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    Story written on January 20, 2011 by GrindRight.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=76785
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    Tina’s POV – There is confusion and distance, but also a strong connect.

    Once he sat down, his relatively tall stature was less intimidating, and I discussed moving in with him for a while. He was a friend of Jan, one of the women from an old playgroup back home, and he was very courteous. And although he didn’t scare me like my husband often did, I found myself with a gender bias that was difficult to shake.

    I only managed to confess that “things were hard back home” and he nodded. I guess he assumed, and I hated that too. I was so ashamed.

    As I was sitting there talking with him, suddenly the door flung opened, and Bette flew in. She dropped her things down on the floor, confused with the situation. “Tina … are you okay?”

    I looked back to her, in complete shock. I wondered what on earth she was doing there. “Um … yes?”

    Her posture relaxed, and she leaned over on the wall. I immediately got up from the couch and walked over, watching her carefully.

    “Bette? What’s wrong? Why aren’t you at work? Why are you running in here?”

    She was almost laughing, but then her smile straightened and she stood to her full height again. “Angelica called me and said that I needed to come over, and that you were in trouble.”

    “Angelica?” I scoffed with confusion, looking back toward the hall and seeing my daughter looking guilty, but also sad. “Baby …?”

    Then Bette’s gaze shifted to the man on her couch. “Who the hell is this?”

    “Ed,” I answered, turning back to him and putting both hands in my pockets. He was a nice enough guy.

    We both just sort of watched him for a moment, but it didn’t seem to make him uncomfortable. I think the stubbly beard and rough hands made Bette a little uncomfortable, though.

    “Hey,” he smiled, bringing his hand up in a small wave, and then letting it back down into his lap.

    Bette was not pleased, but she went to see Angelica. I would assume she was telling her it would be alright, and that I was okay. Probably also that she couldn’t dial the number Bette had showed her unless it was a real emergency. She was so motherly, as much as her friends would deny it.

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    3. I hope they are not to be star crossed lovers. That was one of the most beautiful love scenes. Your descriptions of their thoughts, emotions and their words was handled so tenderly. Just amazing.

    6. I’m so glad to see an update! Thank you for taking my mind off things for a little while :) I love the different vibe there is to your story, it’s very intense. I’m looking forward to your next update. Thanks!

    10. Oh my goodness! That was so good! I love the part where Tina asks Bette to tell her to stay. I really love this story and it is becoming my number one favorite out of all my other favorites that you have written.

    14. Hi GR, That was totally awesome. Suddenly TIna took the initiative and asked Bette to ask her and Angie to stay. Once Bette admitted the deepth of her feelings Tina was free to finally allowed her own emotions and desires to wash over her. The tenderest of love making ensued. You made me hope my breath throughout as these souls consumated their connection. Angelica was adorabel but even better was Bette’s reaction. I was cheering as Bette let Tina find her own way and her voice. Maybe Kit can take Angie for the night and let the gals vocalize their attraction. Thank you GR for pushing the boundaries and crafting such a truly beautiful tale. My hero. Your Loyal Fan and Friend.

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