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SCREAM 2: CH.8
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“Marina!”
Marina turned and looked at Tim. She slowly got off of Shane and got up.
“Your going to shoot me Tim?”
Tim nodded as his hand shook. “Marina don’t move or I’ll shoot”
“Do it Tim! Shoot her!” Shane yelled.
Tina and Carmen where huddled in a corner.
“Come on Tim shoot me” Marina laughed. “You don’t have the balls, that’s why Jenny went to me, because you didn’t have it in you to please her!”
Tim was shaking and put his finger at the trigger. “Fuck you Marina” BANG. Marina slowly looked down at her stomach.
Tim smiled then stopped as he felt a sharp pain coming from his chest. Blood started to consume his shirt. “shit…” he fell back the gun, slipping from his hands. Marina fell over as well. Shane wondered where the other gunshot came from but was afraid to look back.
Tina looked over at Tim’s body and sighed. Who else would die tonight she wondered as she looked over to Carmen, who no longer was there. “Car- she stopped as she saw Carmen crawl for the gun.
“Look what you made me do” Damien sighed as he walked in. He had cuts and scrapes all over. “You over there” he ordered Shane. Shane quickly went to where Tina was at. He walked over and checked Marinas pulse. “Stupid bitch” He looked over at Dana holding Alice. He laughed. “Damn right, just what you deserve! You could have killed me with that stupid van as for Helena I should thank you” Dana ignored him not taking her eyes off of Alice. He turned and went over to Tim’s now lifeless body looking for the gun.
“Looking for this-Pendejo?” Carmen said as she stood up pointing the gun at Damien.
Shane and Tina looked over at Carmen.
“oh… I’m scared” Damien laughed as he stood up pointing his gun at her. “You shoot me, I shoot you either way I don’t think this will end well”
“Well, my life’s worth giving up if I can take you with me” Carmen said.
Damien smiled. “You got balls” Damien went to shoot Carmen but Haven intervened.
“No!” Haven pointed the gun up.
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Damn so many twists and turns! At least Alice isn’t dead. lol@the bullet graze!
Uh, right now I’m not sure if I should be a.) mad at you for saying that Alice dies, leading me to another expectation of sorrow over the loss of yet another one of my faves or b.) glad that you didn’t kill her off. Which to choose? Lol well obviously it’s the second one:) But next time try not to write a summary that will give someone a heart attack! Just kidding, it’s your story and I love every word of it. So thanks for the awsome fast post and instead of asking you to post soon, I feel like asking you to take it slower since I don’t want it to end. Only 2 more chapters? *goes off to sulk* But still awsome post!
Good twists and glad that Alice alive, hope that you will have some more twist to make Bette alive too. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Nice…got me thinking you killed of my ALICE!!!! Im glad you didnt tho! lol Theres so much twist going on in this story,ilove it!!!!Keep up the gr8 job!!! Boy u sure are ROCKING in this story babe!! PPS
I love this story and I can’t wait to see what will happen next please post soon great update as always
Sh*t, you almost got me there, believing you actually had killed Alice. Very happy that didn’t happen. Al’s little performance was so funny, I can really imagine her that way. You have a great feeling of characters, that’s what makes this fic and others you wrote so great. The question now is, are Shane & Alice and the rest of them going to get into trouble with the cops? You really deserve all the good comments, cause if the story isn’t good, I don’t even bother to write a comment. So believe me, I love your writing skills!!! Keep up the good work! Eager for more…feed me!!!