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Second Chance
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She found herself walking closer to get a better view, her heart was beating so fast and her body was trembling “So beautiful…” the brunette said as she ran her fingers on the frame. The second her hand made contact another electric shock went thru her only this time it was more powerful that she had to close her eyes. With her heart pounding so hard she slowly opened her eyes and the first word that she uttered was “Tina…” then suddenly memories came flashing back to her.
The night when her father went to Tina’s 18th birthday, their sweet yet sensual dance and the moment when their lips almost touched and then she realized that the dream wasn’t just a dream, she realized that it did happen a long, long time ago. Right there and then as she stood in front of the picture of the only woman who truly captivated her heart she told herself that the wait was over. She marched out of the room with only one goal coursing through her mind and that was to see her again.
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Tina was in the garden just sitting quietly, she has to get away from the house because she didn’t want to ruin the happy atmosphere inside. She wanted to allow herself to wallow in her sadness; she looked up to the sky and sighed heavily
“I’m such a fool to believe that Bette and I have a chance… There will never be a second chance…” her voice trailed off when she heard that same song again
‘Unforgettable, that’s what you are, Unforgettable though near or far’
Slowly Tina could feel the goose bumps crawling on her skin as she felt a strong energy coming on her way. She turned to the direction where the energy was coming from and her heart began to beat wildly as she saw the silhouette of a person walking towards her
‘Like a song of love that clings to me, How the thought of you does things to me
Never before has someone been more’
She gasped when she saw who it was. The woman who had captured her heart for a long time was now standing before her
‘Unforgettable in every way and forevermore, that’s how you’ll stay’
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Hi ladies! I know this is late but still I want to greet you all Belated Merry Christmas! I know some of you are waiting for a new chapter of Lover in the Dark, but forgive me I’ve been busy due to the holidays and can’t bring myself to write a new chapter. Please don’t think that I’ve forgotten you all so Instead I would like to repost an old Christmas story that I wrote 3 years ago and I guess not everyone was able to read it the first time so I want to post it again if that’s alright(; I was also inspired by my awesome fellow TiBette fan fiction writers and friends tibettenation1, Pie_Fair and robynTibetter so I thought why not add entertainment to all of you amazing ladies who haven’t read this (; BTW This is a 3- part short story and I also did little revisions and corrections as you know English is not my native language so I hope you enjoy even for the second time around and if you still see some mistakes just kindly disregard it (;
By the way just want to say the amazing and talented Pie_Fair has made me a sexy and i mean a sexy cover for Lover in the Dark and will show that once the new chapter is complete so please watch out for that.
Of course I remember this story, as the song says, it is unforgettable!
I loved it the first time I read it. Why wouldn’t I? A magical story of a 70 year old Tina with a beautiful young Bette and intertwined with the wonderful ‘Unforgettable’ song that I remember so well from my late teenage years. I loved reading it even more this Second Time Around, Thank You.
A belated Happy Christmas, phacey and a wish for a Healthy and Peaceful New year. I look forward to the next Chapter of Lover in the Dark not only for your storytelling but, now, for Pie’s sexy cover art!
Aww yeess this story that had me crying for days…i was so happy when they found each other after so long…and a grandma Tina you had to love it. How come this story has been posted a second and yet it just as beautiful, fantastic, amazing, awesome as before
Enjoyed it, thanks
oh, dear. :-)
thank you for the wonderful Christmas gift. I loved it. but I know it’s not surprising you. I love everything that you write. Thank you for sharing with us your wonderful talent. I’m looking forward to the sequel.
Merry Christmas, dear friend.
I do remember this story – but the ending was a little different – no? ! Hmmmm still great after all these years! ty
Hey hey! Thanks for the shoutout!
Really like the reminisce!
I totally understand, we all have other things to do in life so it’s difficult to keep posting on a regular basis. But don’t worry my friend, we’re patient…although we might not seem to be but we are.
Have a happy holiday and keep up the amazing work!
That was awesome and a little change there and is good to read this story again, love it, thanks my friend and Merry Christmas to you!
Beautiful story the second time reading it! I went back and read all your work this summer. When you have the time and energy to finish Lover in the Dark – we will be waiting patiently…well maybe not too patient! Thank you, my friend!
Ditto with mamadoc this story is truly amazing and totally captures my imagination. Thanks for sharing this again sweetie and will be anxiously waiting for new chapter of Lover. Happy holidays my dearest friend!
I’ve read it before but is as good if not better now. Thank you, you are a wonderful writer. Keep up the great work.
Thank you for this gift.
Merry Christmas !!
You are fantastic.
10 Stars.
Phacey it was really a good idea reposting this story. I enjoyed rereading it as much as I enjoyed reading it for the first time. But I like this better… with a quite different ending.
It’s a wonderful magical story. It makes me think that if I have a funny Fairy God Mother like Alice and if she would ask me, “If you will be given a chance to change something in your past will you do it?” then maybe I will consider it… changing something in my past.
By the way, Bette’s bestfriend Michelle, I like her name… it reminds me of a very good friend… someone sooooo dear to me.
Thanks a lot and please keep writing!
Great Story!!!!!!!!