • God I love soccer so much! And Brazil has done really well with this year’s World Cup. I almost shed tears when Neymar injured his back and was sent to the hospital. Such a shame.
        I hope you can enjoy more.
        And probably one day I’ll pay a visit to Brazil. It just seems dreamy, the beaches, the sea, the stunning girls in bikinis ;p

    4. RT,

      Football is not really big here in our country so I can’t really relate with you guys but I hope that you and mscully are really enjoying the world cup fever :)

      As for the update, I am happy about Bette’s realization. Hopefully they will be able to resolve their issues. Clearly Kate can’t match BP so it was good that she decided to leave TK.

      Thanks again for the update.

      Love love love!

      • I’m really enjoying it, and it’s seriously gotten in the way of my sleep.
        I’m real jealous of the residents in the western hemisphere now :P

        Yeah, I never thought somebody would be as good as Bette for Tina, and frankly I didn’t like Kate Arden, even in the show. She’s cool tho, as long as she keeps to a distance.

        You’ve been real supportive.
        Thanks thanks thanks!

    5. I know, not often I write a comment, but I read each chapter.
      I’m really glad that the story is out in the direction of Bette and Tina :)
      They need to discuss and solve a lot of things, but I trust in the power of love!
      Bette finally realized what happened with Tina, and she made ​​the right decision that what is really important in her life.
      I look forward to the sequel!

      • You really get me! Yes, she finally came to the realization of what is important in her life, not money, not work, definitely not her father…
        And now in the next chapter, they’re facing a crisis. So keep your belief in the power of love.
        Thank you for the comment. It means a lot.

      • Hahaha, sounds like you’re enjoying the ride! Anyway, if you can’t get enough, then I have a goal to give more, don’t I.
        Thanks for the comment.

      • Wow, all capitals, you do like the line a lot, don’t you.
        Well I’m so glad then.
        I hope you’ll enjoy more, despite how terrible a person I am to pull another cliff hanger in the next chapter :p

    11. Thanks for the update ! I wish You could write more often (a bit selfish I know !) because it’s one of my favorite ;-)
      And BTW two words : go Belgium !!!

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