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Round n Round We Go (Ch.24)
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“Really? I’d think you’re trying to take advantage of me, small vulnerable me, if I didn’t know better.” Bette laughed frivolously, though the wandering hand and the seducing tongue on her body were distracting her. However, her attitude would be soon blown away by the fast flicking at her sensitive nipple. She squirmed underneath the blonde and stopped instantly as she accidentally eased her even more sensitive center to Tina’s thigh. “Ahhh…mmm… slower… slower.”
Tina released her breast with a satisfying pop, and continued her journey down to collect every drop of the chocolate into her mouth. In less than two minutes, dozens of reddish little marks with slight teeth shaped imprint appeared on the mocha colored skin. She greedily took in the woman’s thin sheet of sweat, and enjoyed the mixed taste of salt and sweet. Bette’s favorite body lotion also increased her appetite, as if she could put the brunette into her mouth and she’d melt on the tip of her tongue. Delicious, she found her lover intoxicatingly delicious. It was when she decided that she needed more, more of the special scent, more of the softness and sweetness. So she licked her finger clean, and snuck down to cup her lover at the apex in between the strong thighs.
Bette’s reaction was instant. She felt the digit parting her folds and lingering at her opening. It gave her a rush of excitement. Subconsciously, she lifted her hips to grind into Tina’s palm, desperately trying to relieve some of that intensity on her throbbing clit.
But the other woman withdrew her hand once the limpid juice coated her fingers. And she looked down to the lust clouded brown eyes, intentionally brought her hand up to her mouth, and tentatively took a taste. It caused the brunette to grunt with some impatience and thrashed around underneath. “You…” Tina started, licking the enjoyable saltiness and smirked at the woman’s expression. “taste sooooo… good.” She again leaned down and circled her tongue around Bette’s breast, cleaning up the last few drops of chocolate. Adding up the different tastes together, she remembered some kind of sea salt flavored dessert. But then she decided that no other thing in the world could compare to the woman she loved. “You’re so sweet…” She breathed in Bette’s special scent, mumbled against the smooth mocha skin.
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Hey guys! Sorry that it took longer than my usual, already slow ass to update a new chapter.
And it’s so nice to see so many people that support me and like my writing.
I think it’s pretty obvious that this story is heading nicely to a happy ending.
Spoiler alert: so now we have the wedding, what’s next…hmmm… I’m thinking, children?
The past week I was packing my stuff for the travel. Leaving on the 18th this month to the exciting USA. I’m nervous, like shaking nervous as the days count down. But I’m also so very excited that I’ll spend the following four years at University of Wisconsin Madison. It’s an absolute bless for me to study there.
Maybe I’ll finally meet someone, who knows. :)
Oh and I’m landing in Chicago first so definitely try the Chicago pizza!
Question: has anybody seen the show Chicago Fire?
I read some fanfic regarding the couple Leslie Shay and Allison Rafferty. But there’re way less fanfic for this paring. I think they’re cute tho.
Peace and Love
Thank you so much for this… Make me a wonderful weekend. Glad to hear that you are settled down fine. Please continue more , foresee some unsettle business with Melvin, of course a second baby will be a great joy too.
Did watched Chicago fire, as you’d mentioned they are cute.
Whatever you may wish for… Good luck dear & take care.
What joy when I got home from work in the morning, and called
My ultra-book and saw that you had posted a new capítulo.Pulei
joy.
Even with sleep can read all
Beautiful, wonderful, exciting this story.
My favorite couple reconnected ..
It’s all the luck in your new journey at the University of
Wisconsin they are lucky to have at your university
a great writer;
Congratulations and good luck!
And I’m waiting for a new chapter.
Thrilled seeing a new contribution from you, loving my girls and you too!
Very nice chapter. Loved it. Good luck at college. Thanks for posting.
Amazing chapter!
I wish you good luck and much fun in the USA.
I would love to see them have another child and to have Bette put Melvin in his place.
Delighted that you’ve continued this story, it’s great! Please continue it, I love these two and the way you write their characters! Thank you made my weekend.
Wonderful chapter! You have such a great way of telling a story. Thank you!
Good luck in Madison! Cold winters but a beautiful place. PPS!
Robyn,
I have already read your update last night but decided not to comment right away coz I have to finish my story too at that time.
Oohh Noh! So you think I’m the slowest now in terms of updating? Let’s ask Phacey or Bette0Porter regarding that. Haha!
As usual I love how in love Bette is with Tina here.. 10 years of almost being away and yet she is extremely still in love with Tee. It gave me hope that true love never fades.
Are you near yet with your ending? I’m so excited for your other stories :)
God bless you on your trip.
XOXO
Scribe
I loved this chapter. they are so sweet and loving towards each other.
I’m looking forward to the wedding and maybe a baby :) oh, I really can’t wait.
I wish you good luck in the USA.
im so late, my apologies knowing this is my fav story but yet another great chapter but yessss a happy day in my life thanks to these two getting married again i always love when Tibette is in full effect and i see alot of that coming….no long comment just waiting for next chapter
That was awesome and beautiful and hot, love it, so happy for them. Thanks for the update my friend, hope to see u soon