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Secret Love chapter 5
” No problem, I’m sure that you have a lot to tell me to! Hey! How about tomorrow? At the Planet? Like usual? It’s gonna be fun! Come!” She begs
” What time?”
“Usual! And this way you could see everyone at the same time and put us all up to the beat of Toronto!!!”
” Sounds like a plan! And thanks again And see you tomorrow Alice! And Good night everyone!”
I hear a couple of good nights here and there as I walk to the front door
Walking is just my favourite sport. You can breathe fresh air, think for a while So it’s just great.
Arriving home, I check the answering machine. Hey I have a message!
Hey it’s Mike, hummm I was wondering if you would be able to cover a story I know that you wanted to take some time off but you really have to cover this because this article is going directly in the New York Times, anyway give me a call back!
What story does he want? The New York Times? What interest they have in me? I’m just a low class journalist. Why? They don’t even like my being direct and in your face kinda way to write. They told me so many times What did happen in their heads?
Whatever. I’ll call him in the morning to have more info
As I’m preparing myself to go to bed, it’s poring rain outside Humm Lucky me!
I put on my pyjamas while loading my PC to check my emails when it bangs on my front door
WHAT THE *****? WHO IS THIS AT THIS HOUR? BUNCH OF RETARDES!
I open the front door and I see Shane who is soaking wet and her make up is just rolling down on her face Humm She looks like Alice Cooper! I smile
“Come in! Don’t just stand here in the rain!”
“Thanks, I know that I live In the house next door But”
“shhh” I say with my finger on my lips”Come in”
I step back from the doorway to let her in And I go in the bathroom to get a clean towel I hand in the towel and she dries her face and her hair a little bit, wipes out the leaking make-up.
” You want to give me your clothes? I’ll put them in the dryer for you? I’ll give you something to put on And while it will be drying we could talk?”
And she says :” Thanks you’re kind. ”
As I come back from my bedroom with the extra pair of pyjamas She is taking off her clothes Wow! She is totally beautiful, heart pounding beautiful My eyes can’t see something else I’m just standing there and starring at her beautiful body, her curves, her wet skin from the rain, her wet hair, her ***** her entire body She is terribly ***** Like no one else She’s so uniqueI just can’t stop myself I can’t stop looking at her
I finally snap out of it and look at my beautiful ceiling. That could surely need cleaning
” It’s not like you never seen me before!” She says
” Uhhh ” I just can’t put proper words out of my mouth.
She walks towards me and gives me her wet clothes, I take them as fast as I can and rush into the bathroom to put them to dry I look myself in the mirror And I say to my reflection DON’T YOU GO THERE LADY! YOU HAVE ENOUGH TROUBLE AS IT IS! YOU HAVE TO REMEMBER HOW HARD IT WAS FOR YOU TO DO THIS IN THE FIRST PLACE, IF YOU GO THERE AGAIN YOU’LL BE FUCKED!
Shut up! I know all this, but she is so
DON’T GO THERE!
Shut up!
I step out of the bathroom, and I go back to meet her in the living room And she walks towards me still naked. She’s so close to me And my heart is pounding so hard and so fast that I think that I’m gonna have a heart attack
She passes her fingers into my hair and softly kisses me on the lips.
TBC
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i love the story but im have a hard time understanding who the other person is , is it jenny or carmen or someone eles well i still love ur storys there so kool bye allison
I started out totally psyched; the suspense of not knowing who the character was. But now, 5 chapters later, and still not knowing the mystery woman, is pushing me to the tired-of-waiting point.
I dont know how to say it in a nice way, but I am starting to get bored with the story.
MMMMM.. SEXY!!!!!!!!!!!!! (a finger on the nose)
LOVE THE NEW CHARACTER!!!!!!!!!!
I wouldn’t be Carmen, Could be Jenny. Everyone loves a mystery. I do. Loving this. Thanks
I’m enjoying your story, can’t wait until the next installment. I already like this character, should be interesting to see the dynamics between she & Shane.
Hey, guys.. Did you really read previous post? This mysterious woman said “You knew it was me because Jenny told you…”….. Mel! It’s your story! you can do anything to your creature and make any past between she and Shane. Your fic is just my pleasure~