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    Scorpio Rising 7

    Story written on November 19, 2006 by New Dawn Fades.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=63270
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    “……..a gift of stormy weather.”

     

     

    Yup.

     

     

     The silence.

     

     

     That ring in your ears. The feel of the air pressure change whenever a sound passes thru it. I pour myself a drink lay back on the couch and stare at the ceiling. I took the deepest possible breath wondering why I always had to be the mature one of the relationship. Why was it that she could cut and stab me alive with her dull repetitive behavior, and yet it was always up to me to apologize?

     

     

    We could have gone to bed happy content tonight and instead I am getting drunk on the couch of our office. Sometimes….well most of the time I wonder if this is how it would have been with her had she not lost her memory. But of course thinking about Carmen and her lost memory made me feel like an idiot.

     

     

    Idiot she has no memory. She acts like a kid because she doesn’t know any better. It’s a balancing act. And my scales where tipping. Head in my hands. Asking myself why do we keep making the same mistakes over and over?

     

     

    Sleep. Maybe it will be better in the morning.

     

     

     

     

     

     

    Ch 11

     

     

     

    I awake to the sound of high heels clicking and clacking in my head. I look around trying to figure out where am I, how did I get here and what was I doing in this place? There is a gentle knock on my office door. I could see a silhouette from the foggy glass in the door. John really wanted the feel of the whole PI thing. What time is it….11:45…shit….I didn’t take Marco to school…..the knocking was getting less and less polite.

     

     

     

    “Alright, alright…keep your…..Marina?”

     

     

    “Shane……what are you doing here?”

     

     

    “I am one of The Three M’S ……”

     

     

    “I see…..of course….McCutcheon……that name how could I forget that name….I left message with Mr. Mills….the world is too small…..”

     

     

    “Yeah you’re telling me. So um…..come in.”

     

     

    “I am sorry Shane….I can not burden you with this…..I will find someone else to help me….”

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    1. holy shit. omg. wow…. uhm… yea. you had me so conflicted, i didn’t know who was right. if shane was really blind to her unhappiness like carmen said or if carmen was really being crasy like shane said. then… the intensity just flew off the chart and till the very last paragraphy, i really thought shane was gonna shoot herself. and it would be ironic because they would save her and she would wake up with no memory and just… SHIT. that was a fucking fantastic chapter. it was fucking. you are beyond great. my heart is still racing.

    2. That was one hell of a chapter! I think it was right on with the characterization of Shane in this fic to want to kill herself than be without Carmen. I know she feels the pull of her former life but when faced with Carmen setting her free, her love for Carmen is won. Yet, with that said, I dont see how they can ever get over this hump…Shane will do anything for Carmen but is Carmen and Marco exciting enough for her. No doubt she loves her but is hard to deny the differences between the before and after Carmen. Amazing… Also was wondering which Carly on GH would Carmen like to sleep with…First, second, or the current one?

    8. holly shit!!!! holly GOD!!!, Holly fuck!!! Holly what ever this was … i cant even describe how i feel right now… but i got to tell you i was fucking scared… wuh!! youre awesome

    10. Ok at one point I was wishing for Shane to shoot herself. Cuz Carmen is just constantly messing with her. But it’s a great story. Very well done. And Carmen is still trying to figue herself out since her memory lost. She def should stop doing that to herself and Shane. Keep going I’m waiting for the next one.

    12. the word intense is not evn close to wut uve written! words that we use everyday, they sound so simple but when they come into ur hands u turn them into fire and thn ice. i was so sure that shane was gonna shoot herself thanku for surprising me! ur writingz out of this world man!! sorry havnt been commentin but i dun miss any chapter :D

    13. I agree with bum. They are so out of control, I really can’t wait to see what happens next. You’re writing gets me all riled up. Oh, and sorry I haven’t commented on your last few chapters, I’ve been really busy, and also, I like to save them up…is that weird?

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