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    Round n Round We Go (Ch.20)

    Story written on June 27, 2014 by robyntibetter.
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    Nothing… It scared her. The less she had to worry, the more she wanted to think about Tina, about the funeral, about the eulogy, about their last conversation before she left LA. The street started to pack up with vehicles and the line was already pretty long at the entry of the bridge. The car

    Nothing… It scared her. The less she had to worry, the more she wanted to think about Tina, about the funeral, about the eulogy, about their last conversation before she left LA. The street started to pack up with vehicles and the line was already pretty long at the entry of the bridge. The car slowed down, and the slight humming of the engine lured the tired brunette to a slumber.

    Her last thought was how the ring fitted Tina so beautifully.

    It seemed impossible, but even when she was relaxed in the back of the car, her mind was running a thousand miles. There were voices, muffled at first, and gradually becoming clear. And there were images, fragments at first, but also starting to play like an old black-and-white movie.

    “I did my best.” The old soft voice said. “It’s your turn now.”

    “Sue…” Then there was her own voice. “I promise.”

    “I wouldn’t be standing her if it wasn’t for you.” The vague figure several inches away from her, standing on the stage, trembling. “You found me. You found me and I owe my life to you.”

    Sam’s pale face.

    “She was not well, Bette. She hurt herself a lot.” Sue was looking at her with sad eyes. It was an accuse, but it made her guilty.

    Tina’s big ugly watch with wide leather belt. They way she played with it when she was nervous.

    In the deepest consciousness of her sanity, Bette started to put the pieces together. The fragments, the voices, the saddened looks, the nervous habit, they all started to make sense.

    “Oh my god. Oh my fucking god.” Sweat broke on her forehead. Bette felt the weight on her chest, pushing down on her, extruding the air in her lungs.

    The driver heard the weird breathing and he looked into the rear mirror. “Miss? Miss Porter?” Bette was having a panic attack, in her sleep. The line wasn’t moving so far, so he squeezed himself out of his driver’s cubicle and shook the brunette slightly on her shoulder. “Miss!”

    “Turn around.” Bette suddenly shot open her eyes. “Go to JFK.”

    “Miss Porter… We are in the line to get on Brooklyn Bridge.” The driver widened his eyes at the request. If Bette could see herself, she’d see the craze in her eyes now.

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    1. Author:
      To my readers who appreciate my work and are patient to wait for my posts, thank you very much.
      You see now, it’s all going to turn well. And I know there are still issues unresolved, like Bette’s illness, I will get to that very quickly.
      I know, I’ve been dawdling for a while. But it’s the World Cup! And I have not missed a single game, and that’s a new record. The fever is running pretty high in my country. Hope you can all enjoy the games.

    2. I have so enjoyed this story! This chapter was filled with many issues. I love that everything finally dawned on Bette. Please let them heal and grow old together. Thank you for your gift of writing!

      • The issues are resolving gradually but surely. I assure you that they will have a nice ending.
        Thank you so much for the supportive comment. I truly appreciate it.

    3. My God! it was breathtaking.
      Worth waiting all these days by this chapter, was iincrivel!
      My Congratulations, I love this story.
      Note: Actually here in Brazil we are living and breathes football, and you
      can imagine how the party in this country.
      The Brazil literally stops when our national team plays.
      I hope that your selection proceed to the next phase.
      (Excuse my English, it is not my official language.
      I’m from Brazil)

      • God I love soccer so much! And Brazil has done really well with this year’s World Cup. I almost shed tears when Neymar injured his back and was sent to the hospital. Such a shame.
        I hope you can enjoy more.
        And probably one day I’ll pay a visit to Brazil. It just seems dreamy, the beaches, the sea, the stunning girls in bikinis ;p

    4. RT,

      Football is not really big here in our country so I can’t really relate with you guys but I hope that you and mscully are really enjoying the world cup fever :)

      As for the update, I am happy about Bette’s realization. Hopefully they will be able to resolve their issues. Clearly Kate can’t match BP so it was good that she decided to leave TK.

      Thanks again for the update.

      Love love love!

      • I’m really enjoying it, and it’s seriously gotten in the way of my sleep.
        I’m real jealous of the residents in the western hemisphere now :P

        Yeah, I never thought somebody would be as good as Bette for Tina, and frankly I didn’t like Kate Arden, even in the show. She’s cool tho, as long as she keeps to a distance.

        You’ve been real supportive.
        Thanks thanks thanks!

    5. I know, not often I write a comment, but I read each chapter.
      I’m really glad that the story is out in the direction of Bette and Tina :)
      They need to discuss and solve a lot of things, but I trust in the power of love!
      Bette finally realized what happened with Tina, and she made ​​the right decision that what is really important in her life.
      I look forward to the sequel!

      • You really get me! Yes, she finally came to the realization of what is important in her life, not money, not work, definitely not her father…
        And now in the next chapter, they’re facing a crisis. So keep your belief in the power of love.
        Thank you for the comment. It means a lot.

      • Hahaha, sounds like you’re enjoying the ride! Anyway, if you can’t get enough, then I have a goal to give more, don’t I.
        Thanks for the comment.

      • Wow, all capitals, you do like the line a lot, don’t you.
        Well I’m so glad then.
        I hope you’ll enjoy more, despite how terrible a person I am to pull another cliff hanger in the next chapter :p

    11. Thanks for the update ! I wish You could write more often (a bit selfish I know !) because it’s one of my favorite ;-)
      And BTW two words : go Belgium !!!

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