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Round n Round We Go (Ch.23)
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“I would if you’d kept me in the loop, I mean what the hell? I had to know from James and I was worried sick as fu—”
“Language, Al.” Both the other two women interrupted her just in time. Tina covered Angelo’s ears with her hands. “You know what, why don’t we let you two reminisce while Angelo and I go pick out books from the library.” She stood up and motioned the willing boy to leave with her. Alice could be really crazy like a high speed train out of control once she started.
Bette nodded and tilted her head to receive a short kiss from her lover before they went out. Michelangelo was observing them. He found this new routine between his parents very affectionate. Since very young, he envied other kids whose parents, gay or not, could be together, and both show up at school gatherings. And now, seeing the obvious love between them, he was certain that after next year’s gathering, all his classmates would envy him, for having two beautiful mothers.
Alice watched them, then continued to smile her gossipy smile. As the blonde and the boy disappeared to the elevator, she turned back to the brunette. “So, this is interesting, last time I checked, you two were ‘indifferent acquaintances’, now you’re all lovey dovey and shit.” She wiggled her fingers to do the air quote, knowing that Bette hated it when she did that. “I think ‘I told you so’ is very appropriate in a situation like this, wouldn’t you agree, little lovely?” Then she stuck her lips up to imitate the sound of kissing.
“Ok, I probably deserved that.” Bette gave in, made a face of disgust. “Just… don’t do that again.”
“Tell me everything, tell me everything!” The blonde jumped and knelt on the bed beside Bette, all smug with her own insight, requiring to hear some juicy details.
Bette had to admit that her friend had been right this whole time. She hadn’t forgotten, she cared about Tina, she loved Tina. So she told Alice about bumping into the engagement ring box in her drawer, and then she had an epiphanic dream, then she ditched the dinner party to win Tina back.
Alice was impressed with the part that she challenged her omnipotent father. She clicked her tongue and bobbed her head up and down. “Nice.”
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So, more fun and happiness, here they are.
I think it’s so very nice of you to ask about my last story, the Lucky One. I started this one and thought that it’ll be a short sideway story, wouldn’t take much time. But it proved that I was wrong. The readers liked it and requested me to explore further into it. I got too distracted by this story.
I will go back to the Lucky One as I end this one. It’s still in the plotting progress.
But I think I’d take a breather too. College starts this fall and I’m traveling over 7000 miles to study in a different country. Soon my life would get pretty busy. I’ll try to write on holidays.
Now please be patient with me.
I hope you like this chapter, and there’s gonna be another if you’d want that.
Peace
Another chapter!great work,although I stopped leaving message,but I admit I check your update everyday.ha.
Another chapter!great work,although I stopped leaving message,but I admit I check your update everyday.ha.
easy on the college part,i’m sure you’ll do great,believe me ,it’ll be so much fun.but keep posting while having fun.
Amazing amazing ….. I love the nurse ! Great interaction, please continue the love portion.. Can’t wait for the wedding celebrations.
Btw, where are you studying… All the best in whatever you are in… Good luck !
Thanks for this another one just the same for the wedding would be great!!
Prrrrrfect!!!
Good luck with your study in the fall.
Where are going for your study?
Loved the update, it was beautiful written and it was time they got to the loving time.
I hope you will update before you move away for your study.
Thanks for the update. Good luck with school.
That was sweet and hot, love it. Thanks for the update my friend
This was a amazing chapter and I love every word of it…Awe Michaelanglo is in love so cute and adorable, but also so sad because most time little kids get their little hearts broken at that age and many more times growing up, hopefully LIllian be ok so he will spared…I dont think I can deal with you taking breathers from writing lol as these stories fill me up but real life is more important…and can I just say yayyy your going to finish The Lucky One, you’re just awesome!
RT,
I can’t believe that I missed to comment on your chapter 22.. tsk! tsk! tsk!
Anyway, your previous chapters and this latest chapter are all the same. They are the same in AWESOMEness and EPICness. Hi hi!
Btw, i’m with your other readers with the ff. Issues:
1) I do like more chapters for this book
2) I want the continuation of The Lucky One
3) I wish u all the best in your studies
4) I am willing to wait for your stories even if you will not be posting it as often as you could.
Again, thanks for droppin by in my comment box. It means so much to me to know that one of my fave ff writer is also reading my ff.
Love love love,
Scribe
I loved it!
I loved the banter between them, and it was a sweet scene between Bette and her son, when talking about his love. I’m so glad that Bette gave good advice to her son, who will follow it.
I loved the sex scene between Bette and Tina nurse :P
It was a wonderful picture, as looked clean and seemed to love in each other’s eyes.
Thank you.
Please, please, please finish The Lucky One !!!!
Our Roby! Incredible chapter, loved!
You as always writing superbly.
Made me want to eat pudding, and that sweet is not my
favorite.
I know that college will occupy much of your time, but
please! not abandon us.
I’ll wait for a new chapter with the patience of Buddha.
Study and writing form with louvor.E contunue great story
B & T.
Great to see them being loving and playful again. It would be great to see more chapters of this story – and also to see the Lucky One finished! Thank you for posting and good luck with your studies!