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Savannah – Malaika
Seeing none, the brunette asked worriedly "Are you alright?"
Her eyes filled up with tears as she attempted to smile her relief at seeing Tina visibly unscathed.
"Are you hurting anywhere?" her hands went to stroking the swollen belly softly to cupping Tina’s face gently, leaning into her for a kiss.
Tina laughed her excitement at seeing Bette but almost immediately gasped as she noticed for the first time that the vet had not been left unhurt in the whole incident.
"You’re bleeding!’ a small pale hand reached up and tried to touch the gaping wound just below Bette’s hairline.
The brunette pulled back quickly reassuring, "It’s nothing, I promise you!’
"But…" Tina protested taking in the whole picture of the woman in front of her. Her shirt was torn and the skin below it was visibly grazed and bruises had started coming up. "You are hurt!"
"Don’t worry about me," Bette reassured gently again, "Let’s get you out of here."
Then, as though their situation suddenly started to make sense, Tina burst into tears, frightening Bette way beyond what they had just experienced.
"Tina.. baby, are you hurting anywhere?" Bette asked anxiously.
Through sobs and uncontrollable tears Tina shook her head as if to say no, only for her head to move the opposite way and nod to relate her discomfort.
"Where, " a now panicked vet asked, "Where is it hurting?"
A pale face strewn with tears lifted to look at a worried Bette.
"My stomach hurts," Tina managed to say through shaky exhales, "I need to pee."
A second or two of silence fell between the two women allowing the words to settle between them, the moment only broken sporadically by the hiccupping sniffles coming from the blonde
"Pardon, you what?" Bette then asked softly not sure whether she had heard correctly.
"Bette, I have to pee… badly…really really really badly!" Tina repeated with complete seriousness.
"I’m stuck, my seatbelt won’t release, I can’t get out!" the blonde explained trying to manoeuvre herself out of her seat without success and with a doubling recrudescence of tears near shouted, "I have to pee! Now!"
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Jackiee1 says
Wonderful, sorry it’s over will wait (probably not patiently) for your next contribution
jp22 says
Very tense start followed by a lovely ending. Thank you! :)
slntrdr says
If I’d known you would respond that quickly, I would have said something sooner! ;-) Brava! Lovely!
bsgjw01 says
Wonderful! Thank you! Can’t wait to read your next story.
favcouple says
Thank you that was simply beautiful. Loved it.
rocknchick57 says
Such a truly amazing story…cannot wait for your next! Thanks so much Kins…
majicspider says
Okay, we forgive your absence. What a wonderful update!
natamari36 says
Beautiful. Until next one….
wkm says
So love this story. Thank you so much .
azmama says
You are such a talented writer. Just love this story. I look forward to reading your next story. This one just had an unique twist. Well done!
cvu says
Kins so sweet….and what a way to give birth?,in the middle of Savannah. thanks kins.
Martha10 says
Loved this story, as I loved all your others! We’ll be waiting for your next one! :)
talaula says
Special K, you do it every time. Thank you for this beautiful short 😘
teegirl says
Aw Kins, that was beautiful…childbirth…the pushing…I remember it well…although you gave me a little fright earlier. Love the story. Thank you.
ceetime says
that was great
colenickel says
Wow…so real and absolutely beautiful!
rubber duckster says
Wonderful. Thank you kins.
Dainty says
Wonderful story. Seems Bette can never say no to Tina even when she knowws she should not give in to Tina’ wishes. When you truly love someone, it is very difficult to say no. Wonderfully sweet and loving story and it always is when you write them. Thanks for bringing us this great story. Waiting for your next. Don’t remember if I had a chance to wish you a Happy New Year!
didi1956 says
Beautiful,thank you.Please continue writing for us.
dazzlecarol says
Aah Kins loved the gentle ending after a bit of a fraught beginning.No matter wether its a PG-13 or a NC-17 story its beautifully written and descriptive.Always a great knowledge of the subject you write about.Loved the story from beginning to end.So looking forward to the next one.No rush you understand i know a lot of work and research must go into each story you tell.We are lucky to have you writing these stories for us…Cx
kbergin47 says
So glad everything turned out ok. Loved this and looking forward to more.
elhil14n says
Welcome to the world Angelica-Malaika. Excellent documentation and a wonderful writing skill. Thanks a lot. I’m looking forward to the “bigger work.”
iHeartHeart says
Wow! I didn’t realize how much I’d been holding my breath until Tina had their baby. Great writing Kins and this story in particular is one of my favourites! I’m looking forward to the other treats you have in store for us too ;0) (PS, good to see you haven’t lost your touch for cliffys with the previous chapter)
Sammer says
Thanks for posting this important chapter in their lives. This is such a beautiful story.
Merlion says
Hello Kins!! ;-) thanks for another amazing story!! :-) You made me squirming anxiously when I read about Tina’s delivery process.. Such a moment that refresh my memory! Uhm.. :-p I feel a kinda glad for having no time to peek to the site lately when I saw the waiting time from previous chapter to this one :-p hehe… Though I also feel a bit sad that I can’t drop by as often as before :-/… But i am glad that i manage to catch up your story!! ;-) Anyway.. Heard that something big is on the way! :-D I will keep an eye for that! Haha.. I hope all is fine with you there and no more problem with your comp ;-) take care and looking forward to your next posting! :-D
ut says
That was beautiful and sweet and happy ending, love it. Thanks for sharing this story with us!
tibettenation1 says
Perfect ending to a perfect story!!!
RobbieRob says
Ok, after having two babies, I can totally understand Tina’s urgency to pee! hahaha!!!! I was laughing out loud. Almost died in a horrible plane crash and her biggest problem: the desperate need to pee and couldn’t get the seatbelt off! Priceless!
This story is so beautiful and I think it’s time for an update. Maybe more babies?
mscully says
My God! perfect story!
Feel the fear and despair of B & T.
And finally, Angel comes into the world, the symbol
Love B & T ..
Congratulations
11 stars.
Lee says
I can not tell you how much I loved this story!! I just happened upon your story on a search for something to read. I absolutely love your writing! As I was reading I felt as if I was transported into Bette’s and Tina’s beautiful country. Thank you so for writing this story. Would love another sequel on Bette,Tina and Angelica life on the Savanna! Thank you again your are an amazing author!