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    Scorpio Rising 2

    Story written on November 5, 2006 by New Dawn Fades.
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    Committed still I turn to go.


     

     

    I head to the kitchen and I see Carmen talking with John. They look serious. I go to the fridge to nab one of the little guy’s juice boxes. I lean on the counter to try to get a sense of what they are talking about.

     

     

    “Hey….baby” Carmen says. She has a look of relief in her eyes to see me up and not a crying mess.

     

     

    “Shane…” John says

     

     

    “You sleep ok baby?”

     

     

    “Yeah I feel really good…”

     

     

    “So Carmen what do you think?” John says.

     

     

    “I like the idea…..I am down if Shane is…”

     

     

    “Down with…?”

     

     

    “Look at us all going bonkers in here. Nothing to do locked in a vacancy….so I have been checking out some property around the downtown area. And I think we should all go into the private investigation business.”

     

     

    “Really….?”

     

     

    “Just what the doctor ordered huh?” John says

     

     

    “Is that dangerous?” Carmen asks.

     

     

    “Maybe a little….it’s not being in the F.B.I. or some kind secret black ops thing…or being an underground street racer…What, we follow around cheating hearts, look for people who don’t want to be found….We’ll get guns….come on what do you say?”

     

     

     

    “And you are ok with this?” I ask Carmen.

     

     

     

    “Yeah I think it will be good for us…for all of us…”

     

     

    I walk over to her and give her a kiss on the cheek. She strokes my head as I whisper that I am going to look for Marco. She motions to the living room behind the curtains. I leave them to hammer out the ideas. 

     

     

    John has a file an inch thick. He opens it and they discuss the plans. What type of cases we would take, what our rates would be. They seemed in sync. Carmen never had a problem communicating with John or Miriam. Despite her loss of memory she felt very comfortable with them and considered them to be her parents in a way. They treated her well never making her feel weird for not remembering anything. It was nice to see her happy and productive. 

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    4. everyone needs closure… i hope shane finds it, because i don’t think you can start loving another person unless you find closure with the first. i think. and everyone needs joy division….at least shanes has that. thanks for the update.the drunken anguish at her grave felt really raw. great job.

    6. I am so freakin happy there is a continuation to this saga!! (I know I’m a little late) The restlessness that Shane feels is understandable given her former lifestyle. The conflict of her feelings is so realistic. Great Job!!

    7. I hope that Shane finds the closure that she needs to move on! I love that you are continuing this story and that you have a whole new angle with the PI possiblity. Looking forward to more!

    9. ok now you have me crying.. the hardest thing to do is say goodbye to the love of your life….. wonderful update.. i hope they can work out their problems.. like the idea of an IP buisness… please update soon thanks

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