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Scorpio Rising 2
“We didn’t finish our talk from this morning…” She whispers.
“I know….”
“…………Dinner was really good….Marco loved his hotdogs….”
‘Yeah but he is wearing most of it…” I laugh.
“Wanna put him to bed….?”
“Wanna put me to bed?”
“Shane….”
“Come on let’s go give him a bath and his story and then….you know.” I wink at her.
So I pick him up and we go back inside. Carm wakes him to get ready for his bath. He is cranky and mad at being woken up and worse to be woken up for a bath. So he ran all over the house. It ended with me having to yell at him and his cries of protest. All cleaned up I read him his new favorite comic book.
In this issue of Spiderman. Peter Parker is conflicted over his feelings for Mary Jane and Spiderman’s feeling for Jill Stacy, Gwen Stacy’s cousin. Jill is beautiful dark haired very much a reminder of his long lost love Gwen who was killed by his arch enemy Norman Osborne. The situation is more complicated when Peter realizes that Jill is in love with him, not Spiderman. She hates Spiderman blaming him for the death of her cousin and her father captain Stacy. They talk in the rain, Peter and Jill fighting their growing feelings for each other. I don’t get to finish the story cause Marco passed out.
Imagine that, having a alter ego in love with a ghost from his past and the woman in love with who he really is….I had to shake my head on that one.
I lock up the house. Say my goodnights to John and Miriam who were watching the Dolphin’s game they recorded earlier. I make my way to our bedroom. When I walk in the room smelled of that lotion Carmen puts on to keep her legs moisturized. The room smelled sweet and floral. Carmen smiled when I walked in and I almost felt normal. Almost.
“That was an interesting story you read him tonight.”
“What do you mean…?”
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(16 votes, average: 3.81 out of 5)
Love this story & how Shane’s inner conflict/demons are effecting her family.
Awesome update. :D
so fucking sadd but i love it.. you always make me cry…i wish i was in love like that lol
everyone needs closure… i hope shane finds it, because i don’t think you can start loving another person unless you find closure with the first. i think. and everyone needs joy division….at least shanes has that. thanks for the update.the drunken anguish at her grave felt really raw. great job.
WOW!!! JUST WOW!!! Im a new reader and u have me crying and begging for more!!! PLEASE CONTINUE!!! “Everybody loves a Latin girl”
I am so freakin happy there is a continuation to this saga!! (I know I’m a little late) The restlessness that Shane feels is understandable given her former lifestyle. The conflict of her feelings is so realistic. Great Job!!
I hope that Shane finds the closure that she needs to move on! I love that you are continuing this story and that you have a whole new angle with the PI possiblity. Looking forward to more!
love this story longer
ok now you have me crying.. the hardest thing to do is say goodbye to the love of your life….. wonderful update.. i hope they can work out their problems.. like the idea of an IP buisness… please update soon thanks
I’m so happy that you decided to continue this story. It is hands down my favorite.