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Savannah
Story written on August 19, 2011 by kins40.
"Oh boy." She said this time out loud. There were a half dozen giant thorns embedded in the sensitive skin.
"That bad?" Bette asked.
"It may be easier if you lie down."
Eyeing the coldness of the surface, her patient was sitting on, Tina reached for some surgical linen which were neatly stacked up on a shelf next to her.
"Here, let’s try to make you as comfortable as possible" she said setting the scrub green cloth on the table for the brunette to lie on.
The blonde noticed as one of the thorns lay awkwardly below the strap of Bette’s bra.
"I think it is going to hurt," Tina warned softly. "And, Bette, you will have to….well, you will have to take off your bra at some point, there is a thorn just below the right strap and it is reaching below the band."
Tina reached for the tweezers in the medical kit. She removed them from their sterile cover and carefully set to work.
Rubbing alcohol around the first thorn with a cotton ball, she applied a gentle downward pressure along both sides of the puncture wound without squeezing. Holding the tweezers steady with her free hand she grasped the exposed end of the thorn without excessive force so as to not break it off. She pulled gently. The thorn slid out without any problems.
As Tina continued working, Bette bit her lip to keep from whimpering from the pain; it seemed to take forever as she felt each thorn being plucked from her skin.
The women did not speak to each other.
The only sound which could be heard in the room, were Tina’s quiet whispers. A simple praise at the steadfast bravery Bette was demonstrating or a reassuring indication of her progress. Her tone was soft and soothing.
There was one more thorn to attend to. "Bette," Tina broke the almost silence in the clinical room, "I am going to have to remove your bra now."
"Okay." Was all the brunette said. She felt Tina hands unclasp the back of the garment and letting the band fall freely by her sides, she felt the right hand strap of her bra be gently pulled down over her shoulder.
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I like chapters like this. Not to much description, just enough. I loved it. PPVS.
Still loving it kins! Looking forward to your next post…please make it soon ;)
That was rather more romantic than the fable about Androcles and the lion… ;) I’m eager to see how their trip into to field pans out. Thanks for the post. :)
Hey Kins I have yet to comment on this story but thoroughly enjoying it. I love the change of scenery and different roles for B&T.
wow thats pretty intense they want each other badly, when it actually happens, it’s gonna be an explosion! I hope you’re having fun in France!
Lovely chapter. I can feel the heat from here!
Loved it, glad to see it progressing.
So wonderfully written. thank you love it and it’s like I’m sitting watching a movie I can just see it all. thank you.
Boy, they both in trouble. To an awkward introduction and avoiding to each other. To this..A “Half naked” Bette is a temptation you can’t resist.
Haaaa Chicken there are LMAO.Cannot wait to see Bette taking Tina , only Tina to the real savannah hey.Love the story, thank you for posting.
Bonjour and thanks for the gift of an unexpected post Kins! And as jp22 noted, props to you for the Androcles reference (LOL). Was that a coincidence or did you intended it? Either way, good thing Tina knew to use rubbing alcohol on Bette instead of betadine (although that would have been funny ;)
Fabulous surprise to see you posting while on holiday. Loved this chapter for many reasons. I could just feel the disappointment for Tina every time Bette avoided her and then when she misunderstood Bette invitation to “go out”. Use plenty of sunscreen and post when you can!
I am so hooked on this story. Nice job with Tina helping Bette with the thorns-now how about the Roses.
SO GOOD, LOVE IT
I love this story.
Hi Kins40 :-) good to see you back and posted another Chapter ;-) Well what can i say but i love this story!? .. It’s such a nice exposure for a beginning of what to come :-p lol… Oops! My bad :-D doesn’t mean I expecting more accident on Bette or any of them of course! I just glad that they are finally having more interaction here :-)
beautiful chapter, thanks for the update ;Denjoy ur stay in Paris :D and come up with more wonderful updates ;)
Woo Hoo seven pages!! What a welcome treat to wake up to on a Saturday morning. Those 2 won’t be able to fight it much longer. Post when you can and enjoy your vacation.
Hiya Kins.. Second rounds here… And i still love it! :-) I really in awe on how do you got such inspiration to write this entertaining lovely story?! Just remember that you are on vacation in France/Paris? (Enjoy your time btw! :-)) Looks like your talent and romantic blood plus romantic atmosphere plus your creativity are getting stronger.. So am I wrong if I expecting something romantic will happen on the coming chapters!? ;-) haha… Anyway, just want to share.. Guess my eyes a bit tired as when I read .. Pretzel?! .. *What the??*… Which when I refocus it is “.. pretty hazel eyes ..” :-p lol silly me, I know.. But I just want to read this again before sleep ;-) he3.. PPS while you can! Thanks for taking time to update/posting even though you are on holiday! :-) enjoy your time and cheers! ;-)
Hope you are enjoying your holiday! As always, I am mesmerized by this story..such beautiful, descriptive writing!
Great story,great update.Thank you.PPS