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SCREAM 2: CH.8
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“What the fuck are you doing?” Damien tried to point the gun back at Carmen.
“No more killing!” Haven pushed himself over trying to knock the gun out of his hands.
Damien regained his balance. “Damn it you’re ruining everything! Stop it!” Damien’s left hand grabbed the gun. While his right took it back. Carmen stared in disbelief.
Shane looked over at Tina. “What the hell is he doing?”
Tina shook her head. “I’ll explain later, Tell Carmen to shoot him already!” Shane got up and got Carmen’s attention with out letting Damien/Haven noticed. Shane pointed at Damien/Haven and mouthed at her to shoot. Carmen nodded the gun following him as he went back and forth fighting with himself. Carmen fired the gun twice, shutting her eyes after the last shot.
Carmen pointed the gun down as the shots escaped the gun. Damien laughed as he got knocked back onto the wall. Quickly though, his expression changed. He looked over at Carmen. “I was trying to… help you- Haven slid down the wall. The guilt ran through her as she let the gun drop. “Oh god what did I do” Shane quickly took her side. “no, no it’s ok Carmen you did the right thing” Shane put his arm around her. Tina sighed and stood up. As Haven’s body sat still, “is everyone alright?” Tina asked as she walked over to Shane and Carmen. “Yeah- They looked around the room. “Where are Dana and Alice?” They heard the cries coming from Dana and quickly ran to her.
“oh Alice no” Shane kneeled down in front of Alice. She looked at Dana. “What happened?”
“She- She was shot I- I don’t know” Dana was crying. Holding Alice close. Alice opened her eyes slowly looking into their eyes.
“we’re ok… we’re ok now” Alice nodded.
Tina took Alice’s hand. “Alice hang on I’m going to call 911” She said as she hurriedly went to check Marina’s body for a cell.
Carmen was just looking on blankly she couldn’t believe just like that, someone else that they loved dearly would be gone.
“Good- bye…” Alice said as she closed her eyes.
Dana shook her head. “noooo Alice nooo! Come back!!!”
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Damn so many twists and turns! At least Alice isn’t dead. lol@the bullet graze!
Uh, right now I’m not sure if I should be a.) mad at you for saying that Alice dies, leading me to another expectation of sorrow over the loss of yet another one of my faves or b.) glad that you didn’t kill her off. Which to choose? Lol well obviously it’s the second one:) But next time try not to write a summary that will give someone a heart attack! Just kidding, it’s your story and I love every word of it. So thanks for the awsome fast post and instead of asking you to post soon, I feel like asking you to take it slower since I don’t want it to end. Only 2 more chapters? *goes off to sulk* But still awsome post!
Good twists and glad that Alice alive, hope that you will have some more twist to make Bette alive too. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Nice…got me thinking you killed of my ALICE!!!! Im glad you didnt tho! lol Theres so much twist going on in this story,ilove it!!!!Keep up the gr8 job!!! Boy u sure are ROCKING in this story babe!! PPS
I love this story and I can’t wait to see what will happen next please post soon great update as always
Sh*t, you almost got me there, believing you actually had killed Alice. Very happy that didn’t happen. Al’s little performance was so funny, I can really imagine her that way. You have a great feeling of characters, that’s what makes this fic and others you wrote so great. The question now is, are Shane & Alice and the rest of them going to get into trouble with the cops? You really deserve all the good comments, cause if the story isn’t good, I don’t even bother to write a comment. So believe me, I love your writing skills!!! Keep up the good work! Eager for more…feed me!!!