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Savannah
Story written on August 19, 2011 by kins40.
It was Tina’s turn to look away from the intense scrutiny of the vet.
"I need to pat those dry," she said taking the soft towel, "And then if you have some antibiotic ointment …it would be wise to apply some on those cuts."
Bette pointed to one of the glass fronted stainless steel cabinets. "You will find some in there."
Tina followed the instructions and retrieved the healing cream which she proceeded to apply liberally to the cleaned up cuts of the brunette’s arms and hands.
She tried to be as quick and as thorough as possible. The feel of the soft skin below her massaging fingers sent shivers up and down her body.
She stammered somewhat when she asked the brunette to turn around so she could have a look at her back.
Bette did as she was told.
"Oh boy!" Tina thought to herself, "That shirt is going to have to come off if I want to have a look at her back."
She swallowed hard and started explaining to the woman who now had her back turned to her. "I have to remove your top…I think it’ll be easier if you are undressed."
On the other side of the table, the brunette closed her eyes briefly. "You are going to have to help me," she said quietly, "I cannot do it by myself, if I bring my arms above my head, I feel a real sharp sting….do you think you could……"
Before Bette finished her sentence, she felt two hands tug slowly at the base of her shirt, freeing the hem away from the top of her trousers. Gathering the fabric together, the blonde was in the process of slowly lifting her shirt along the length of her torso. She halted her movements for the couple of seconds it took her to walk round the table.
"I think it’ll be easier if I do it from the front…" Tina said carefully peeling off the polo shirt and passing it over the curly brown hair.
Before she would allow herself to get to distracted by the vet’s magnificent upper body, she quickly went back to her initial position to survey the damage.
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I like chapters like this. Not to much description, just enough. I loved it. PPVS.
Still loving it kins! Looking forward to your next post…please make it soon ;)
That was rather more romantic than the fable about Androcles and the lion… ;) I’m eager to see how their trip into to field pans out. Thanks for the post. :)
Hey Kins I have yet to comment on this story but thoroughly enjoying it. I love the change of scenery and different roles for B&T.
wow thats pretty intense they want each other badly, when it actually happens, it’s gonna be an explosion! I hope you’re having fun in France!
Lovely chapter. I can feel the heat from here!
Loved it, glad to see it progressing.
So wonderfully written. thank you love it and it’s like I’m sitting watching a movie I can just see it all. thank you.
Boy, they both in trouble. To an awkward introduction and avoiding to each other. To this..A “Half naked” Bette is a temptation you can’t resist.
Haaaa Chicken there are LMAO.Cannot wait to see Bette taking Tina , only Tina to the real savannah hey.Love the story, thank you for posting.
Bonjour and thanks for the gift of an unexpected post Kins! And as jp22 noted, props to you for the Androcles reference (LOL). Was that a coincidence or did you intended it? Either way, good thing Tina knew to use rubbing alcohol on Bette instead of betadine (although that would have been funny ;)
Fabulous surprise to see you posting while on holiday. Loved this chapter for many reasons. I could just feel the disappointment for Tina every time Bette avoided her and then when she misunderstood Bette invitation to “go out”. Use plenty of sunscreen and post when you can!
I am so hooked on this story. Nice job with Tina helping Bette with the thorns-now how about the Roses.
SO GOOD, LOVE IT
I love this story.
Hi Kins40 :-) good to see you back and posted another Chapter ;-) Well what can i say but i love this story!? .. It’s such a nice exposure for a beginning of what to come :-p lol… Oops! My bad :-D doesn’t mean I expecting more accident on Bette or any of them of course! I just glad that they are finally having more interaction here :-)
beautiful chapter, thanks for the update ;Denjoy ur stay in Paris :D and come up with more wonderful updates ;)
Woo Hoo seven pages!! What a welcome treat to wake up to on a Saturday morning. Those 2 won’t be able to fight it much longer. Post when you can and enjoy your vacation.
Hiya Kins.. Second rounds here… And i still love it! :-) I really in awe on how do you got such inspiration to write this entertaining lovely story?! Just remember that you are on vacation in France/Paris? (Enjoy your time btw! :-)) Looks like your talent and romantic blood plus romantic atmosphere plus your creativity are getting stronger.. So am I wrong if I expecting something romantic will happen on the coming chapters!? ;-) haha… Anyway, just want to share.. Guess my eyes a bit tired as when I read .. Pretzel?! .. *What the??*… Which when I refocus it is “.. pretty hazel eyes ..” :-p lol silly me, I know.. But I just want to read this again before sleep ;-) he3.. PPS while you can! Thanks for taking time to update/posting even though you are on holiday! :-) enjoy your time and cheers! ;-)
Hope you are enjoying your holiday! As always, I am mesmerized by this story..such beautiful, descriptive writing!
Great story,great update.Thank you.PPS