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Second Chance
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“Yes absolutely! Uhmm do you mind if I join you?” Bette asked
“Only in one condition”
“Which is?”
“Call me Tina”
Bette gave her a sweet as sugar smile and said
“It’s a deal!”
3
Bette joined Tina for a walk one fine morning and as they strolled the long road leading to the park, both women became so at ease with each other and got so engrossed in their conversation that neither cared of the distance. Tina seemed to have found a new set of strength whenever she’s with the young brunette as a matter of fact a rush of excitement went through her. It was like for the first time in a long time she felt someone’s presence was so powerful that it could knock her frail body down.
Both women jumped when Bette accidentally brushed her arms against Tina’s as a surge of electricity traveled thru their body. They just looked at each other both surprised at what happened but both were able to recompose themselves quickly then smiled at each other.
They talked about various topics but mainly about the town of Marion and their family backgrounds. Tina was never a talker but with Bette, words would just easily come out of her lips and she absolutely loved the attention that the brunette was giving to her. There was even a moment when she looked at the young woman that Tina felt a constriction in her chest as her beauty was simply breathtaking just like Elizabeth’s. She couldn’t help but wonder about what would had become of the brunette or was she even alive and then Tina thought whatever happened to her the previous night whether it was a dream or she really did go back in time she’s certain that there’s a reason behind it.
Bette on the other hand couldn’t understand why she’s so drawn to the old woman. There was something about her that Bette couldn’t figure out and she could have sworn that she had seen Tina before but she just couldn’t remember where and when. What surprised her even more was when Tina gave her an intense gaze she felt butterflies in her stomach.
At first she was in denial but as she listened to Tina’s stories about her life slowly and gradually she found herself getting smitten by the old woman even more. When Tina opened her mouth all of Bette’s attention was just focused on her and the sound of her voice was melody to the brunette’s ears. Every time she looked at Tina despite her age and wrinkled skin all she could see was her beauty.
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Hi ladies! I know this is late but still I want to greet you all Belated Merry Christmas! I know some of you are waiting for a new chapter of Lover in the Dark, but forgive me I’ve been busy due to the holidays and can’t bring myself to write a new chapter. Please don’t think that I’ve forgotten you all so Instead I would like to repost an old Christmas story that I wrote 3 years ago and I guess not everyone was able to read it the first time so I want to post it again if that’s alright(; I was also inspired by my awesome fellow TiBette fan fiction writers and friends tibettenation1, Pie_Fair and robynTibetter so I thought why not add entertainment to all of you amazing ladies who haven’t read this (; BTW This is a 3- part short story and I also did little revisions and corrections as you know English is not my native language so I hope you enjoy even for the second time around and if you still see some mistakes just kindly disregard it (;
By the way just want to say the amazing and talented Pie_Fair has made me a sexy and i mean a sexy cover for Lover in the Dark and will show that once the new chapter is complete so please watch out for that.
Of course I remember this story, as the song says, it is unforgettable!
I loved it the first time I read it. Why wouldn’t I? A magical story of a 70 year old Tina with a beautiful young Bette and intertwined with the wonderful ‘Unforgettable’ song that I remember so well from my late teenage years. I loved reading it even more this Second Time Around, Thank You.
A belated Happy Christmas, phacey and a wish for a Healthy and Peaceful New year. I look forward to the next Chapter of Lover in the Dark not only for your storytelling but, now, for Pie’s sexy cover art!
Aww yeess this story that had me crying for days…i was so happy when they found each other after so long…and a grandma Tina you had to love it. How come this story has been posted a second and yet it just as beautiful, fantastic, amazing, awesome as before
Enjoyed it, thanks
oh, dear. :-)
thank you for the wonderful Christmas gift. I loved it. but I know it’s not surprising you. I love everything that you write. Thank you for sharing with us your wonderful talent. I’m looking forward to the sequel.
Merry Christmas, dear friend.
I do remember this story – but the ending was a little different – no? ! Hmmmm still great after all these years! ty
Hey hey! Thanks for the shoutout!
Really like the reminisce!
I totally understand, we all have other things to do in life so it’s difficult to keep posting on a regular basis. But don’t worry my friend, we’re patient…although we might not seem to be but we are.
Have a happy holiday and keep up the amazing work!
That was awesome and a little change there and is good to read this story again, love it, thanks my friend and Merry Christmas to you!
Beautiful story the second time reading it! I went back and read all your work this summer. When you have the time and energy to finish Lover in the Dark – we will be waiting patiently…well maybe not too patient! Thank you, my friend!
Ditto with mamadoc this story is truly amazing and totally captures my imagination. Thanks for sharing this again sweetie and will be anxiously waiting for new chapter of Lover. Happy holidays my dearest friend!
I’ve read it before but is as good if not better now. Thank you, you are a wonderful writer. Keep up the great work.
Thank you for this gift.
Merry Christmas !!
You are fantastic.
10 Stars.
Phacey it was really a good idea reposting this story. I enjoyed rereading it as much as I enjoyed reading it for the first time. But I like this better… with a quite different ending.
It’s a wonderful magical story. It makes me think that if I have a funny Fairy God Mother like Alice and if she would ask me, “If you will be given a chance to change something in your past will you do it?” then maybe I will consider it… changing something in my past.
By the way, Bette’s bestfriend Michelle, I like her name… it reminds me of a very good friend… someone sooooo dear to me.
Thanks a lot and please keep writing!
Great Story!!!!!!!!