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    Round n Round We Go (Ch.20)

    Story written on June 27, 2014 by robyntibetter.
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    “Turn the fucking car around now!” The brunette pushed the man back to his seat and demanded. “I cannot believe I didn’t see it this whole time! I cannot believe…” She held her head in her hands and murmured, sobbed. The driver thought she went temporarily nuts. He contacted the driver of Melvin’s car. “Sir, we might have a

    “Turn the fucking car around now!” The brunette pushed the man back to his seat and demanded. “I cannot believe I didn’t see it this whole time! I cannot believe…” She held her head in her hands and murmured, sobbed.

    The driver thought she went temporarily nuts. He contacted the driver of Melvin’s car. “Sir, we might have a situation here.” He explained to the boss what just happened.

    Melvin was fumed. “Where are you?”

    “About to get on the bridge, sir.”

    Then there was no response from the other side. Not far ahead in the line, a side door of a vintage Lincoln limousine cracked open and a man in tux came down. He walked through the cars and stopped at the other limo. With formidable might, he dragged the door open. “What are you trying to do, Elizabeth?”

    “I have to go back, dad! I need to go to LA, now!”

    “LA again? What on earth in Los Angeles that is more important than this?” Melvin was ready to yell some sense into his daughter. LA, he ground his teeth. It was always LA. Every time his daughter went back there, she lost her cool and couldn’t concentrate on her work for a long while. He knew exactly what was the cause, or who was the cause.

    “Everything!”

    “You are not going anywhere, young lady.”

    “I have to, dad. I must leave.”

    “Is it about that Christina Kennard again, Elizabeth? What business do you think you have to do with her?”

    Bette shrugged away from his hands and started to open up the door on the other side. “I know you don’t like her, dad. But it’s my fault, it’s been all my fault.”

    “What are you talking about? She stole from you.”

    “No! She almost died for me.” The dread and the heaviness on her chest were unbearable as she said the words. Bette scooted out of the limousine, and walked in her high heels across the road.

    “Elizabeth.” Melvin couldn’t quite believe his eyes. He was completely at loss and there was even no room left for anger. “Where are you going?! The dinner party is in your honor!”

    “I’m sorry, daddy.” She knew she let him down. But it was not going to prevent her from going. She didn’t care what he was going to tell the guests, she didn’t care what the press was going to say. She had one goal, that was to right her wrongs.

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    1. Author:
      To my readers who appreciate my work and are patient to wait for my posts, thank you very much.
      You see now, it’s all going to turn well. And I know there are still issues unresolved, like Bette’s illness, I will get to that very quickly.
      I know, I’ve been dawdling for a while. But it’s the World Cup! And I have not missed a single game, and that’s a new record. The fever is running pretty high in my country. Hope you can all enjoy the games.

    2. I have so enjoyed this story! This chapter was filled with many issues. I love that everything finally dawned on Bette. Please let them heal and grow old together. Thank you for your gift of writing!

      • The issues are resolving gradually but surely. I assure you that they will have a nice ending.
        Thank you so much for the supportive comment. I truly appreciate it.

    3. My God! it was breathtaking.
      Worth waiting all these days by this chapter, was iincrivel!
      My Congratulations, I love this story.
      Note: Actually here in Brazil we are living and breathes football, and you
      can imagine how the party in this country.
      The Brazil literally stops when our national team plays.
      I hope that your selection proceed to the next phase.
      (Excuse my English, it is not my official language.
      I’m from Brazil)

      • God I love soccer so much! And Brazil has done really well with this year’s World Cup. I almost shed tears when Neymar injured his back and was sent to the hospital. Such a shame.
        I hope you can enjoy more.
        And probably one day I’ll pay a visit to Brazil. It just seems dreamy, the beaches, the sea, the stunning girls in bikinis ;p

    4. RT,

      Football is not really big here in our country so I can’t really relate with you guys but I hope that you and mscully are really enjoying the world cup fever :)

      As for the update, I am happy about Bette’s realization. Hopefully they will be able to resolve their issues. Clearly Kate can’t match BP so it was good that she decided to leave TK.

      Thanks again for the update.

      Love love love!

      • I’m really enjoying it, and it’s seriously gotten in the way of my sleep.
        I’m real jealous of the residents in the western hemisphere now :P

        Yeah, I never thought somebody would be as good as Bette for Tina, and frankly I didn’t like Kate Arden, even in the show. She’s cool tho, as long as she keeps to a distance.

        You’ve been real supportive.
        Thanks thanks thanks!

    5. I know, not often I write a comment, but I read each chapter.
      I’m really glad that the story is out in the direction of Bette and Tina :)
      They need to discuss and solve a lot of things, but I trust in the power of love!
      Bette finally realized what happened with Tina, and she made ​​the right decision that what is really important in her life.
      I look forward to the sequel!

      • You really get me! Yes, she finally came to the realization of what is important in her life, not money, not work, definitely not her father…
        And now in the next chapter, they’re facing a crisis. So keep your belief in the power of love.
        Thank you for the comment. It means a lot.

      • Hahaha, sounds like you’re enjoying the ride! Anyway, if you can’t get enough, then I have a goal to give more, don’t I.
        Thanks for the comment.

      • Wow, all capitals, you do like the line a lot, don’t you.
        Well I’m so glad then.
        I hope you’ll enjoy more, despite how terrible a person I am to pull another cliff hanger in the next chapter :p

    11. Thanks for the update ! I wish You could write more often (a bit selfish I know !) because it’s one of my favorite ;-)
      And BTW two words : go Belgium !!!

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