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Round n Round We Go (Ch.24)
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Bette crooked a brow, taking interest in the sudden moan. “Any solutions?”
“Yes…” She whimpered her answer. Her finger traced on the brim of the plastic, and swirled in to dip her index finger. The creamy chocolate sauce hugged her digit briefly and it somehow felt warm and nice. The dark colored sauce formed an exotic pattern of decoration on her slim finger. “Say ah, Miss Porter.” Saying so, she already brought her finger to the brunette’s lips, and smeared some on the flesh.
With eagerness, Bette opened her mouth and welcomed the finger. She didn’t let the blonde down, using her tongue to gently wrap and entwine, and to suck and massage, to taste. The sweetness of the chocolate cream was smooth and rich. It made her eyes roll to the back of her skull and a muffled moan escape her throat. She felt her face flush at this particular enticing moment, never having anticipated a scenario like now.
Tina looked intently at her lovely partner, who utterly enjoyed the tease and the play. She smirked as she pulled her finger out and saw the smudge of cream still around Bette’s lips. And she interrupted before the brunette could lick it up. “Ah-ah, let me.” She leaned on one hand and closed the distance between them.
The soft tongue caressed her skin. Bette brought her hand to the back of the blonde’s head, invested herself to the kiss. Yet when she wanted to deepen the kiss, Tina pulled back, and sucked and licked down to her neck. She felt a hand on her shoulder, traveling to her chest, and then it found a very interesting place in between her collarbones, a little hollow at the base of her neck. A strange sensation covered her skin suddenly. She looked down, and saw that the bowl of chocolate sauce somehow ended up on her body, and as she craned her neck aside to investigate, she found out that the naughty little nurse was busy dirtying her up with the sweet. “What do you think you’re doing, nurse?”
“Mmmm…” Tina occupied herself tasting the chocolate that she had smuggled to the small hollow between Bette’s collarbones, her tongue gently digging. “It’s a pudding bath, Miss Porter, very standard treatment for VIP patients.” Her hand, with a rich amount of chocolate, started to search for its target. And quite successfully, it went pass the soft mound and encountered the peak, so without even considering, her fingers tenderly tweaked on the hardened knot, also smeared some cream on it.
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Hey guys! Sorry that it took longer than my usual, already slow ass to update a new chapter.
And it’s so nice to see so many people that support me and like my writing.
I think it’s pretty obvious that this story is heading nicely to a happy ending.
Spoiler alert: so now we have the wedding, what’s next…hmmm… I’m thinking, children?
The past week I was packing my stuff for the travel. Leaving on the 18th this month to the exciting USA. I’m nervous, like shaking nervous as the days count down. But I’m also so very excited that I’ll spend the following four years at University of Wisconsin Madison. It’s an absolute bless for me to study there.
Maybe I’ll finally meet someone, who knows. :)
Oh and I’m landing in Chicago first so definitely try the Chicago pizza!
Question: has anybody seen the show Chicago Fire?
I read some fanfic regarding the couple Leslie Shay and Allison Rafferty. But there’re way less fanfic for this paring. I think they’re cute tho.
Peace and Love
Thank you so much for this… Make me a wonderful weekend. Glad to hear that you are settled down fine. Please continue more , foresee some unsettle business with Melvin, of course a second baby will be a great joy too.
Did watched Chicago fire, as you’d mentioned they are cute.
Whatever you may wish for… Good luck dear & take care.
What joy when I got home from work in the morning, and called
My ultra-book and saw that you had posted a new capítulo.Pulei
joy.
Even with sleep can read all
Beautiful, wonderful, exciting this story.
My favorite couple reconnected ..
It’s all the luck in your new journey at the University of
Wisconsin they are lucky to have at your university
a great writer;
Congratulations and good luck!
And I’m waiting for a new chapter.
Thrilled seeing a new contribution from you, loving my girls and you too!
Very nice chapter. Loved it. Good luck at college. Thanks for posting.
Amazing chapter!
I wish you good luck and much fun in the USA.
I would love to see them have another child and to have Bette put Melvin in his place.
Delighted that you’ve continued this story, it’s great! Please continue it, I love these two and the way you write their characters! Thank you made my weekend.
Wonderful chapter! You have such a great way of telling a story. Thank you!
Good luck in Madison! Cold winters but a beautiful place. PPS!
Robyn,
I have already read your update last night but decided not to comment right away coz I have to finish my story too at that time.
Oohh Noh! So you think I’m the slowest now in terms of updating? Let’s ask Phacey or Bette0Porter regarding that. Haha!
As usual I love how in love Bette is with Tina here.. 10 years of almost being away and yet she is extremely still in love with Tee. It gave me hope that true love never fades.
Are you near yet with your ending? I’m so excited for your other stories :)
God bless you on your trip.
XOXO
Scribe
I loved this chapter. they are so sweet and loving towards each other.
I’m looking forward to the wedding and maybe a baby :) oh, I really can’t wait.
I wish you good luck in the USA.
im so late, my apologies knowing this is my fav story but yet another great chapter but yessss a happy day in my life thanks to these two getting married again i always love when Tibette is in full effect and i see alot of that coming….no long comment just waiting for next chapter
That was awesome and beautiful and hot, love it, so happy for them. Thanks for the update my friend, hope to see u soon