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    Story written on January 20, 2011 by GrindRight.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=76785
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    Tina’s POV – There is confusion and distance, but also a strong connect.

    “… Don’t leave.”

    And there is was – my reason to call Ed the next morning, and tell him that I would be alright, but thanks anyway. She gave me the hope I needed, that I wasn’t such a burden. Maybe I meant as much to her as she did to me. Just maybe, I thought, holding on tight. I didn’t know what I would do if she were only being kind, after all of this time.

    I moved my hands over her back, my eyes still closed as I felt her do the same. “Okay,” I whispered, lifting the back of her shirt with the pressure of my fingers. Some things come as a shock to you, even including your own actions.

    She didn’t say anything, or turn shyly away, as she had when I’d opened her door and saw her naked back. Instead, she did the same to me, just lifting the back of my shirt and smoothing her hand over the warmth of my lower back. I remember thinking that her breath was like wind over sand, like the force of her desire could displace me entirely. But maybe I wanted to be sand.

    “Your hands are soft,” I said quietly, then doing the same with mine. I’d never felt another woman’s back that way, and the moment gave me a sensuality I hadn’t expected. How could one back be so erotic?

    Her hips were even better, and before I realized what I was doing, my hands had slipped into her pants, gently kneading her even softer rounded ass. Who knew I would be such a dominant lover? I guess I was never really given the chance before. I could only whisper, unable to shout my discoveries like I wanted. “You’re beautiful.”

    “I don’t want you to leave. Please …” she said quietly, pulling my shirt up further. I brought my arms up so she could pull it off of me. The way she looked at me then … I’ll never forget it. She was amazed, as much as I couldn’t understand it with a body of perfection like hers, that she was amazed by mine.

    The balance of power was incredibly attractive – I just loved that anything was possible between us – that we were equals.

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    3. I hope they are not to be star crossed lovers. That was one of the most beautiful love scenes. Your descriptions of their thoughts, emotions and their words was handled so tenderly. Just amazing.

    6. I’m so glad to see an update! Thank you for taking my mind off things for a little while :) I love the different vibe there is to your story, it’s very intense. I’m looking forward to your next update. Thanks!

    10. Oh my goodness! That was so good! I love the part where Tina asks Bette to tell her to stay. I really love this story and it is becoming my number one favorite out of all my other favorites that you have written.

    14. Hi GR, That was totally awesome. Suddenly TIna took the initiative and asked Bette to ask her and Angie to stay. Once Bette admitted the deepth of her feelings Tina was free to finally allowed her own emotions and desires to wash over her. The tenderest of love making ensued. You made me hope my breath throughout as these souls consumated their connection. Angelica was adorabel but even better was Bette’s reaction. I was cheering as Bette let Tina find her own way and her voice. Maybe Kit can take Angie for the night and let the gals vocalize their attraction. Thank you GR for pushing the boundaries and crafting such a truly beautiful tale. My hero. Your Loyal Fan and Friend.

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