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Savannah
Story written on November 8, 2011 by kins40.
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"Oh my God." She sighed deeply, turning onto her back and throwing her arm over her eyes to try and retain those images imprinted in her retina for ever.
Their first few times had been simple, but none the less shattering in their intensity. They had let all of their emotions pour out through touch, mapping, learning, memorising with worshipping fervour to a point where it had felt like they had known each other for a lifetime.
Tina shook herself out of her erotic trance and sat up in the middle of the bed listening for any sound which would give away the whereabouts of the stunning brunette. Nothing.
She got up and hunted for her boxer shorts and t-shirt finding them in a heap on the dark wooden floor next to Bette’s.
"She mustn’t have gone very far if her clothes are still here." Tina remarked inwardly.
Dressed, she moved to the big bay window and slid it open, grabbing on her way over a tall glass of lemon flavoured water that had been left by the side of the bed.
They had got thirsty during the night and Bette had got up, giggling like a school girl as she had strolled naked to the kitchen to retrieve a tall pitcher and two glasses to quench their thirst. It had occurred to them to eat also but somehow their appetite had been satiated in many other ways.
Tina gasped at how cool the morning air was as she stepped onto the viewing deck outside Bette’s bedroom.
She was greeted by the usual sight of the sprawling Savannah. Ochres and orange hues of the scorched earth slowly changing shades in the morning sun. She found a patch of sunlit deck and stood at the very edge, curling her bare toes around the edge.
She took a few sip from the glass she had been clutching close to her chest, rehydrating her mouth and lips and placed it back down on the low table behind her, which stood in front of an impressive and large outdoor rattan sofa adorned with extra thick wide and whiter than white cushions.
She wrapped herself in her own arms in a body hug to warm herself up hoping that the still low sun rays would soon envelop her with their heat.
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Loud crack of a branch?… I have this very comical image in my head of Jodie falling down from a tree on her ass after she had been playing “voyeur” from afar. Wishful thinking I guess… Hopefully nothing too bad is going to happen, but like you said it yourself, you’re the worst tease, so we’ll just have to wait for your next update to know… Okay, speaking of being a tease… I hate you, how could you do this to me?… Bette in that blue shirt AND pancakes in the same scene???… And I know that you know those are two of my greatest weaknesses!!!… Gawd, that was hard to read… Tina Kennard, you are a hell of a lucky woman!!!… Anyway, I loved it all K, the tenderness, the love, the sexiness, the lizard (God, I loved the lizard!)… Your talent blows me away every time. I guess I should know by now… But nope, still amazed with every new chapter!… Oh and I must confess that the following part: “She could see the two of them tangled in sheets, arching against Bette’s strong body, her hands grasping frantically at the vet’s shoulder as the brunette rolled over to position her into a straddling position never once breaking their undulating motion.” is one of the most sensual descriptions I’ve ever read. It’s like watching a movie where the heroin has those very brief flashbacks of a night of loving… Very well done, really! That line illustrates perfectly how special their night was. Thank you so much for your update, that was delicious… at all levels! xxx Kw
Oooo, what’s that? I’m scared now, it kinda approached really fast… Great update by the way, PPS!
you never disappoint with your vivid descriptions of not only the landscape scenery and wildlife, but also of “other things to be admired”. Your sensual descriptions of the Tina’s replay of the night before just further showcase your talent. As for the cliffhanger, you’re killing me so please post soon!
What? What? What!!! U left it there!?! Oh come on! Is it Jodi or a lion? As a fellow writer I know u didn’t spend a chapter describing the lions if they weren’t gonna be important
what was that? could it be one of the lions? well kins u really spoiling us with this second in a raw NC17, it is beautiful update. I don’t know if I catch u in chat room with my +4 GMT timing, lol;D
Oh My! How wonderful and sensual and sexy was that update! loved every word of it …I tell you kins40 your writing is like watching a movie in my head. Love this story! I do hope what is approaching them is not too bad! thank you again.
Your writing is electric and so vivid. I went to your original posting where you stated that English is not your mother language. That is so hard to believe. Native speakers should take heed and learn from your writing.
Goddamnit if thats Jodi, I want her shot I love this story, I cant help but feel this big drop coming soon. Always keeping me on the edge of my computer seat. Thanks kins40. It doesn’t seem as if you have a WB problem
The description of love making did actually taste like honey. It gives me goosebumps every time you write NC-17. There two types of NC-17( I dont want to mention the dirty type). One is erotic and then there is sensuous. Yours is 100% sensuous. I just love it. I dont have words to describe how I love the way you write. But you still are a tease. Now I will keep wondering, what was that?? I would say Bette is a lucky woman. She gets to hold delicate, soft, beautiful Tina in her arms. I would do anything to hold Tina in my arms. I have seen so many people, very good looking, stunning , extremely beautiful(far better looking than Laurel, My office is just next to modeling agency), but there is something about Tina(Laurel) that just…. She has me. “It does feel like coming home”. I feel so good to even think about her. Your stories gives best picture of Tina. How you paint her. WOW. I still read your stories more than once. Please post soon. Please Please Please.
Go on with your bad self girl! Kins you are an amazing writer. This continues to be absolutely wonderful in every way – sometimes recalling a moments shared passion can be just as powerful as the actual thing itself (I’m with Kword – delicious on all levels for sure) …. and I have to say, I wouldn’t mind being that blue button down shirt (blush). Okay, now please tell me that the sounds Bette heard from the deck weren’t the skulking of a one JL… or maybe it is but Butterfly is right behind ready to flatten her underfoot ;) At the risk of sound wholly unoriginal and like a broken record (remember those? ;) I LOVE THIS STORY!!! As always, thanks again for sharing your incredible talent! iHH xxx (PS, another word nerd gold star for you – I’m sure you know why. HA!)
I think that it is a stampeded, and I have a feeling that Jodi is so behind this. But aside from that can you not feel the heat from these two amazing ladies, it was so so steamy, love love love it.
Hope no trouble there
What or who was that?… Damn they ruining the moment?!!.. …How can they interrupt this kind of moment? …”re-igniting progressively the embers of their passion filled night which still smouldered beneath the surface.”….Hope is not Jodie again?
They are so sweet together. I get sad every time I think of Tina having to leave. :(What is sneaking up on them? I hope it’s not one of the lions from the night before….
Well, I too thought it might be Jodi or a lion. It better be good to interrupt them like that! Love it! PPS!!
So? What the heck is that?! OMG Kins! You are the teaser!!! >_< ... lol but if it's really J who's being eaten by the lion I think it's ok to interrupt the moment for a while.. :-P dang! Now pining for your next post again ... Btw when I read this "That simple image almost made her blood catch fire." .. I was nodding and so agree and then thinking.. "does Kins wrote this sentence to express her readers state of mind when reading her nc17 or what?" :-p thanks Kins for another great chapter... (but no thanks for the hanging :-p lol) hmm... Does their breakfast inviting some wild animal to taste the pancake with honey!? Hmmm...
Another excellent update,thank you.The end is scary,PPS.
What a sweet, loving update..such amazing writing!!
Just spent the last 2 days reading chapters 1 to 20. What a great story. Looking forward to more!
That was beautiful and warm.
10 stars.