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Run (5)
I stepped forward and took the bottom of her shirt in my hands, keeping eye contact. It was almost like we were sharing something secret, something that no one else could ever know. I smiled, loving all parts of her already. I couldn’t imagine loving her any more than I already did.
When I had removed her shirt too, we both stood nearly topless, just looking at one another, moving a little closer.
“I’ve never …”
“I know,” she smiled, taking my hand and bringing me over to her bed as she sat on the edge of it. “And I don’t care.”
I couldn’t help but smile back at her, moving to stand between her parted legs, bringing my hands to her hair. “Can we kiss again? … I like that.”
She nodded slowly, inviting my lips as her head tilted up. “Yeah.”
Kissing her by the bed brought out something new in each of us. Each breath of contact was different, maybe soft or maybe a gentle bite. My head was tilted one way, and then the other. It was phenomenal. Exquisite.
She didn’t have to promise not to hurt me – it was in her touch. Very gently, she pulled me in to straddle her on the bed, and I smiled at how comfortable it was. Her arms slipped around me, and she was much stronger than I would have expected her to be. When I realized I was comparing her to men, I shook my head and brought my hand up to my face.
“If you’re not ready,” she whispered, drawing my attention again, “All you have to do is say so.”
I wanted to cry at how thoughtful it was, especially as compared to my frustrated husband at times like that, when I was troubled in some way. It would always start an argument. However, her soft voice and her understanding pulled me from my concern, and I nodded. “I would … I would tell you, but … I’m really okay.”
“We … should probably talk about this,” she whispered to me, her hands already holding me in a way that seemed completely sexual, although she wasn’t really touching me yet. It thrilled me, and I couldn’t resist another soft kiss.
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(43 votes, average: 3.88 out of 5)
Amazing… you can really feel Bette’s turmoil; so hard to protect yourself from something you want so badly. Looking forward to your next post!
The whole story unfolded so beautifully.
I hope they are not to be star crossed lovers. That was one of the most beautiful love scenes. Your descriptions of their thoughts, emotions and their words was handled so tenderly. Just amazing.
So amazing this story, love the pace and love the 9 page long chapter:)Looking forward to more, PPS and thanks for sharing of course.
And you have me GR. You had from your very first post :) Thank you
I’m so glad to see an update! Thank you for taking my mind off things for a little while :) I love the different vibe there is to your story, it’s very intense. I’m looking forward to your next update. Thanks!
Finally!Thanks God Tina isn`t leaving Bette but I thinks its trouble ahead.Thank you,grat story.
aaww that was such a sweet love scene. thanks!
This story is so good! Thanks for posting.
Oh my goodness! That was so good! I love the part where Tina asks Bette to tell her to stay. I really love this story and it is becoming my number one favorite out of all my other favorites that you have written.
That was so intense! I love the way you describe what each of them were feeling. It makes their connection so powerful.
That was awesome and glad Tina didn’t leave and they are so sweet and hot, love the love scene and can’t wait to see more of them. Please post more, thanks!
That was just a wonderful update. Thank you.
Hi GR, That was totally awesome. Suddenly TIna took the initiative and asked Bette to ask her and Angie to stay. Once Bette admitted the deepth of her feelings Tina was free to finally allowed her own emotions and desires to wash over her. The tenderest of love making ensued. You made me hope my breath throughout as these souls consumated their connection. Angelica was adorabel but even better was Bette’s reaction. I was cheering as Bette let Tina find her own way and her voice. Maybe Kit can take Angie for the night and let the gals vocalize their attraction. Thank you GR for pushing the boundaries and crafting such a truly beautiful tale. My hero. Your Loyal Fan and Friend.
That was amazing GR. The love scene was so beautiful and spell binding