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Round the Bend 3
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“Tricia honey….this isn’t like you, you are always so punctual…..its ten sweetness….what’s…..well… Oh my. So sorry….Tricia you should have said you’d be running late.”
“Oh no….its not what you think……um…Miranda this is Shane…..Shane…Miranda.”
Tricia. I was in Tricia’s house. I slept on the couch. She is a model and she wants to know me. Yeah….Tricia. It was weird waking up and having this conversation with myself …
“Pleasure to meet you…..so Trish….is she the one?”
“Yeah……Shane….I kinda mentioned you to Miranda….”
“No, its cool…..look Trish…I’m gonna get out of your way here…..call me we’ll have dinner or something…”
“Shane wait….my driver can take you…”
“No….um…..I’ll manage…..I had a great time…..”
“Me too…..Miranda hang on ok….”
Trish said this in her white towel, hair fringing in tight curls, water dripping, droplets and everything else. She pushed Miranda in her house and dragged me out. We where standing just outside her door. The air was warm and the fragrance of her soap or whatever was driving me a little crazy. She knew this. She knew it but she didn’t use it. She used something more of the moment. She kissed me. It was sloppy and wet, her tongue was just resting in my mouth, the slightest pressure, and she licked my lips. I licked hers, her back was against her door and her hand held her towel that was unraveling by our contact. I held her doorknob to keep the door from opening, her leg rode up a little on me, I ran my hands in her wet hair, I kissed her neck, her chin, she took her other hand the non towel hand and held my chin. We stopped and stared, it could have gone on to the barest, to her skin on mine, but she had to go, her skin was warm, her cheeks a little red, a little flushed. She smiled shy, sweet….I had to say something, and I whispered in her ear….I didn’t want her friend to hear…
“I like waking up in your house…..it’s so much nicer than mine. I like the way you kiss….I want more…..and…..I want you…..I’ve always wanted you…you’re like a dream….and I want to know you….I want you to need me….and I want to need you……”
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wow, 3 updates in less than an hour, and an awsome story. nice to see your back. to bad shane and carmen had to die though. still awsome story.
Really appreciate you posting this. Would love to hear you reconsidering your self imposed ‘retirement’. I like your dark style, it’s actually refreshing as a change up from the usual stories in here. Don’t suppose you would ever consider a happy Sharmen ending? lol. Not that it matters, I will still look out for new fic from you in case you do decide to write (and post) again. Take care NDF! :)
you are fucking crazyyyy you trully are…. i mean i pray to god that you come back and when you do you do not one update but a full story… and you killllllll shane and crmen lol u are the only writer i would let kill does two lol fucking crazy as always but so fucking good! you cant stop now… u just cant cuz… you love writing and hell we sure like reading it… so… dont say good bye one more time i dont think i can take it~
all i can say is wowwwwwwwww what a an awesome story…i couldnt stop reading…u rock girl
WOW!!!!!!!!!! So fucking dark and tragic as always. It was really really good!It would be fantstic if you would stick around and continue to write!!!LOVE!
well done
Great to see you back for however long it is! Thanks for posting this and keeping us all in touch with your alt universe. I really appreciate all your versions of “imperfect” Shane and Carmen.
It’s too good to be sad. Thanks for sharing it.
awesome story! You’re the only on that can kill shane and carmen and get away with it=)