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Savannah
Story written on August 19, 2011 by kins40.
She felt very much at ease in the well organised and meticulously clean surgical working room.
Bette looked on as Tina evolved around the room like she had done it all her life.
Each time the vet saw her, even if only furtively as she glanced into her office in passing, she would get the same familiar spread of goosebumps all over her body. Right now, her closeness was even more unsettling.
Tina worked gently on washing down the dried up blood and soil with repetitive gentle strokes of the wet soapy cloth. Bette forgot about the sharp sting the water triggered as the cloth, guided by the delicate hand, swept over the exposed raw flesh. All the vet could concentrate on was the closeness of the other woman.
Their faces were inches apart and Bette could smell Tina’s perfume, she was so close that she could even feel the heat from her body.
Tina’s long hair stopped about an half an inch off her shoulders. "She is definitely a blonde," Bette thought. There were so many different shades of blonde in her hair. An overall golden honey colour sprinkled with light ash strands and some lighter golden ones bordering on white. "The effect of the sun no doubt," Bette continued as she studied the blonde head which hovered so close to her.
Bette sucked in a breath trying really hard to control the reactions from her body.
"I’m sorry…. Did I hurt you?" Tina lifted her head from her task and halted her movements for a split second. She was trying to go as slowly as she could. The feeling their proximity had triggered within her, had thrown her off balance and she was trying her best to not show it. "I have never lost a patient before, you know!" she added jokingly.
That last remark had both women laughing. It was unconsciously welcomed as it instantly relieved some of the tension between them.
"No, you are doing just fine." Bette reassured her giving a most amazing smile.
Their eyes locked for the first time that day. In fact it had been the first time since that night at Helena’s. Dark brown eyes cautiously surveyed softer hazel ones.
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I like chapters like this. Not to much description, just enough. I loved it. PPVS.
Still loving it kins! Looking forward to your next post…please make it soon ;)
That was rather more romantic than the fable about Androcles and the lion… ;) I’m eager to see how their trip into to field pans out. Thanks for the post. :)
Hey Kins I have yet to comment on this story but thoroughly enjoying it. I love the change of scenery and different roles for B&T.
wow thats pretty intense they want each other badly, when it actually happens, it’s gonna be an explosion! I hope you’re having fun in France!
Lovely chapter. I can feel the heat from here!
Loved it, glad to see it progressing.
So wonderfully written. thank you love it and it’s like I’m sitting watching a movie I can just see it all. thank you.
Boy, they both in trouble. To an awkward introduction and avoiding to each other. To this..A “Half naked” Bette is a temptation you can’t resist.
Haaaa Chicken there are LMAO.Cannot wait to see Bette taking Tina , only Tina to the real savannah hey.Love the story, thank you for posting.
Bonjour and thanks for the gift of an unexpected post Kins! And as jp22 noted, props to you for the Androcles reference (LOL). Was that a coincidence or did you intended it? Either way, good thing Tina knew to use rubbing alcohol on Bette instead of betadine (although that would have been funny ;)
Fabulous surprise to see you posting while on holiday. Loved this chapter for many reasons. I could just feel the disappointment for Tina every time Bette avoided her and then when she misunderstood Bette invitation to “go out”. Use plenty of sunscreen and post when you can!
I am so hooked on this story. Nice job with Tina helping Bette with the thorns-now how about the Roses.
SO GOOD, LOVE IT
I love this story.
Hi Kins40 :-) good to see you back and posted another Chapter ;-) Well what can i say but i love this story!? .. It’s such a nice exposure for a beginning of what to come :-p lol… Oops! My bad :-D doesn’t mean I expecting more accident on Bette or any of them of course! I just glad that they are finally having more interaction here :-)
beautiful chapter, thanks for the update ;Denjoy ur stay in Paris :D and come up with more wonderful updates ;)
Woo Hoo seven pages!! What a welcome treat to wake up to on a Saturday morning. Those 2 won’t be able to fight it much longer. Post when you can and enjoy your vacation.
Hiya Kins.. Second rounds here… And i still love it! :-) I really in awe on how do you got such inspiration to write this entertaining lovely story?! Just remember that you are on vacation in France/Paris? (Enjoy your time btw! :-)) Looks like your talent and romantic blood plus romantic atmosphere plus your creativity are getting stronger.. So am I wrong if I expecting something romantic will happen on the coming chapters!? ;-) haha… Anyway, just want to share.. Guess my eyes a bit tired as when I read .. Pretzel?! .. *What the??*… Which when I refocus it is “.. pretty hazel eyes ..” :-p lol silly me, I know.. But I just want to read this again before sleep ;-) he3.. PPS while you can! Thanks for taking time to update/posting even though you are on holiday! :-) enjoy your time and cheers! ;-)
Hope you are enjoying your holiday! As always, I am mesmerized by this story..such beautiful, descriptive writing!
Great story,great update.Thank you.PPS