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Story written on December 3, 2011 by kins40.
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When she finally came out of the bathroom wearing only a towel wrapped around her slender frame, Bette noticed that Tina had readied the bed for her. For them. The pristine sheets had been turned down and a few candles had been lit around the room. Tina was nowhere to be seen though.
The candles that the accountant had chosen were possibly not the kind that she would have been used to using back home in New York. None of those fancy scented candles with elaborate colours and decorations. No. Those candles were simple, church pillar type candles, Bette would usually have used in events of power cuts but Tina had tastefully displayed them around the room and had instantly made it look so inviting, so serene, so peaceful. The candles cast a very soft and easy light and their light flicker was almost hypnotising.
When Tina reappeared in the room, Bette was in the process of pulling on a pair of simple white boyshorts. The blonde walked right up behind the tired vet and gently undid the loose towel away from Bette’s body, hugging her from behind in the process as the towel pooled at their feet.
Bette straightened up into the surprise embrace and Tina took advantage of her position to kiss lightly and repetitively the vast expanse of the brunette’s muscular back.
The vet sighed heavily at the feel of the warm lips on her shoulders and gasped in genuine shock at the mild bite Tina inflicted at the base of her neck. It had for effect to calm her mounting arousal she was not sure she could sustain at this moment in time. She was utterly shattered but would not deny Tina if the blonde insisted on making love tonight.
The playful mouth reached her ear and whispered, "Go lie down on the bed for me, sweetie… on your stomach."
Bette obeyed the softly spoken order and went to do exactly as demanded without wondering why. The cool sheets felt so good against her warm skin and Bette truly believe that her head went to rest on a cloud when it hit her pillow.
The mattress moved when Tina joined her in bed a few seconds later. However, the blonde did not lie next to her. She deliberately sat down on the back of her thighs, careful not to bare her whole weight on them and proceeded to give the woman lying beneath her, a thorough and soothing massage.
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Oh NO! damn,Tina playing hero won’t end well, Bette still didn’t confess her love, there’s trouble ahead and you stoped. Hmph. PPS:)
Pleaseeeeeeee post soon.
NO, NO Tina!!! Don’t go alone and take a weapon of some sort, maybe the hot water. Oh my stars, please keep her safe and let someone come to help her. Please don’t let jodi get anywhere near her. Thanks. PPS
Noooooooo… Tina, noooooo!!! Don’t you do this, woman! Wake the beauty up or go get that rifle, but don’t venture out there by yourself, sweetie!… Arrggh, and I am the tease??? But I suspect that you have developped a sweet addiction to that habit of yours, dear friend… Not good, not good at all! On another note, I happened to be listening very cheesy music when I read the beginning of this chapter, and god, was that good!! Then I got to the part where Tina was watching Bette sleep and that was very sweet! Though I have to asmit that when you started to describe Bette’s face as she was sleeping, for a moment I feared that you might include the much dreaded drooling on the pillow. But thankfully, you spared us that glimpse of realism and gave us Tina’s ILY instead. Bless you, woman!!! You are the best, as always, and that was a truly beautiful update, especially the first part of course! I’m also delighted that Tina might consider a move to Africa, which shall lead to a happy ending (pleeeaaaase?). Thanks my friend, you’re a star! And good luck with the Christmas preps, BTW! xxx Kw
Oh no…please don’t stop now!! I just love this story..great update!
Dumb, Tina, dumb! Bette knows best after living there so many years. Take something that makes a piercing loud sound to at least awaken Bette.
this is amazing story please post soon thanks!!!!
Oh, for heaven’s sake, Tina… don’t you watch any horror/mystery movies? That’s where we all learn not to go creeping into the dark unknown in our skivvies or in high heels or carrying lots of heavy bags, etc. (Wait, what IS Tina wearing?) Hopefully Bette is not too deeply asleep to hear the confrontation. Now about those keys left dangling in the ignition… will they aid Jodie’s escape, or Tina’s pursuit, or???
Shoot them with a tranq gun Tina, or just shoot them
No, no, no – you did not do that again. Here I thought the joys of the season were catching up on you, and then you go do something like this – Come on, leave the decorations, back to the laptop..you can do it. Please…
I just have to ask.. would that pack of lionessses still be around by any chance?
What a cliff hanger! Somehow I don’t think the element of surprise is going to have the effect that Tina is expecting. I’m afraid that Jodie is going to use this as an opportunity to inflict more harm on Bette. Please get Tina out of there safely….
Oh No, Please let Tina be Okay, but catch that devious Jodie in the act, before she can hurt her beautiful baby Bette. I love that Tina took good care of Bette in her hour of need, who would not love a nice massage after a hard 15 hour work day. Keep the love coming.
Wake up Bette !!!!Thank you for the update.PPS
No No Tina don’t play hero. Call someone! You’re writing is so wonderful that I’m sitting on the edge of my chair. Please post soon. Thank you for this wonderful story.
Oh no! Kins40, you’re giving Santa a hard time deciding where to put your letter, in the naughty or the nice pile?
Oh no! Tina! Get out of there!!!! Ahhh!!!
OMG Tina!!!!! Please don’t let anything happen to her K!!!! Take a spear or something Tina, wait don’t go there!!!!! Thank you for the awesome update.
Holy Cow! No Tina, not a good decision. Please let Bette wake up soon. PPS!!
Dang! What the heck are you doing Tina?! If you want to act by yourself ensure you are able to protect yourself! Uhm.. Any possibility she is good in any martial arts or self defense or maybe she’s a super hero on disguise or…??? I really hope nothing bad happen and won’t make Bette missing the opportunity of confessing her love… Argh!! Bad Kins! Bad! You are addicted to this edgy now, don’t you?! :-( … Looks like I need to join you in early prep of Xmas too as I am sure to do my list and put these in my wish list: more stories from Kins40… More updates from kins40… More pages on each update of Kins40 story … More often of update and definitely less edgy ending like this chapter :-p lol ..: thanks anyway Kins for the update (not so much on the ending though :-p LOL)
Nooooo! DON’T GO INSIDE!… Scream?!..SCREAM TINA! …SCREAMMMM!!!!
Cliffhangers are forbidden around here, didn’t you get that memo? Amazing post, but I would expect nothing less. Looking forward to more as I join Bette in dreamworld…
Oh bloody hell Jodi! nothing stop this woman from doing evil. Tina should be careful, confrontation ALONE not always a good idea! Thanks Kins for the update can’t wait for next week update ;D
Oh how sweet! What a nice way to be greeted after a long hard day playing with the animals (grr ;) . And even sweeter that they both think of Bette’s dwelling as “home”. Looks like Bette’s best laid plans (no pun intended – honest) to tell her sweetie the big news will have to wait a bit. As for that “home invasion” matter… I’m putting my money on the blonde from NYC to know how to protect her woman and foil Jodi’s plan. Go ahead T, open up a can of whup ass on JL and make our day (okay, a gal can wish can’t she?). Seriously though, I hope nothing bad happens to Tina because if it does Jodi is really in deep $hit! Very suspenseful and fun chapter Kins! For all the joy you’ve given us with this story I’ve asked Santa to be extra good to you this year :) xxx – iHH.
Oh no hope Tina will be ok