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Savannah
Story written on November 8, 2011 by kins40.
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From the corner of her eye she caught, a slight scurrying movement on the ground. At first, she did not seem to see where the slight rustle had come from, but thanking her longsightedness for once, she noticed a little lizard pop its head over a weathered rock surface to her left.
It had stopped to bask in the sun, front right foot lifted in the air as if paused in time.
"Enjoying the sunshine, little fellow." Tina said. The lizard was keeping what looked like a suspicious eye on her from its very low down but adequately for a lizard, useful vantage point, darting its forked tongue in an out trying to sense whether Tina was friend or foe.
She watched the perfectly camouflaged little creature, go about its morning routine, dart in and out of rocks and crevices in search of small insects, leaping distances several times its own size, with minimal effort, great speed and agility.
And just like that it disappeared in a flash. Its tail whipping slightly as it made a dash for the nearest safe haven.
She had not moved one little bit and wondered why her little morning friend had scurried away so quickly.
That’s when she felt it and her heartbeat took off at vertiginous speed.
Bette’s entrance into the bedroom had been silent, the bare foot approached so quiet that Tina had not sensed the brunette until the vet slid a hand slowly across her waist while standing behind her wrapping around her the cornflower blue blanket which had been on their bed.
The blonde moaned softly as Bette’s head dipped and she kissed her neck while running her hand possessively over her stomach.
Tina decided that while kisses on her neck were nice, she preferred them on her lips and turning her head, she sought Bette’s mouth with her own instead, wanting and searching for that intense, intimate connection with her lover.
As they kissed, Tina turned around in Bette’s arms and bringing the corners of the blanket which she now held firmly in her hands, she enveloped the vet in her makeshift cocoon.
Releasing her hold, she had on the accountant’s lips by biting lightly on her lower lip and tugging playfully, Bette whispered over the soft mouth.
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Loud crack of a branch?… I have this very comical image in my head of Jodie falling down from a tree on her ass after she had been playing “voyeur” from afar. Wishful thinking I guess… Hopefully nothing too bad is going to happen, but like you said it yourself, you’re the worst tease, so we’ll just have to wait for your next update to know… Okay, speaking of being a tease… I hate you, how could you do this to me?… Bette in that blue shirt AND pancakes in the same scene???… And I know that you know those are two of my greatest weaknesses!!!… Gawd, that was hard to read… Tina Kennard, you are a hell of a lucky woman!!!… Anyway, I loved it all K, the tenderness, the love, the sexiness, the lizard (God, I loved the lizard!)… Your talent blows me away every time. I guess I should know by now… But nope, still amazed with every new chapter!… Oh and I must confess that the following part: “She could see the two of them tangled in sheets, arching against Bette’s strong body, her hands grasping frantically at the vet’s shoulder as the brunette rolled over to position her into a straddling position never once breaking their undulating motion.” is one of the most sensual descriptions I’ve ever read. It’s like watching a movie where the heroin has those very brief flashbacks of a night of loving… Very well done, really! That line illustrates perfectly how special their night was. Thank you so much for your update, that was delicious… at all levels! xxx Kw
Oooo, what’s that? I’m scared now, it kinda approached really fast… Great update by the way, PPS!
you never disappoint with your vivid descriptions of not only the landscape scenery and wildlife, but also of “other things to be admired”. Your sensual descriptions of the Tina’s replay of the night before just further showcase your talent. As for the cliffhanger, you’re killing me so please post soon!
What? What? What!!! U left it there!?! Oh come on! Is it Jodi or a lion? As a fellow writer I know u didn’t spend a chapter describing the lions if they weren’t gonna be important
what was that? could it be one of the lions? well kins u really spoiling us with this second in a raw NC17, it is beautiful update. I don’t know if I catch u in chat room with my +4 GMT timing, lol;D
Oh My! How wonderful and sensual and sexy was that update! loved every word of it …I tell you kins40 your writing is like watching a movie in my head. Love this story! I do hope what is approaching them is not too bad! thank you again.
Your writing is electric and so vivid. I went to your original posting where you stated that English is not your mother language. That is so hard to believe. Native speakers should take heed and learn from your writing.
Goddamnit if thats Jodi, I want her shot I love this story, I cant help but feel this big drop coming soon. Always keeping me on the edge of my computer seat. Thanks kins40. It doesn’t seem as if you have a WB problem
The description of love making did actually taste like honey. It gives me goosebumps every time you write NC-17. There two types of NC-17( I dont want to mention the dirty type). One is erotic and then there is sensuous. Yours is 100% sensuous. I just love it. I dont have words to describe how I love the way you write. But you still are a tease. Now I will keep wondering, what was that?? I would say Bette is a lucky woman. She gets to hold delicate, soft, beautiful Tina in her arms. I would do anything to hold Tina in my arms. I have seen so many people, very good looking, stunning , extremely beautiful(far better looking than Laurel, My office is just next to modeling agency), but there is something about Tina(Laurel) that just…. She has me. “It does feel like coming home”. I feel so good to even think about her. Your stories gives best picture of Tina. How you paint her. WOW. I still read your stories more than once. Please post soon. Please Please Please.
Go on with your bad self girl! Kins you are an amazing writer. This continues to be absolutely wonderful in every way – sometimes recalling a moments shared passion can be just as powerful as the actual thing itself (I’m with Kword – delicious on all levels for sure) …. and I have to say, I wouldn’t mind being that blue button down shirt (blush). Okay, now please tell me that the sounds Bette heard from the deck weren’t the skulking of a one JL… or maybe it is but Butterfly is right behind ready to flatten her underfoot ;) At the risk of sound wholly unoriginal and like a broken record (remember those? ;) I LOVE THIS STORY!!! As always, thanks again for sharing your incredible talent! iHH xxx (PS, another word nerd gold star for you – I’m sure you know why. HA!)
I think that it is a stampeded, and I have a feeling that Jodi is so behind this. But aside from that can you not feel the heat from these two amazing ladies, it was so so steamy, love love love it.
Hope no trouble there
What or who was that?… Damn they ruining the moment?!!.. …How can they interrupt this kind of moment? …”re-igniting progressively the embers of their passion filled night which still smouldered beneath the surface.”….Hope is not Jodie again?
They are so sweet together. I get sad every time I think of Tina having to leave. :(What is sneaking up on them? I hope it’s not one of the lions from the night before….
Well, I too thought it might be Jodi or a lion. It better be good to interrupt them like that! Love it! PPS!!
So? What the heck is that?! OMG Kins! You are the teaser!!! >_< ... lol but if it's really J who's being eaten by the lion I think it's ok to interrupt the moment for a while.. :-P dang! Now pining for your next post again ... Btw when I read this "That simple image almost made her blood catch fire." .. I was nodding and so agree and then thinking.. "does Kins wrote this sentence to express her readers state of mind when reading her nc17 or what?" :-p thanks Kins for another great chapter... (but no thanks for the hanging :-p lol) hmm... Does their breakfast inviting some wild animal to taste the pancake with honey!? Hmmm...
Another excellent update,thank you.The end is scary,PPS.
What a sweet, loving update..such amazing writing!!
Just spent the last 2 days reading chapters 1 to 20. What a great story. Looking forward to more!
That was beautiful and warm.
10 stars.