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Round n Round We Go (Ch.23)
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“Fuck off.”
“No, I mean, it’s great, Bette.” The careless tone was gone. Alice came to put a hand on her forearm. “It’s great, that you are in love again. Actually, it makes sense. You were the perfect couple. No one could think of a reason that you shouldn’t be together. Even you said yourself that Tina was the best that you’ve ever had. I’ve never heard you talking about another like that again. I’m happy for you.”
“Thanks, Al.”
“You’re welcome. Now what do you have in plan so far?” Alice finally remembered to ask what the event was going to be like. She was, once in a decade, taking it very seriously. And her dedication convinced Bette to let her handle the part after her proposal. While she talked about how fabulous their wedding ceremony would be, and got rejected on most of her hilarious ideas, she felt the brunette squinting at her. “Do I have something on my face?”
“I don’t remember saying anything about Tina to you. I was talking to…” Shane, would be the person she trusted to keep a secret. After their first night together, and the unforeseeable visit from grandmother, Bette shared the news of her engagement with Shane, commenting that she’d never find anybody as perfect as Tina. “Tina is the best I’ve ever had.” was her precise words. Shane would’ve kept a secret for her, so if Alice knew, it could only mean… Bette gasped and shot a stink look at her friend. “Alice…!” Then to emphasize her point, she threw a pillow at the blonde woman.
“Ouch!” Alice jumped up to defend herself with the pillow in her grip.
Only had she hit Bette with it twice, Tina came back. Witnessing the two pillow fight like children, she intervened with a growl. “Hey, hey you two, what are you doing now?”
“I’d have no mercy on you if you’re not in a hospital bed.”
Bette made a face and hid behind Tina. “She always listens to conversations that are not meant for her. Get rid of her, T.”
“Well, lunch time’s up, Al, we can go to the cafeteria and get something ourselves.” The blonde escorted Alice out to the hallway where they met the nurse that brought Bette’s lunch.
Alice picked up the cap of the container and drooled a little at the delicious package. “Real VIP lunch, hey?”
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So, more fun and happiness, here they are.
I think it’s so very nice of you to ask about my last story, the Lucky One. I started this one and thought that it’ll be a short sideway story, wouldn’t take much time. But it proved that I was wrong. The readers liked it and requested me to explore further into it. I got too distracted by this story.
I will go back to the Lucky One as I end this one. It’s still in the plotting progress.
But I think I’d take a breather too. College starts this fall and I’m traveling over 7000 miles to study in a different country. Soon my life would get pretty busy. I’ll try to write on holidays.
Now please be patient with me.
I hope you like this chapter, and there’s gonna be another if you’d want that.
Peace
Another chapter!great work,although I stopped leaving message,but I admit I check your update everyday.ha.
Another chapter!great work,although I stopped leaving message,but I admit I check your update everyday.ha.
easy on the college part,i’m sure you’ll do great,believe me ,it’ll be so much fun.but keep posting while having fun.
Amazing amazing ….. I love the nurse ! Great interaction, please continue the love portion.. Can’t wait for the wedding celebrations.
Btw, where are you studying… All the best in whatever you are in… Good luck !
Thanks for this another one just the same for the wedding would be great!!
Prrrrrfect!!!
Good luck with your study in the fall.
Where are going for your study?
Loved the update, it was beautiful written and it was time they got to the loving time.
I hope you will update before you move away for your study.
Thanks for the update. Good luck with school.
That was sweet and hot, love it. Thanks for the update my friend
This was a amazing chapter and I love every word of it…Awe Michaelanglo is in love so cute and adorable, but also so sad because most time little kids get their little hearts broken at that age and many more times growing up, hopefully LIllian be ok so he will spared…I dont think I can deal with you taking breathers from writing lol as these stories fill me up but real life is more important…and can I just say yayyy your going to finish The Lucky One, you’re just awesome!
RT,
I can’t believe that I missed to comment on your chapter 22.. tsk! tsk! tsk!
Anyway, your previous chapters and this latest chapter are all the same. They are the same in AWESOMEness and EPICness. Hi hi!
Btw, i’m with your other readers with the ff. Issues:
1) I do like more chapters for this book
2) I want the continuation of The Lucky One
3) I wish u all the best in your studies
4) I am willing to wait for your stories even if you will not be posting it as often as you could.
Again, thanks for droppin by in my comment box. It means so much to me to know that one of my fave ff writer is also reading my ff.
Love love love,
Scribe
I loved it!
I loved the banter between them, and it was a sweet scene between Bette and her son, when talking about his love. I’m so glad that Bette gave good advice to her son, who will follow it.
I loved the sex scene between Bette and Tina nurse :P
It was a wonderful picture, as looked clean and seemed to love in each other’s eyes.
Thank you.
Please, please, please finish The Lucky One !!!!
Our Roby! Incredible chapter, loved!
You as always writing superbly.
Made me want to eat pudding, and that sweet is not my
favorite.
I know that college will occupy much of your time, but
please! not abandon us.
I’ll wait for a new chapter with the patience of Buddha.
Study and writing form with louvor.E contunue great story
B & T.
Great to see them being loving and playful again. It would be great to see more chapters of this story – and also to see the Lucky One finished! Thank you for posting and good luck with your studies!