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Savannah
Story written on August 19, 2011 by kins40.
Tina sighed as she attended to the removal of the lacy underwear. She tried to focus on her task, ignoring the fact that the woman who had visited every one of her day and night dreams was now lying half naked in front of her.
She managed to get the last remaining thorn out of Bette’s back, all that remained were angry red marks.
Reaching once again for the antibiotic cream, Tina allowed her eyes to roam over the brunette’s upper torso. The smooth silky skin deliciously covered a nicely shaped back. Tina started applying the cream.
Bette’s breath hitched when Tina touched her. Her touch was different from earlier on. She focused on her breathing, trying to regulate it as much as she could at the impromptu massage she was now receiving.
She felt the blonde’s hands move from the base of her neck to over her shoulders where she seemed to just spread the same healing feelings. Tina’s fingers probed lower along both side’s of the vet’s body and finally came to a rest near the small of Bette’s back.
The waistband of her combat trousers had slipped a little bit and had revealed the two most loveliest dimples just above where the curve of her bottom was starting. "You are just the most exquisite creation, God has put on this green Earth," Tina thought to herself. Elegant, sophisticated, beautiful and soft, all Tina wanted to do was look at her, caress her……
"You work out?" Tina asked suddenly to shake away the thoughts which were invading her mind.
"Hmmmmm?" Bette almost purred so relaxed under the pleasant ministrations.
Tina realised she was again heading into dangerous territory but she just could not help it. Her hands had just travelled along the warmest smoothest skin which covered the most well formed muscles below it. Strong yet feminine in every way.
"Sorry… I meant to say… Are you okay now?" Tina’s hands left Bette’s body.
The immediate loss of contact brought the vet back from her relaxed state.
"Sorry, yes, I’m fine," Bette said quietly noticing for the first time the relief from pain. "Thank you so much."
Her earlier feeling of embarrassment resurfaced momentarily. She wondered how she was going to be able to face the young accountant now that she had allowed her to strip her half naked.
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I like chapters like this. Not to much description, just enough. I loved it. PPVS.
Still loving it kins! Looking forward to your next post…please make it soon ;)
That was rather more romantic than the fable about Androcles and the lion… ;) I’m eager to see how their trip into to field pans out. Thanks for the post. :)
Hey Kins I have yet to comment on this story but thoroughly enjoying it. I love the change of scenery and different roles for B&T.
wow thats pretty intense they want each other badly, when it actually happens, it’s gonna be an explosion! I hope you’re having fun in France!
Lovely chapter. I can feel the heat from here!
Loved it, glad to see it progressing.
So wonderfully written. thank you love it and it’s like I’m sitting watching a movie I can just see it all. thank you.
Boy, they both in trouble. To an awkward introduction and avoiding to each other. To this..A “Half naked” Bette is a temptation you can’t resist.
Haaaa Chicken there are LMAO.Cannot wait to see Bette taking Tina , only Tina to the real savannah hey.Love the story, thank you for posting.
Bonjour and thanks for the gift of an unexpected post Kins! And as jp22 noted, props to you for the Androcles reference (LOL). Was that a coincidence or did you intended it? Either way, good thing Tina knew to use rubbing alcohol on Bette instead of betadine (although that would have been funny ;)
Fabulous surprise to see you posting while on holiday. Loved this chapter for many reasons. I could just feel the disappointment for Tina every time Bette avoided her and then when she misunderstood Bette invitation to “go out”. Use plenty of sunscreen and post when you can!
I am so hooked on this story. Nice job with Tina helping Bette with the thorns-now how about the Roses.
SO GOOD, LOVE IT
I love this story.
Hi Kins40 :-) good to see you back and posted another Chapter ;-) Well what can i say but i love this story!? .. It’s such a nice exposure for a beginning of what to come :-p lol… Oops! My bad :-D doesn’t mean I expecting more accident on Bette or any of them of course! I just glad that they are finally having more interaction here :-)
beautiful chapter, thanks for the update ;Denjoy ur stay in Paris :D and come up with more wonderful updates ;)
Woo Hoo seven pages!! What a welcome treat to wake up to on a Saturday morning. Those 2 won’t be able to fight it much longer. Post when you can and enjoy your vacation.
Hiya Kins.. Second rounds here… And i still love it! :-) I really in awe on how do you got such inspiration to write this entertaining lovely story?! Just remember that you are on vacation in France/Paris? (Enjoy your time btw! :-)) Looks like your talent and romantic blood plus romantic atmosphere plus your creativity are getting stronger.. So am I wrong if I expecting something romantic will happen on the coming chapters!? ;-) haha… Anyway, just want to share.. Guess my eyes a bit tired as when I read .. Pretzel?! .. *What the??*… Which when I refocus it is “.. pretty hazel eyes ..” :-p lol silly me, I know.. But I just want to read this again before sleep ;-) he3.. PPS while you can! Thanks for taking time to update/posting even though you are on holiday! :-) enjoy your time and cheers! ;-)
Hope you are enjoying your holiday! As always, I am mesmerized by this story..such beautiful, descriptive writing!
Great story,great update.Thank you.PPS